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OK i am back with another OS, a random one based on spoilers. U know the drill. LIke and comment if u really like. Give feedback n how i can improve if it is not to ur taste.😳

My previous works:
I am sorry!!
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3580829/os-i-am-sorry

You are not getting away with it!!!
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3546916/you-are-not-getting-away-with-it


Kumud was sitting on the terrace away from all the excitement going on down in the hall. The Desai have accepted to celebrate the wedding of Aarti the daughter of VIdya Chattur's best friend But she was not happy not because of the wedding. She was angry( well angry was not really the right adjective) since the arrival of that new guest, Juhi. First Kumud was shocked to see a stranger hugging Saras and exclaiming excitedly - Saras! It's been a while. I am so happy to see you!!

She has hugged him, HER Saras and ignored her, HIS Kumud and Mr Saraswatichandra had no problem with that. On the contrary he had smiled to
her. She mused:

- This is the limit. Two days ago he fought with me because of our fathers, sulked with his nose all red and I craved for a smile from him and here he is hugging his friend n smiling too. I thought Sunny was his only friend in Dubai and clearly I was wrong.

She was interrupted in her thoughts by the man who occupies her thought all the time. Her heart skipped a beat seeing him but does he care about it, she asked herself. She was pissed seriously.

- Kumud, is Sunny around?

- I don't know. You ask your other friend.

- Excuse me?

- You have more than one friend na so why don't you
ask HER!

Kumud turned away to walk out but he grabbed her wrist to stop her. And she had to face him.

- Kumud she is just mom's guest. She is her best friend's daughter. I had no idea she was coming here.

- You know wat? Koi fadak nahin parta mujhe. Entertain your guest and let me enjoy the wedding too.

Saras stared at her for some seconds and released her hand and... she had no choice but to leave.

Wedding time

The haveli adorned with lighting and flowers was like a bride itself . While whole Desai family was as happy as the bride's family, rushing here n there to make sure everything is perfect, all enjoying themselves thoroughly, Kumud's heart was just not there. Her jaws were aching by the broad fake smile she has been sporting while her heart was morose. Her eyes were involuntarily searching for him but in vain. Where was this methi ka laddoo? she thought.

He was in the hall, when he felt her behind. Undoubtedly it was she!! He instantly turned around to find her looking ethereal in green and pink. For once he forgot everything.. probably to breath too..Kumud could see him staring at her.

This man always makes her go weak at her knees! Her heart was beating so fast that it may come out anytime. She gave him a small smile and invited him to patch up with her eyes. She gulped as she saw him drew closer, his eyes not leaving her face. She wanted to look away but her mind just plainly refused to give orders to her senses. But before he could reach her, she was right beside him snaking her arm around his arm and exclaiming like an idiot:

- Saras I was looking for you. Wow! Gumaan aunty was right. You look dashing in Indian outfit.

He courteously said thank you and smiled back to her. Kumud saw red but at the same time really hurt and without warning she felt the prick of tears behind her eyelids. To avoid any embarrassment, she excused herself and went away. She needed some fresh air so she went to the terrace where she would not be disturbed

- Why am I so upset seeing him with that girl?

She was furious with herself. She closed her eyes n tried to reason herself that she was being plainly ridiculous but still it hurt to see him with someone else.She took a deep breath and closed her eyes ready to go inside again when... the whispering of her name makes her lifts up her face to stare at the most expressive eyes who always manage to pull her heart strings. 'Kumud', her name has never sounded as beautiful as it sounds through his lips

He was only one step away, scrutinizing her perfect face, his eyes loaded with...love? 'n after seconds which seem like ages, he muttered

- U really look upset for someone who doesn't really care.

She looked at him, realizing that he was referring to her "koi faraq nahinparta", she lowered her eyes and turned away. He drew closer and wounded his arms around her from the back and whispered in her ear

- You look really more beautiful when jealous Miss Kumud Sundari!

She gasped and tried to free herself but he was too strong for her. With his voice loaded with softness he said

- Kumud you brought light to my once dark life. You make me want to dream again and I love you.

His breath just below her ears was creating havoc to her senses. She closed her eyes. His words were music she would want to hear all her life.

- Kumud

- Mmm

He chuckled and brought her to face him and said in fake seriousness. You have been very mean to me and punishment to banta hain.

She looked at him confusedly as he dragged her in a darker corner of the terrace and snaked his arms around her waist and whispered:
- Lets dance.
- But music..

- Who need it??

They moved with the music playing in their head and stopped when Saras cupped her face, bent down and sealed his lips with hers.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm ... hmmm
yeap .. just like that . dancing on the roof in dark n then ☺️
n yeah those twinkle lights .. .. tell me what happened next 😭 ..
i want part two of this OS ..please .😭😭😭


Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ur awesome...really enjoy ur post...what a post yaar !!👏👏superb...cant wait for monday n
then tuesday n then yaar...excitment baadi tuhne...yeh post likhe...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Edited*
dude i really wanted to read sumthng n ths jealousy track..lol n yeyy my wish got complete..
Wow loved Your OS.. Simple sweet n beautifully written.. Aww i really felt bad wen juhi came btn n kumud got senti bt loved d ending.. Keep writing..
Btw wats ur name?
Edited by Anki_KJSG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGeee i tried to edit my post to remove some n=mistakes n everything got spoiled. I ad to do everything again. I'm worn. Pheww plz ignore mistakes if any.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thats sooo beautiful... now u r inspiring me to write too lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sraskumud

hey ur awesome...really enjoy ur post...what a post yaar !!👏👏superb...cant wait for monday n

then tuesday n then yaar...excitment baadi tuhne...yeh post likhe...😆😆



I wud like to comment first on ur post dear. U made me really happy today. I know u always click like on my posts but never commented. Today u did it n it means a lot. Thanks u r awesome not me!
Happy u love my new OS. 😃 n thanks again.
Edited by omshreejaanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anki_KJSG

*Edited*
dude i really wanted to read sumthng n ths jealousy track..lol n yeyy my wish got complete..
Wow loved Your OS.. Simple sweet n beautifully written.. Aww i really felt bad wen juhi came btn n kumud got senti bt loved d ending.. Keep writing..
Btw wats ur name?



Hi! Thanks for reading, liking n commenting.
Well most of my friends call me jaanu on the forum so u can call me that if u want 😳
See u!! *Hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is fab dear. I always enjoy your writing. Always romantic and in line with the characters in the show. Are you as romantic as your work suggest? I am all ears.
5 ⭐️ for you. Keep it up. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

wow thats sooo beautiful... now u r inspiring me to write too lol



Well why don't u write one and share it with us. I am a huge fan of fiction so I'd like to read ur work.
Thanks for reading n commenting of course.
Let me know ok.

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