*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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hangok

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Do you want to kill me,
what a beginning, oww so sweet ..
he really loves her i mean he doesnt need to say it , all what he does shows it, and im happy to read that rachna knows it...the sindoor scene just amazing👏

what, have i read it right, is this gunjan, i have to say that im really shocked with the court beginning..
im suprised to see a strong gunjan , but im happy,
have just little thought about gayatri, she will surely try something,

is there really such a man, i mean he understand her so well and rachna, she knows him so well, she know that he is just pretendingm so that she would not be sad...

ohhh nooo pihu, what have you done, not just kabir even i wait here for some romance for RABIR, and you with your girls night...

pleaseee bring some romance in the next part..

great work..

thanks for pm

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Selina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Amazing update
Can't wait 4 next chapter
Thanks 4 pm

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Good stuff Nivi!

The sindoor scene😳 totally swoon-worthy IMO!

I had expected that you would have Gunjan give a good account of herself, but wow she came out swinging from the first question and didn't let up until it was over ( and still was rearing to go)😆 I loved it!

And now we are getting to the good stuff. I'm looking forward to this celebratory phase for RaBir, and can't wait to see how you portray it all.

Of course Gayatri's comeuppance and revelation of the mystery benefactor are on my wish list as well!

Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the PM

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Sorry for late dear Nivi

The sindoor scene woes mind blowing I also like the way rachna wake Kabir

well done dear.

the sindoor part look like Kabir ready to show the world that rachna his wife and after what happend in the court there no more point to hide at.

The Court part woes great. I like Gunjan in this part. thanks god it over

but it sound like Gayatri have now plan coming soon

Haha poor Kabeer when finely every thing has over and He want to have

same private time with his wife he need to wait

I hope for him that is night will over fast ;D

Great update I enjoy at like always. thank you

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

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Nivi ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome..
Love it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thank you dear for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Chit15
Nice chapter
Good Court drama finished
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Thank you! Glad you liked it! 😊

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Nivi ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: hangok
Do you want to kill me,
what a beginning, oww so sweet ..
he really loves her i mean he doesnt need to say it , all what he does shows it, and im happy to read that rachna knows it...the sindoor scene just amazing👏

what, have i read it right, is this gunjan, i have to say that im really shocked with the court beginning..
im suprised to see a strong gunjan , but im happy,
have just little thought about gayatri, she will surely try something,

is there really such a man, i mean he understand her so well and rachna, she knows him so well, she know that he is just pretendingm so that she would not be sad...

ohhh nooo pihu, what have you done, not just kabir even i wait here for some romance for RABIR, and you with your girls night...
pleaseee bring some romance in the next part..
great work..
thanks for pm

Of course I don't want to kill you! I love reading your comments and views too much to do that. Lol

Glad you liked the beginning...I thought we needed a sweet, memorable scene like that between husband and wife.

Gunjan is certainly a strong character...I couldn't change that from the show. And Gayatri will always add some necessary drama to the story. 😛

Is there really such a man? That is indeed the golden question. As of now I can only wish, but if I ever find such a man I'll let you know 😉

Pihu and Sneha becoming kabab mein haddi 😆

And I know you request Rabir romance every time, but I always disappoint you. Sorry! I try to give some cute romantic scenes because I feel like full on passionate romance just doesn't fit into the story right now unless it's a dream sequence. But how many dreams can our poor Kabir keep having? 😆😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Princess.S786
Amazing update
Can't wait 4 next chapter
Thanks 4 pm

Thanks Selina! Hope everything is well with you. I know that we haven't chatted in a while but I've been pretty busy with college. Once my exams are over in a few weeks I will have more time to chat with you.😊

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Nivi ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Good stuff Nivi!

The sindoor scene😳 totally swoon-worthy IMO!

I had expected that you would have Gunjan give a good account of herself, but wow she came out swinging from the first question and didn't let up until it was over ( and still was rearing to go)😆 I loved it!

And now we are getting to the good stuff. I'm looking forward to this celebratory phase for RaBir, and can't wait to see how you portray it all.

Of course Gayatri's comeuppance and revelation of the mystery benefactor are on my wish list as well!

Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the PM

Thanks Kelly! Glad you liked the sindoor scene...I felt like it was something that just fit with the moment. Rachna needed to realize that Kabir is always there for her no matter what and there was really no better way to show that.

Well Gunjan is a strong-headed, very verbal girl who is not afraid to speak up, regardless of whether it's against her family or for it.

Looking forward to writing the next updates too! And rest assured, Gayatri and mystery man will most certainly make a return! 😊