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aahaaan_rk

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys this is an attempt to write my first OS on SaMud....plz plz let me know how it was or if I should continue or not with the next part as I have decided to write this in two parts...

Main'. main'.kya kumud'..???
he moved to face her'' Ek thank you toh tumse bola nahi jaate and u came here
to say sorry???? He taunted her, while she
could feel the room vibrate with his building tension  

With a slow move he came closer to her "Or
actually let me ask you this are you even sorry for what you did?????"

She was looking down rolling the corner of her dupatta in
her fingers not having the courage to face him

"what'.? you don't
have anything to say now?" "Huh"'he
smirked "I am afraid Ms Kumud Desai you are not'.. In
order to say sorry you need a lot more courage than to say a plain and simpleThank You" shaking
his head he moved away from her...

Kumud was speechless'.. her heart began to quicken in response
to his question and the answer he gave on behalf of her, gathering the itsy
bitsy amount of courage left in her she managed to say "No its..its not like that'.its'. I didn't know
that'."

Didn't know'..? Seriously'''.?? Then what were you thinking
when you sent me into that lake'Revenge??
Revenge that I rejected you without seeing your face or that I saw your
face against your will?? Revenge that I consider relationships as a burden'? That
I consider YOU a Burden'..? " Answer me dammit? He asked in an outrageous tone while coming closer

"Every time I try to talk to you '''. you make me realize
how selfish I am'.you make me realize how much
I have hurt you and your self respect''.how much I have wronged you and your
family'.. Now You tell me Kumud how
selfish are you to think about yourself only???? He demanded

Do you have any freaking idea how much I have suffered after
coming here''.I could have just ignored your demands about coming here and
asking forgiveness from you Bapu for what I did..But I did not '..and you know
why'.? Because'.Because I am selfless'. '.I
know what it takes to build and break a relation and I thought you knew this
too but you'you made me realize today that sometimes Ego can have no bounds
when it comes along with beauty''.
 "Tum khoobsurat ho kumud''..bahut khoobsurat
ho'. Lekin tum utni hi khoobsurti se
agar kisi par bharosa karna bhi seekhlogi toh tumhare liye bahut acha rahega''."
With that he moved away from her again but this time she grabbed his hand impulsively

Wiping away the tears from her cheeks with her other free
hand she said 
 "Jaanti ho maine aap ka dil aaj bahut dukhaya hai''aapke sare
ilzaam bhi mujhe manzoor hain but I have nothing to say you more than a deeply
felt "Sorry" and I hope that you can see it in my eyes this time''. I really
didn't know about your past and its connection to that lake'..and your mo..m's"

Saras cut her in between and said 
 "Shhh'he put a finger on
her lips and said " U think all that I
said just a few moments ago was because you made me relive those painful
memories? Itna hi jaan paayi ho mujhe
kumud? He slowly removed his finger from
her lips and took hold of her shoulders by both his hands'. kumud felt a deep
jolt from her inside when she felt his fingers on her lips and hands on her shoulders

Do you even know why I am angry? He asked in a low voice'.there
was impatience and a hint of temper in his voice...

To be continued on a good response😳

~zaina😃

Edited by aahaaan_rk - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome OS. Please continue 😊

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Priyavishu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice Convo Between Saras and Kumud... Update Soon Yaar...

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zerro

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Posted: 12 years ago

oh god that was SOOO INTENSE ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4 our little vulnerable hearts❤️ and 4 YOUR fans plsss continue.n yes continue SOON😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsome and fabulous
continue soon and do pm me

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harshana1

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Posted: 12 years ago

It felt pretty real. I liked what saras said to kumud good job hope u continue soon. And pm when you do :P

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice os

continue soon and plz pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

continue soon and pm me !!

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SUN_ROCKZZ

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Posted: 12 years ago

I HAVE A REQUEST TO U CAN U CONT THIS STORY AND TURN IT AS SS OR FF PLZZZ I LOVED HOW U HAVE PORTRAYED BOTH LEADS POV HOPE U DID NOT MIND ABOUT MY REQUEST 😊 AND IT WAS REALLY AWESOME 👏 ⭐️

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aussie.priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

this seems like it'll get really good :)

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