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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: -Mith-
Beautiful deary... 👏
Awesum OS...
Would lyk 2 c dis happenin onscreen...
Do continue soon sweetie,
n pm mee everytym u update... 😊

Thanks a lot dear! 😳

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zzoombie

@zzoombie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Zu , i simply loved your story, it was like real happening in front of my eyes. i was so engrossed reading it and didnt realise when hubby entered room and stood behind me trying to figure out what i was upto .
the only complain is that it ended very soon 😲
and next time pls make Saras more gentle on Kumud
if he cant handle lips how will he handle further. 😳 😳

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asph

@asph

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

oh wow..thank you so much for a maha episode..i so wanted to request you to write..and you did..

how do you make it so real..every expression every dialouge so true to the characters..

you write so well i wud have even enjoyed if u had elongated the proposal or the guman scene..

but i guess u have to include in the romance...

ooh and kumud walking behind the bride..and sneak peeking...all so reall...

loved saras thought on biting her lip...i can totally see saras being so intense..when he could hurt her in anger...he would be intense and strong in his love..

oh i really hope they let kumud wear a saree...and her hair open like in the pottery scene...

Thank you for the PM...

Awesomeness again..!!bravo

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: zzoombie
Zu , i simply loved your story, it was like real happening in front of my eyes. i was so engrossed reading it and didnt realise when hubby entered room and stood behind me trying to figure out what i was upto .
the only complain is that it ended very soon 😲
and next time pls make Saras more gentle on Kumud
if he cant handle lips how will he handle further. 😳 😳

Thank you so much dear 😃

You got caught, right?🤣

You want a scene where he can handle further, I have written one before, if you want you can check it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3476225/os-safe-in-his-arms-p75?pn=29

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: asph
oh wow..thank you so much for a maha episode..i so wanted to request you to write..and you did..
how do you make it so real..every expression every dialouge so true to the characters..
you write so well i wud have even enjoyed if u had elongated the proposal or the guman scene..
but i guess u have to include in the romance...

ooh and kumud walking behind the bride..and sneak peeking...all so reall...
loved saras thought on biting her lip...i can totally see saras being so intense..when he could hurt her in anger...he would be intense and strong in his love..

oh i really hope they let kumud wear a saree...and her hair open like in the pottery scene...
Thank you for the PM...
Awesomeness again..!!bravo

Awww, thank you so much dear 🤗

Enjoyed reading your comment, meant a lot to me!

I thought to make it a little longer, but thought about the readers here, people here won't read such lengthy stuff.

I am desperate to see her in a sari, that's why I am making her wear one in my wishful thinking😃

Thanks again, dear😛

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zzoombie

@zzoombie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Thank you so much dear 😃
You got caught, right?🤣

You want a scene where he can handle further, I have written one before, if you want you can check it
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3476225/os-safe-in-his-arms-p75?pn=29

Not caught but i did raise his curosity.
i read the link you send me , really hot and romantic 😳 😳
i love reading every word of it
Tu to Romance ki rani ...nahi re maharani hai 😉
Pls keep drifting us in this dreamworld with your wonderful fiction ...love them ...nahi nahi love you ❤️

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Mrs.Toni Rode Vyas

@-B.N.K-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

yeah i m a lazy thing and when it comes to reading i feel sick.every book in this world reminds me exam. but u guys r changing it . i m loving every single word of this OS was so ''apne '' u know ..

my kamini gumaan 🤗 . her stupid se chal ..which does nothing but bring them closer ...

saras the dobo chandra who takes action when i dont except him to .

it was perfect. like monday epi .. even better ... now i can leave my comment for the creator ------> ZU ( i read leena's reply .. for me u r zu +sasu +ma = zuSma 🤣 ) loved it buddy .. proud of u .. waiting for then HOT one 😳😳😳

Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Wow Kumud in a saree and Saras kneeling n proposing!! Too good to b true!!
Loved it!! Another nice one from u. Wudnt it b great if we cud get some glimpses of this next week. I give 5⭐️

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: zzoombie

Not caught but i did raise his curosity.
i read the link you send me , really hot and romantic 😳 😳
i love reading every word of it
Tu to Romance ki rani ...nahi re maharani hai 😉
Pls keep drifting us in this dreamworld with your wonderful fiction ...love them ...nahi nahi love you ❤️

Thank you so much dear
I'm honoured 😳
Romance ki maharani 😆
Love you more ❤️

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Wow Kumud in a saree and Saras kneeling n proposing!! Too good to b true!!
Loved it!! Another nice one from u. Wudnt it b great if we cud get some glimpses of this next week. I give 5⭐️

Thank you!
I am desperate to see Kumud in a sari for just one occasion at least, would be very nice.
This is not happening in any way, it's not possible at all. Btw this is all my wishful thinking 😆

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