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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kumud ki kavita.
Kuch shabd kahein, kuch un-kahein...


Yeh ehsaas
Jee lene do
Dil kya kehta hai
sun lene do...

Cham se hui hai baarish
Bheeg lene do
Boondon ki sargam pe
Aaj naach lene do

Dil par di kisine dastak
mehsoos kar lene do
Ankhon ki khuli khidki se
Jhaak lene do

Saari dooriyaan
Ab mitt jaane do
Jasbaaton ke tufaan mein
Aaj beh jaane do


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishana

oh wow awesome post😃



Kumud's peotry is always inspiring! Thanks for the comments! :)
Edited by humeshaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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did u just finish the poem !!!

n like this 😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -B.N.K-


did u just finish the poem !!!

n like this 😕


Yes. Why, anything wrong??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u wrote this or kumud???
anyway its so beautifful👏😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: humeshaa


Yes. Why, anything wrong??



wrong !! .. r u kidding me .. i m dizzy .. how do u guys do that ..

its beautiful 😭 ..totally loved it .. what else can u do .. r u a painter too or singer !!

ur real kumud sundari gunno ki khan 😆😆 .. awesome post dear ji 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bornalee-

u wrote this or kumud???

anyway its so beautifful👏😳


Kumud got me started with her first two lines, the rain scene made me continue and Saras helped end it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yar kya likhti ho tum..mujhbhi tutions dona re baba..hamesha net pe search karke shayari post karna padtha hai🤣

Loved it hun!!!🤗👍🏼👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tum kahan disappear ho jaati ho humesha?😉

Simply beautiful. Samud are bringing out the poet in you. Awesome.

Everyone is feeling the ehsaas today and you put it in words for us.
Edited by Infofan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏, so aptly completed!!

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