The great revelation-today's scene rewritten

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here's how i had expected the scene to play out
--- Kumud and Saras enter inside and VC welcomes them saying the couple are here
--- Kumud and Saras shocked looking at decoration and so many guests
--- Kumud trying to figure out what has happened with her mom and sisters
--- Saras trying to find out from VC and Guman what is happening?
--- VC announces that he wants to announce a great news
---- Saras and Kumud trying to take him inside to tell truth
--- Villagers asking what good news is?
--- Guman tells she will announce if possible this happy news. VC says OK. Saras shocked at his mom's declaration
--- Guman tells she had come for this happy ocassion to fix Kumud and Saras wedding but with regret has to inform that Saras does not want to marry now
---- All shocked, Saras shattered and looks at VC and Kumud. All start whispering. VC asks what she means? Guman says she means what she says her son Saras does not want to marry his daughter Kumud.
---- VC too shocked to react. All villagers start leaving. Kumud crying in Guniyal's arms and runs off inside with Kumari and Kusum. Saras trying to pacify VC and tell him truth but VC too shocked to listen
--- Finally only family remain. Saras arguing with Guman why she had to announce such things in public? Guman says she was only telling truth.
---- VC back to his senses shouts for Kumud to come down to main hall. Kumud is scared what she will answer VC.
---- Saras goes and folds his hands and tells VC its his fault, he should not have written letter to Kumud instead told VC directly. He tried telling but circumstances never allowed him to reveal truth. Saras takes all blame on himself.
--- Dukhba attacks saras saying she can only see LNV in him not his mom saraswati. She curse him he will never be happy and one whom he loves most he will never get this is mothers curse.
--- Kumud comes down. Saras tells VC he is ready for any punishment but not to scold Kumud. VC tells him that he is an outsider and VC does not expect from him any truth but Kumud is his daughter. Saras shattered that VC thinks he is outsider.
---- VC calls Kumud and asks her why she never told him truth? Family is based on trust and his daughter has broken that trust. He asks her why she did not tell atleast her mom? Kumud starts crying guilty. Guniyal bends her head down. VC shocked goes to guniyal- you knew? Guniyal folds her hand asking for sorry. VC looks angry and shattered. VC walks off the house.
--- Its 10pm and VC is not back home. Everyone tensed. Saras sets out to search for VC. In the ruins VC is sitting in tears shattered. Saras finds him and goes to him. Saras folds his hands and asks forgiveness. VC angry says your father cheated my sis i forgave, now you cheated me there is no forgiveness. Saras upset-please he begs. VC gets up and leaves him alone and returns home.
--- Saras upset asks his mom what is his fault? How he can correct himself? Saras spends whole night in runis upset. No one in VC family sleeps. Meanwhile Guman planning to drop a bomb next morning- haveli is hers and they have to vacate house
--- Next morning after puja Guman drops bomb to all-haveli is in her name and she wants to rennovate it. VC and family have to move out. LNV has decided this and sent her to india. Before LNV comes house should be ready. She ask VC to say when they will leave haveli.
---- VC shocked. VC and family pack things and get ready to leave. They are at gate when saras comes inside and ask them where they are going. all crying but do not answer. Saras runs inside to get answers from guman. Guman tells LNV wants this haveli and sent her here.
Future story is all about how saras gets forgiveness from VC and family and returns haveli in their name.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I thought quite similarly to your view... Even I thought Guman will reveal in front of everyone...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm sure this would have been the exact turn of events had Ekta Kapoor made this serial :P
I actually had the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes while reading this! :D well done, I though the same way as well actually. But kudos to the CVs for coming up with something different.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i wanted saras to say yes to d marriage n gumans plan backfired..🤔😔
🤔n after tat guman canuse her plan c : haveli issue 😔

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