*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 23

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Awesome FF!!!

Don't watch the show but ur story is awesome!!!!

Originally posted by: saravathi

Hi Nivi,

I read till chap 11

I couldn't resist myself commenting before I turn to next chap

I must say that diary part was extremely good

Superb,I just loved it

and Chap-8,9,10 are good too

You wrote their pain n missing so good.

Karan description the way u wrote comparing him with Kabir even that I liked it,I may sound crazy but ur story made me so

Ok I am ending my comments now since have to catch up with Chap 12

Originally posted by: saravathi

Now chap 12 is again so sweet

misunderstandings cleared

How can Kabir be sooo sweet

wow love him here

Originally posted by: saravathi

Chap 13

Glad that Karan is innocent

Hate that lady,here too she s playing in my darling(Rachna) life

Kabir really superb here,a very energetic person lol

Like Karan too,He is cute

But still i doubt Karan is not that innocent

Originally posted by: saravathi

Oh only till 13

oh I have to wait now

Thanks for all the pms

n for amazing story

n sorry for commenting late