ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37 - Page 2

This is not fair,I was so badly waiting fr ur ff n to comment first

Originally posted by: saravathi

This is not fair,I was so badly waiting fr ur ff n to comment first

on that...Hate my work

First when I saw ur pm,I didn't bliv its abt ur ff,I read the subject twice n in no second my excitement reached the peak

I didn't even get this excitement on my ff...

cumn to ur prologue

wen r u updating 2 hrs paseed

ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF

First chapter

Rachana residence

Amidst the beauty and the magnificence of the full moon light rachana was there sitting in her room alone with her diary and her pen along with her shattered dreams and a broken little heart .she was recalling all her lovely moments with Rajeev -her hockey coach whom she admire and has a huge crush .Suddenly flashback of all the insult that Rajeev did to him in the coffee shop regarding the proposal came in front of her eyes and the little smile which was there for a while faded away .she watched the full moon and then wrote in her diary ,What a stupid gal I am ! I was thinking that Rajeev sir even loved me but that's not true .how stupid I was that lived in such fantasies .it would have been better if I did not write that letter at all. Atleast the pride and respect I saw in his eyes for me would have been there .But I ruined it all .how I m gonna face rajeev sir now I don't know. Tears fell from her eyes

I did best I could to win his heart

He unleashed the pain and it starts

What shud I do I want to die

I don't think I cant look in his eyes

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Hockey field

Rajeev also was in no better position. he kept hitting the ball with it hockey stick to make a goal but all that was there was failure .his focus was gone and all the events that happened between both of them kept running in front of him. He felt like he has lost his soul his heart ached and to make matters worse he cant do anything to correct it as he himself has chosen this path.

Rajeev residence

He went to his home and all that he could focus on was the teary face of rachana .he lost his cool and tears fell down from his eyes and he fell down on his knees and shouted , I am sorry rachana I m really really sorry . He took out his diary and started writing I wish I could I also say that I love u too rachana but I cant .I cant spoil our teacher student relationship .no one will be able to accept it neither ur parents nor this society and I know although u love me but u cant see ur parents sad .i cant see anybody seeing our pure relation with questioning eyes and for ur betterment the thing that is important for u is ur career .i cant let u spoil ur career for an infatuation . I know u have that fire in u and I will not let cool down that fire just for ur teenager emotions .

Thinking about rachana Rajeev did not know when his eyes was closed and he fell asleep

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After the full moon night and the the emotional turmoil of both broken souls rachna was not able to go college for few days as she was in an inner turmoil about how to face Rajeev sir .she was neither able to move on nor she want to face him.

Rachna residence

I cant face him but even I cant be so irresponsible too and selfish to leave the college like this .i have to move on although this doesn't seem possible to me but have no other option. I cant run away from my fears and have to face him .

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Rajeev residence

In these days Rajeev was getting restless to see a glimpse of rachana but was trying to control his growing emotions..many a times he picked his phone to call her to know just one thing whether rachana is alright or not.but again he comes into reality that he is rachana teacher and have no right to do this to her.

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Svc college

Atlast on the 4^th day Rajeev saw rachana and for him this was a breadth of fresh air to the lifeless soul .While Rajeev was continuously looking at her,rachana come in front of Rajeev

Rachana:gud morning sir

Rajeev(coming back into his senses and in his khadoos mood)rachana what is this ?u were on leave for three days without any leave application .this behaviour will not be tolerated especially during hockey practice

Rachana:I m sorry sir I was not well this will not happen again

Although Rajeev wanted to to ask her but controlled himself thinking not to give rachana any sign of concern

Rajeev :well I hope so .ok then take ur postion and start playing . I don't want to waste even a single minute now get back to field and no excuses

Rachana (in her thoughts ) I cant play in front of rajiv sir why god

Although rachana was playing but she was not the same rachana the star hockey player her charm was gone and the reason was very obvious in front of Rajeev.

Rajeev (in his thoughts)rachana is not able to get out from the trauma I have to talk to her .but then also I have talked to her many a times but she is not able to understand and I also cant expect her to move on so easily too.

Rajeev involve in his thoughts dismissed the hockey practice don't knowing what to do.

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Rachana residence

rachana in her thoughts

I don't know why I am not able to play the game I loved once .Is this beacause of Rajeev sir but I cant make him a reason as this game was my passion but now I feel that don't want to continue it futher.

Oh God! I m not able to get what I have to do .please help me.please show me the path

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Rajeev house in night (WITH HIS DIARY)

Rachana ever since I laid eyes on you it was certain that I will fall for you.ur simplicity is simply enough for anyone to fall for u .my heart stays radiant when I remember ur multitudes of qualities and virtues which makes u different from the whole world .Sometimes I wish I take u far away from this world ,take u away from all the pain ,protect you and love u ever but see the cycle and irony of life rachana ,I am giving u pain and hurting u myself which hurts me the most but cant do nothing .Now the last way to bring u out of this is to leave benaras . only then u will be able to move on otherwise my face will always remind u of the hurt that I have given u .Although u are mature enough but right now u are not able to handle the inner turmoil going on inside u but I will not let u do this blunder with yourself .

I have decided to leave benaras for ur betterment and to control my growing emotions too.

BYE RACHANA AND LOVE U FOREVER

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Svc college

Rajeev asked gunjan to give a note to rachana tomorrow so that he can go easily without meeting rachana but fate has decided something else for rajna .

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RACHNA RESIDENCE

RACHNA (in night):gunjan please give me the history book I need it for my assignment .

Since gunjan was in kitchen she asked rachna to take it out from her bag.rachana went to mayan room and take out the book but got the letter written by rajeev. She opened it and started reading

DEAR RACHANA

I ALWAYS FELT PROUD TO HAVE U AS MY STUDENT AS I ALWAYS SAW THE FIRE IN U TO ACHIEVE SOMETHING THAT WAS WITHIN IN ME TOO . I M GOING RACHANA AS I THINK MY JOURNEY IN BENARAS HAS BEEN OVER NOW AND BEST WISHES FOR YOUR CAREER AHEAD AND MAY U REACH THE TOP AS U DESERVE.

BYE RACHANA AND HAAN MAKE NO EXCUSES FOR DOING HARD WORK IN UR FUTURE LIFE

The letter dropped from rachana hand and she was hell shocked

PRECAP-RAJEEV WAS PACKING HIS BAGS AND WENT TO OPEN THE DOOR AAND SAW RACHANA STANDING THERE IN NIGHT

phew.. thats all for the first chapter .i dont know whether u all will like it or not .a big sorry for all the rabirians as kabir is not yet introduced but a huge apology for that and one more information that there will be more of rajeev and rachana in the initial three chaps(A BIG SORRY FOR THAT) and also how life changes for rachana .SORRY FOR ALL THE ERRORS AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES .criticism is wholly welcomed as i always mentioned that i m an amateur and also was having butterflies in my stomach while posting this😆

A SPECIAL THANKS TO SARANYA AS SHE WAS THE ONE WHO INSPIRED ME TO WRITE AND SARANYA PLEASE MARKS MY MISTAKES

NOTE

FOR ALL RABIR FANS I WILL ASK U TO HAVE A LITTLE PATIENCE AS I HAVE ONLY RABIR IN MY MIND BUT JUST WANNA SHOW MY OPINION ON RAJEEV ALSO ON HOW IT COULD BE EVOLVED

Chap-2 page 5

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

wen r u updating 2 hrs paseed

I was not liking Rajiv in sslk previously bcoz he ignored Rachna but Your ff gave a good justification, Wish it happened so,It really made me remember that coffee day scene n how would Rachna cry writing diary,neatly written

Originally posted by: saravathi

cumn to ur prologue

Characterisation was brilliant,

Rachna and Rajiv the same,I think u will dream more on Rajiv when u write onhim

Kabir flirt wow he would be apt fr t

n u brought in Vihaan that too on a positive character,

already I am excited fr ur ff,in this my Vihaan too der I am going crazy,n ya I will give genuine comments

cant wait fr first chap..

n thanks for considering my words seriously n writing one

awesome update
i was totally lost into the ff..
damn cool!! i mean i want to say more but can't ale to write..
mindblowing, awesome, speechless, fantastic..


ps: so saravathi your real name is saranya..nice name...

😳

Originally posted by: awesome-raji

awesome update
i was totally lost into the ff..
damn cool!! i mean i want to say more but can't ale to write..
mindblowing, awesome, speechless, fantastic..


ps: so saravathi your real name is saranya..nice name...