Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Awww...

Very nyc👏
Kabir or rajeev ki takrar...
Luv it yaar...
Sorry missed the last part... read it now along the 9th one...
Superb...
Freakin awesome updates...
Luv your ff a lot😛
Thnx 4 the pm..

Thanks dear.I was waiting fr ur comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap-10
Rajiv was packing all his clothes and Rachna came from behind
Rachna:where are you leaving this early
Rajiv:I am going back to my home Rachna
Rachna: what why suddenly
Rajiv:Don't ask me anything Rachna,I really don't like to stay here
Rachna: Say me first Rajiv, did Kabir say you anything
Rajiv:Its so obvious that he don't like me staying in his house then how can I stay here
Rachna:what he told you Rajiv
Rajiv: yesterday he held my collar n challangd me that he will separate us Rachna,he is only acting to you like he supports our marriage but he is actually planning to separate us..you too like him,I don't want to come between you both,I am leaving home
Rachna:why should I be here after you left,I am coming with you
Rajiv went and hugged her,Rachna contolled her tears and hugged him back
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Rachna ran to her room and cried heavily laying onbed.Rachna remembered all his moments with Kabir
Why you doing this Kabir,I know u r so nice you cant do anything wrong for me but why you not liking Rajiv,why you not understanding my love,I really don't want to our friendship to end Kabir.
Rajiv:Rachna can I help u in packing
Rachna:no,I am done almost,I will come soon
Rajiv:lets leave before Kabir comes back from office
Rachna was packing all her clothes when she packed the dresses Kabir bought her she was completely broke down.She thought of writing him a letter saying goodbye.
She took a paper and pen and wrote as tears dropped on paper
"Why God chose us,why us"
Cant able to write more she crushed the papers and threw it
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Kabir reached home and was shocked seeing Rajiv and Rachna standing with their luggages.seeing Kabir Rajiv put his arms around Rachna and pulled her more close.Kabir stared at Rachna who was more nervous.
Kabir:Rachna where are you going,you should not
He said and pulled her luggages but Rachna stood stubborn
Kabir:Rachna u r my responsibility don't forget that,I said come in
Rajiv:Kabir Rachna is mine,I know to take care of her..you just a passerby in her life
Kabir got angry on his words that he slapped him hard.He went to punch him again but Rachna blocked him.
Kabir and Rachna both of their eyes were growing in anger .
Rachna:Kabir I had some good opinion on u but I lost it,how can you behave like this to Rajiv.
Kabir:but Rachna He is not true to you.I am doing for ur sake pls understand
Rachna:Stop caring for me Kabir,Rajiv is der for me for all that
Goodbye.don't ever try to reach me.Rachna walked down the steps holding Rajiv's hand.Kabir stood still when Rachna's last step was seen,Kabir went mad and he broke the glass door near with his bare hand.Rachna and Rajiv turned back hearing the loud noise.
Rachna was shocked seeing Kabir's hand in blood she ran back to Kabir.
"Rajiv take cotton pls"cried Rachna
Rachna took his hand his blood was dropping on Rachna.Rachna cried heavily and Kabir could not feel any pain now,He was only admiring Rachna.
Kabir:Rachna I am ok
Rachna:butI am not ok
Kabir:calm down
Rachna:seeing u in pain,you want me to calm down
Kabir smiled at Rachna who was busy cleaning his blood.Rajiv was getting irritated seeing them close
Rachna:Is it paining still
Kabir:No am really ok.
Rajiv:Rachna can we start now
Rachna:Rajiv I don't think we should leave Kabir alone here.See he is mad,I. Cant leave him and be worried of him.pls understand
If you wish you can go Rachna said Kabir in a smiling tone
Rachna:You shut up,Pls Rajiv if you feel uncomfortable here you pls go back to your room,I will meet you often,I swear
Rajiv:You think ammad to leave my lover stay with some stranger
Rachna:But Kabir is not a stranger.He needs me now,I promised his dadi I will take care of him..n pls stop this topic
Kabir:Rajiv I am sorry I behaved wrongly with pls you both stay with me
Rachna smiled and Kabir throwed him a wicked smile.
Rajiv's thought:you spoiled all my plan,you will face for this
Kabir's thoughts:Will soon expose ur truth to Rachna
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That night Rachna gave medicines to Kabir and she bid him good night Kabir:You asked me not to care for you but what you doing now
Rachna:sleep ..no questions close your eyes
He closed his eyes and Rachna smiled and turned to leave when Kabir held her hand
Rachna:I said you to sleep
Kabir:Thanks Mrs.Kabir
Rachna placed her hand on her hip and looked at him angrily
Kabir:No No I slept goodnight
Rachna went to her room happily and Rabir slept peacefully
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Posted: 11 years ago
just reading will comment in few minutes
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow what a lovely update although rajiv has a full proof plan but rachana llove for kabir has stopped her from going which she is also totally unaware of ans thinking it as friendship and hope she will soon realize her love for kabir and one thing more kabir have to do nothing because of his pure love for rachana totaaly loved the update
😳😉 hats off and hugs to u such a beautiful update thank u and dont worry for the short update u are putting much effort on ff👏so dont worry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

oh wow what a lovely update although rajiv has a full proof plan but rachana llove for kabir has stopped her from going which she is also totally unaware of ans thinking it as friendship and hope she will soon realize her love for kabir and one thing more kabir have to do nothing because of his pure love for rachana totaaly loved the update

😳😉 hats off and hugs to u such a beautiful update thank u and dont worry for the short update u are putting much effort on ff👏so dont worry

I thought I will miss ur comments since ur busy with exams
but yupiee I am so happy
Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

I thought I will miss ur comments since ur busy with exams
but yupiee I am so happy
Thanks a lot dear

ur welcome dear but today i was hell tired because of some important work so didnt study much but u know what my day never get complete without reading ur update the updae always make my day 👏😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...
Mind-blowing update...
Wohhooo rajeev is superb yaar(thanks 4 it😳)
Luv the rabir...very cute😛
Ufff...hitting on the glass n blood...rachna running 2 him...hayeee so sweet...
Rabir👏superb...
Thnx 4 pm...
Continue soon...
Just one week😭 then...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oww with every part i hate rajiv more...
thank god that rachna doesnt left kabir alone, hope kabir can show rajivs true face to rachna


nice work and thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Wow...

Mind-blowing update...
Wohhooo rajeev is superb yaar(thanks 4 it😳)
Luv the rabir...very cute😛
Ufff...hitting on the glass n blood...rachna running 2 him...hayeee so sweet...
Rabir👏superb...
Thnx 4 pm...
Continue soon...
Just one week😭 then...

But the real end is only after six months..dont worry I won't drag it till that
Thanks for ur comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wauw that was nice
Luke the way the care about each other (Rabir)
Really nice written
I hope that rajeev will be exposed soon
Really nice
Thank you
Update soon

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