ITS ALL ABOUT RACHANA FF chap 10 ON PAGE 37

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: saravathi
excited will comment after reading

u become first wow will wait for ur response eagerly😳

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Saranya

@saravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

😉 Read it but don't want to comment now

going to read again

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: saravathi
😉 Read it but don't want to comment now
going to read again

take your time saranya but just tell if its ok or bad i m confused😕

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Saranya

@saravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

uhhh you making me like Rajiv now,

best line was that Khadoos Rajiv is back n innocent smile of her came in front of his face,

And Rachna's request to live these last moments

was superb

I must say u described the Kiss scene in matured way of writing,now I am not missing Kabir more since Rajna gives superb feel,N urs is not dragging its long update but that is what I wish to read,

N wondering What's happening in precap???

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Saranya

@saravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

take your time saranya but just tell if its ok or bad i m confused😕

you read it now you urself will enjoy ur story,Its really good am not saying for name sake,your 2nd chap is far better than first one you made it all clear not letting readers to get confused

I you really want me to give a negative comment,I can only say stop killing the readers

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Saranya

@saravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I think anju n oishi will like this chap more

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: saravathi

you read it now you urself will enjoy ur story,Its really good am not saying for name sake,your 2nd chap is far better than first one you made it all clear not letting readers to get confused
I you really want me to give a negative comment,I can only say stop killing the readers

oh thanks u so much for ur comments saranya when i write i always get so nervous and always think that it may be not so good but u always encourage me so much thanks for the motivation 😳

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: saravathi
uhhh you making me like Rajiv now,
best line was that Khadoos Rajiv is back n innocent smile of her came in front of his face,
And Rachna's request to live these last moments
was superb
I must say u described the Kiss scene in matured way of writing,now I am not missing Kabir more since Rajna gives superb feel,N urs is not dragging its long update but that is what I wish to read,
N wondering What's happening in precap???

oh wow the way u make me hate rajeev for sometime in your ff and i am able to make u like rajeev i think i have completed a first step in writing and thanks a lot and ya its a long update have to bring kabir too and ya precap again is open whether he will stay or not will be disclosed in next chap .

thanks a lot saranya ur comments mean a lot to me thanks😳

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: saravathi
I think anju n oishi will like this chap more

waiting for their comments 😳

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

First, thank you for the PM, I hadn't had the chance to reply to your first chapter and now you've given us a second!

Wow, Wow, Wow... I am so enjoying reading this FF. You should never have any doubts on your writing ability, you are doing a wonderful job! Can't wait to get home from the office to re-read at my leisure, it really is that enjoyable!😛

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