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Posted: 13 years ago
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i also have an idea to end SSBN in a happy mode. in my FF we need to suffer others in two more episodes. It is like that. Now Ayi understood what Rohini is.. Ayi starts to show a bold face to her. but still she is angry with Naina that she belives she stole Sonakshi's love from her. FF goes like this. a few episode before Naina said Daksh's b'day is after 10 days. Lets think it is that situation.
Anjali came with a lot of gifts to Daksh. All abt to celebrate. other side Ayi and Rohin are looking at them. WHen they abt to cut the cake, Supriya arrives. Naina excited and hugs her. she asks where is Sonakshi? Sonakshi comes with a regret face. seeing Naina she cries and pleads for apology. Naina looks at Daksh and he gives the permission. Naina consoles her that "you are my younger sister. how can i hate my sister?" SOnakshi loks at Daksh also and starts to weep but Daksh also consoles her "don't cry, you are my sister also.. so forget abt it.." Naina conitnues "what you did with us we will forget. but if u really regret, you need to apologise to Ayi. because of you she disowned her son even. that sin will affect in your future life.. so go and plead for apology to her." Ayi is in a shocked mood not understanding anything.. Sonakshi goes and tells evrything - just bg music only.. by ending her story telling, Ayi has a tripple shock. and sits on the floor putting the fingers on her open mouth. not only Ayi, all at PH is in shock. after sometimes, ayi gets up and goes to the pooja room.. she weeps there. anjlai goes behind her and puts the hand on her shoulder. Ayi aplogise for mis treating her daughter without knowing the truth. Anjali consoles her "she never hate you as you r the first person who gave her a mother's love." Ayi wipes her tears.. rest of the people at PH stunned.. now they could see Ayi with the dish of the Aarti. she comes crossing the line and do aarti and bless Dakshna.. then she asks to sit Naina on the sofa and gives rice and coconut.. (remember when Lekha came first??).. Naina hugs Ayi with tears.. Daksh feels relaxed.. Ayi leads them to Daksh's room. after that she ask to remove the line. in the evening terrace, Dakshna shares their happiness in getting thie mom-dad.. Ayi is abt to talk with them and comes there & happen to see this.. Daksh comes out of the hug and tells "mein abhi aata hoo.." Naina "kaha jaa rahe ho..?"..
D: tume yaad nahi haai... aaj aayi tumhe bahu ke roop mein sweekar kiya.. to aaj hamara first night hai.. iskeliye muje kuch arrange karna hai.. " [ayi is in shock..]
N: Daksh??
D: kuch mat bolna.. aaj tak meine intezxaar kiya hain na.. aur nahi.. aaj se muje meri biwi chahiye..
Naina smiles and hugs..
N: sure..
Ayi winders.. and tells this to Baba...
Next day onwards Ayi gives chances to Dakshna to spend time together.. at last they send to honeymoon.. and they go to Darjeeling.. then one week dakshna... he keeps his first promise that after mrg they wil go to the train again.. etc..
Then b4 ending SSBN, they show a scene in Dining table.. a tag is written.. "A few months later..." Ayi is servign the food.. Naina looks a bit pale.. Ayi asks.. but she tells she is ok.. naina comes with the tray of tea and it drops and she is abt to fall by faited... Daksh rushes and holds her.. doctor comes and after check up he says.. "congratulations Mr Daksh.. your wife is pragnant.. " Ayi is utmost happiness.. Daksh rushes to Naina.. Ayi comes with sweets and feeds them and her master piece action... whips their lips wth her saree pallu.. then when Dakshna alone.. Daksh with love respect.. smiles at her.. Naina smiles at him for giving her such a wonderful fortune.. they hug.. duet song plays "mehki mehki si khushbo teri.. jaadoo se bhare naina tere.. " "raho mein.." the scenes of Daksh cares for Naina and each satges of the pragnancy is shown.. by ending the song... Naina is in hospital with maternity pain.. Daksh walks here are there. Very tensed.. restless.. All @ Ph and anjali, sonakshi, Supriya etc. also tensed… time goes .. doctor opens the door of labour room. All anxiously look at him.. he tells. "congratulations.. ! its twins.." Daksh and all trill with happiness.. but Daksh is more curious abt his love "naina?"… Dctr: within half an hour she will get conciousness.. she will be Ok.. nohing to worry " . nurse comes with the children. One is boy and other is girl. in the final episode.. its naming ceremony of babies. Babies are in Ayi-Baba's hand. Smile shows on evryone's face. Anjali, Supriya, Sonakshi, Sushanth, lekah etc etc are present. Aku comes with a small gift pack but hesitates to give. Naina insists and she gives.. naina opens the pack and paises her work.. al happy. in btn Dakshna exchange glances. Adharv - the bada bhai… stands proudly near his youger sis and brther. Naina places a kiss on his cheek and she holds him as her own child. Evrybody happy.. the scene zoom out with a happy complete family.. thanks!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow ! Neetu i really liked ur FF!👍🏼👏 superb! imapatient dakshu and naina becoming a mom in the end! that was so cute... and most importantly TWINS!!!a boy and a girl! i really liked that idea...😳 sooo sweeet!!! 😊 Now it is obvious that CVs are rushing things up but even if they make everything brief i hope they end this serial in a high note and most importantly with dakshna...they started the show with them, they should definitely end it with them... AND TWINS!!! i love that idea!! its better than giving just a boy to the family! hehe😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW WOW WOW AND JUST WOW neetu!!👏👏...Excellent...u made me damn happy😃

I was smiling a lot alot reading ur FF.😛😛..seriously if CV's could show something like this..it would be wonderful ending to a beautiful daily soap

And I loved the line where daksh says to psycho u are my sister too...🤣🤣

Thanks for such cute FF..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

WOW WOW WOW AND JUST WOW neetu!!👏👏...Excellent...u made me damn happy😃


I was smiling a lot alot reading ur FF.😛😛..seriously if CV's could show something like this..it would be wonderful ending to a beautiful daily soap

And I loved the line where daksh says to psycho u are my sister too...🤣🤣

Thanks for such cute FF..



Ditto ditto ...
Love U Neetu for this😛... its a beautiful and perfect end with Dakshna Twins... that too a girl and a boy...
And I too Loved the line where dakshu says to pyscho u are my sister too 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Thank u dear for this beautiful FF dear 🤗🤗🤗🤗 Loved it till infinity 🤗🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Neetu very nice but only twins ,cannot we have quadruplets . There are 4 elders aayi-baba,kaka-kaki. Har ek ke haathon me ek de denge sambalne ke liye.Then our dakshna will be ready for the next release .Kyunki naina ko toh bohut saare bacche chahiye.What say guys?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LM, Lucky, Rupali and all, thanks a lot dears.. i am very happy that u liked it.. and Sitakshi, yar.. kya idea hai..!! 4 babies ek ssath.. !! par Naina itna healthy nahi hai na.. ha ha ha.. hey just kidding..

All,

Thinking of it.. a new idea is lit.. instead of Dakshna ka conversation at terrac. i am changing it a little bit.. After ayi blessed them everybody happy.. Dakshna are led to Daksh's room. then Daksh is disappeared from PH... in the evenig Naina is searching for him. all at Ph is happy and they did not notice Daksh is missing from these chat. naina is concerned and she calls him up.. Daksh tells.. "mein aa raha hoo.. " Naina is relaxed. by the dinner time he reaches. all sit on table for dinner.. Daksh is so busy in having it.. after a while he gets up : mera ho gaya.. muje kuch urgent kaam hai..
A: yeh chintu ko bhi na.. hamesha kaam kaam.. [he goes to upstairs]
Naina takes his dish and cleans up.. after their dinner Naina is indulged in saaf safayi ka kaam along with Ayi.. after completing it she reaches Dakshna's room..

She opens the door and gets in.. she is surprised that darkness inside the room.. then she hears somebody closes the door... Naina goes to the switch board and turn on.. light comes
N: wow..!!!! she is double surprised..
the room is decorated very well.. with folwers, candles.. the flower chain is hanging around the bed.. on the bed off-white bed sheet and on it rose petals are spreaded... her eyes fills with happiness.. smiles appears on her lips with a shy.. Naina looks around and finds Daksh..
N: DaKSH.. yeh sab.. to isi liye tum kuch der pehale gayab hai..
D: Anh.. kaisa laga mera surprise?
N: bohot bohot sundar.. (hugs him) par yeh..
Daksh puts his finger on her lips.. NaINA chup ho jaati hai..
D in husky voice..:aaj hamara first night hai.. {naina sharamti hai..}
baki imagine karo..

[we always saw Naina arranges surprises for others. let Daksh also to arrange a surprise for her.. vaise bhi he always wants to give her the best rite?...]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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4 babies at once?? LOL!😆😆 God bless Naina! but its not a bad idea...
Loved ur other version neetu... i always love imapatient dakshu! he is so cute !!😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ntsindia

Congratulations on your FF. I did not find Rohini anywhere. What has happened to her ? Did Sanket come back or Rohini ran away to her mother's house with Atharva ? Perhaps, she sensed what was coming and ran before getting shamed.

Holi is coming on February 19 and I wonder if the story will last till then, in any case we can imagine what will happen in the future, and make our own stories in our dreams.

Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: walquest2000

@ntsindia

Congratulations on your FF. I did not find Rohini anywhere. What has happened to her ? Did Sanket come back or Rohini ran away to her mother's house with Atharva ? Perhaps, she sensed what was coming and ran before getting shamed.

Holi is coming on February 19 and I wonder if the story will last till then, in any case we can imagine what will happen in the future, and make our own stories in our dreams.

Keep up the good work.

Thanks a lot... 😉😛
yes Mr Walter.. :) actually i was purposefully ignoring her. coz, in real SSBN she got most chance to come on screen - sometimes to insult Ayi, or sometimes with Sonakshi and now with her plans... So I really don't want to see her in the remaining weeks. In my FF, when I imagine the scenes she is here are there with Sanket [after making her +ve]. 😊 is it.. i also wish the end will be a good one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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twins ... twins ...? perfect idea hai😍 ... junior kp, nd junior naina both😛... nd ditto 4 lucky nd rupu, sab ke liye... esp 4 d tum meri bhi behen ho line 2 psycho😆... neetu di awesme ff lik always👍🏼... love u 4 dis...




ps : sry reply late hai😊

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