FF :dakshna reunion,versn 2.0 - Page 2

I'l hav to hear the chocolate wrapper one

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Yaar Aish kitna senti hai... Tu ne to Bahut hi touchy touchy wala scene lekha hai yaar... Aakhoon se aason tapak gaye 😭 Par kya karo dakshu aur Naina ka itna dard bardash nahi hota hai mujshe...
And that poetry too good... what's next stored for us... Waiting for the next part... 😍
I loved the way u have expressed all the emotions... I could imagine the whole scene while reading...
Loved it... Loved it... 👏

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

Oh Sweetaish! Of all the ppl i never thought YOU would make me cry!!!😭

but man! that was such a wonderful story!!!👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

yaar, ur thinking is correct, unfortunately

[don mind d poetry pls...i jus had 2 get t out f my systm...felt so bad 4 naina bechari.😆]

yaar the poetry was so touching, says wat naina's feeling at the moment perfectly and remined of a song broken strings by James Morrison. Your FF was beautiful written and I could imagine it all but i'l be honest it made me cry but not in a really bad way, didn't ruin my mood. If CV's are showing this track they should show this scene and glad I read it. plus it ended well and as Shakespeare said 'All's well that end's well'. Mybe u should put this up a a separate post but provide a link on DakshNa FF, so u give them the choice. maybe write on where Naina is convncing Daksh that there is no way he could have betrayed and asks for time to get the truth out.

Originally posted by: rechus

U did gud job...Thank u soo much...