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Hey guise ^_^ got an OS for you guise, loving the recent episodes and they've inspired me to write a really short (when I mean really short it is very short) OS. Please do let me know what y'all think.



Gossamer

Soft. That was her skin wasn't it? Soft, petal like, an oasis on that scorching day her lips were bent in a shy smile, her cheeks tickled pink and her almond coloured eyes fringed behind those long lashes, god he loved her eyes, always full off expression always so alive, they were a tell-tale sign to her emotions. They would always cloud her eyes before they took over her limbs and right now he could take a guess as to what they were reflecting. She was wrapped up in pink gossamer, pink had never been his favourite colour but her supple skin did wonders to it. Her hair cascaded itself down her back, endless it seemed as his fingers found her bare back through it and he sighed, the sigh of a man who was content standing there under the 12-o-clock sun if it meant he could hold her like that.

"Kumud" He called out.

"Hmm" She responded, her eyes intent on that collar, her fingers fiddling with his button.

"I won the bet" He stated, proud and clear as his own fingers played with her dori.

"No! You cheated"

"I did not cheat" His voice dropped an octave; his lips finding the corner of face, just near her ear.

"Yes, you did" She breathed, her whisper not heard above his kisses.

"No I did not, I never cheat. Saraswati Chandra can never be a cheater, you know that" His nose skimmed the length of her cheek.

"You didn't?" She asked, suddenly unsure, her brain pausing as her heart took over.

"Ah-uh"

"Okay" She responded quite happy with his lips mapping her face.

"So you're ready?" He asked.

"Hmm?"

He didn't wait for an answer, he knew she was trapped under the spell that normally left them unconscious with desire as their hearts began beating in unison. He beckoned her to look into his eyes and she did, before they became hooded again but her eyes only said one thing.

Yes.

His hands bought her closer, eyes intent on her bow shaped lips as he decreased the distance between them.

"Kumud" Her father called from the haveli.

It was as if the spell had been broken, their lost minds no longer trapped under desire as she nervously glanced at him, his face flushed thinking her father had seen them and her giggles soon filled the summer breeze, laughing into his face before running off to find her father, his hand running through her pink gossamer as she fled away.

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Yeah, its crap.

Been ages since I've written anything to be fair.

Please do give me feedback, I always look forward to comments ^_^

-A

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is a good start. 👏please continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diamond_14

this is a good start. 👏please continue.



thank you ^_^



thanks ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful <3
keep writing more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You casted the spell!!! It was beautifully written and you were right this was wayyy too short but it was awesome nevertheless..

You should write more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its beautiful ..but too short!
continue!! :)
RestlessWriter thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is such an amazing OS!

I loved the way you described the whole scene. Amazingly well written!

Please do keep writing more.. 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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You are right. This was SHORT -.-

But but but..You have no idea how happy i was to see an OS by you! :D <3 I really really want you to write more SC stuff Aashi! Again..waiting for your hols to start! This was plain beautiful. b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeah, its crap. - No it isn't
Nice os :-)

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