Originally posted by: mandygill
agree arshi, the whole pms scene was a mess, could not connect to it, the soul was not there, it seemed to be rushed and unfinished..in a daily soap its important for the viewers to view it as daily life and not like a haphazard puzzle that is left unfinished by a child when he/she looses patience...the pieces that r left scattered due to bad script/execution should be put together with patience, deep thinking, logically, and up to the standards of this epic, then this whole pre and post pms thing will make sense..u r rt there should have been more focus on the actual pms scene how saras made the move and how she gave in, and then the guilt and depression would make sense..now the way they showed was a total disaster! they both r willingly going hand in hand after brief arousal by touching feet and applying color..and then taking such a bold step..how and when..again bad execution on cvz part!...all of a sudden kumud crying seemed a misfit and calling something she willingly did as sin!...again a bad execution! on the whole it was disastrous and do not know how they will fix the damage! do not want the show i love so much to break like this!...i really hope that the cvz clear the mess!
Lets keep faith in the master story teller SLB himself, and hope we will see the method in this seeming madness
Let it unfold over the next week, and see where this heading, sometimes, things make sense later. But yes, as much as during, the pre PMS also needed to be built up.
In fact it was building up well, there was so much romance and electricity, then a sudden turn and the proposal thing, the mood and sexual tension suddenly gave way to Sanskar and parental approval and social sanction, and then again suddenly PMS.
In fact after the atta, mehendi, jealousy, if that had continued, the mood and excitement was just right for PMS.
So, that mismatch is what is bothering all of us. I hope the story narration, will maintain a continuity
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