Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 11

Originally posted by: hapo

This is my combined comment for both the chapters seriously ur just awesome...

I mean i thought there ll b a cat n rat fight but no dey r frnds wow...

Seriously great writing...

I ll b waiting for ur nxt part...😊

Thanks a lot dear

Chap -6

Rachna was feeling lonely after Kabir has left for office.So she decided to go out and dressed up in one of her new dress Kabir has bought and she left the house.She was first confused where she should go but then She did google map and found out a library near by.She got a taxi and reached it half n hour.
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Rachna was searching for any Indian author book but she could not find any.So she thought to ask for help.Someone next to her was deeply immersed in book Rachna first hesitated to disturb him but she had no other option.
Rachna:Excuse me sir could you please do me a favour
The man turned to her and both were shocked seeing each other.It was Rajiv.
Rajiv:Rachna you
"Rajiv where were you so long" cried Rachna
Rajiv:ssshh This is library.Come lets talk outside
Rajiv put his arms around Rachna and took her out.Rachna who was still crying leaned on his shoulders.
Rachna:Now say.Why did you leave me??
Rajiv:I cant say you Rachna pls dont ask me
Rachna:You spoiled my life Kabir..Not only mine You know how my dad felt for it that day..You spoiled my family name too
Rajiv hit his hand on the wall.Rachna held his hand now
Rachna:I just need the reason please. dont I worth for that too..My whole family talked wrong about u but I strongly supported you .I fought for you against my dad but you
Rajiv:Stop it Rachna pls stop it..Dont Talk about your Dad again pls..He is the one who spoiled our life.
Rachna:What you mean
Rachna dragged his collar now Rajiv faced her eyes with no guilt
Rajiv:Yes he was not happy with our marriage,He said me to move away from you several times But I was stubborn till our day of marriage but before night He came and pleaded me to leave his daughter He said he will die If this marriage happens..What can I do then
Rachna left his collar now in shock she moved back..There were no tears anymore
Rajiv:Rachna I know this will hurt you n thats Why I said dont ask me
Rachna:Paapa cant do that..He loves me
She kept moving back and Rajiv turned his back towards her since he could not watch her crying.Rachna without conscious moved back more n she reached the road.A car was coming in high speed that Rachna failed to notice and it applied sudden brake it had almost hit Rachna that she fell down ,It stopped just an inches away.Rajiv hearing the sound turned back in shock and hurried to Rachna but before him someone form car rushed to her.Rachna stood there still in shock.
Rajiv:Excuse me she is my friend,I will see to her
"She is my wife " Shouted Kabir
Rajiv moved back from them.Kabir took Rachna in arms and moved to the platform and made her sit on the chair nearby
Kabir:Rachna are you Ok..Pls say something..Excuse me some one get water
Rachna:Kabir I am fine..How you in that car
Kabir:I felt something bad gonna happen n I just thought to come our home immediately..Leave that whats happening here
Rachna looked at Rajiv who was standing at back of Kabir
Kabir:Who is he Rachna
Rachna:Rajiv
Kabir immediately took his hand from her and moved back.
Rachna: Rajiv this is Kabir, my good friend
Kabir was not his normal he felt somepart of him lost suddenly but he pretended to smile at them
Kabir:Rajiv!!! Wow gr8 you found him finally
Rajiv: Kabir am sorry, today what happened was all bcoz of me. I should have not met Rachna at all
Kabir:uhh I dunno what to say I think I came in the wrong time,You better carry I am leaving to office
Rachna:Kabir,You can join us
Kabir:No Rachna,I have lots of work you Know my work na..hmm you carry on bye
Rachna felt Kabir behaving strange and Kabir left the place with heavy heart.
Rajiv:You Ok Rachna..Forget about that nothing gonna change now..It seems Kabir is nice you should move on
Rachna:You mean I should forget you and live with Kabir
Rajiv:Yes..Thats good for you too
Rachna:Can you forget me and marry someone else
Rajiv could not answer her Suddenly He went and hugged her like he will never leave her again.Rachna too hugged him back .
Rajiv:Btw Rachna what this new change..You looking so stylish
Rachna smiled and remembered her moments with Kabir and she broke the hug
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Rachna:You came back soon from office??
Kabir:hmm Its almost night Rachna I think you forgot your watch
Rachna:Actually I thought you will be late so I dont want to be alone here
Kabir:Its ok your wish, I have ordered dinner have it and sleep..Good night
Rachna:You dont want to know what made Rajiv leave me
Kabir:If you wish say me
Rachna said the whole story but Kabir was least interested
Rachna:I said you all that my Rajiv wont cheat me
Kabir:Hmm Rajiv I mean Your Rajiv is really good..Can I sleep now
Rachna murmered something and Kabir shouted "What"
Rachna:You didnt note my dress today
Kabir:Pls stop behaving like a kid Rachna I feel sleepy good night
He went and shut his door aloud.Rachna stood there with loads of anger and she too moved to her room angrilly.
Rachna" I hate you, Cant you even say I look good in this,I feel so uncomfortable wearing this but still I wear it for you but How dare you" She said in front of mirror
Kabirs thought " I am afraid I will fall for you Rachna, I dont want that to happen I know I will loose you in the end..Its better I avoid "
Both opened the doors at the same time to check on other.They were surprised seeing other and Rachna started to laugh and Kabir too laughed now
Rachna:Whats wrong with my friend today
Kabir:I am the same Rachna its you who have changed.So how was your day with Rajiv
Rachna:I just talked to him for two mins and left
Kabir:Why
Rachna:I was in bad mood bcoz of my dad..n we too were from a big shock so we were not comfortable in that situation n we just left the place soon as you left
Kabir:So where were you so long
Rachna:hmm Actually I went out today to get something for my new friend
Kabir:Really
Rachna went to her room and came back with a parcel
Rachna:Open na
Kabir opened with all smile.Two shirts were there one black and other white
Rachna:I spoiled your fav shirts so I thought Ok lemme get it
Kabir to himself "I cant believe you spent your time for me..I thought you are late bcoz Of Rajiv..You Know how much this means to me"
Rachna:Kabir where are you
Kabir:Thanks Rachna..It will be my favourite always
Rachna:still someone didnt say how am I looking in this dress
Kabir raised his eyebrows and looked low at her
Rachna raised her hand to beat.
Kabir:Nooo I was kiddding You really the most beautiful girl I ever seen,When I selected it was not so good but now Its really too nice on yoy
Rachna:Kabir enuf I am feeling shy
Kabir:Shy you, I never saw it ..I thought Only girls feel shy how come you?
Rachna:Bad joke
Kabir:Ok time to bed..Go sleep
He pushed her to her room.
Rachna:Good night Kabir
Kabir smiled before she close the door He shouted her name
Rachna:What??
Kabir:You still love Rajiv??
Rachna:What you think
Kabir:hmm I feel you both in love still
Rachna:I never stopped loving him but its different now I dunno why
Kabir:hmm Sleep peacefully n think of it tomo goodnight
He said and left to his room with heavy heart
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rachna's dad was the villain😲

shocking...

so rajeev is also a good guy!!

love the update...

waiting for your next update

Aww poor Rajeev 😭 Can't see Rajeev in pain and something might be broken inside kabira's kabir inside turmoil is cuming out in irritation and And rachan bought kabir shirts oh so sweet lovely update it's awesome thank u so much Saravathi u give a fair screen space to Rajeev also thanks u so much and rachana trying to move on 😳It so lovely 👏A big hug to u 😳

Such a beautiful update that I couldn't stop myself from commenting again😆 U know what the best part today that u just bring together all the emotions together so beautifully😳

Originally posted by: awesome-raji

little busy
will comment soon

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Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Aww poor Rajeev 😭 Can't see Rajeev in pain and something might be broken inside kabira's kabir inside turmoil is cuming out in irritation and And rachan bought kabir shirts oh so sweet lovely update it's awesome thank u so much Saravathi u give a fair screen space to Rajeev also thanks u so much and rachana trying to move on 😳It so lovely 👏A big hug to u 😳

Originally posted by: saravathi

someone is missing Rajiv more I guess

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Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Such a beautiful update that I couldn't stop myself from commenting again😆 U know what the best part today that u just bring together all the emotions together so beautifully

Whether it's inner conflict of kabir and pain of Rajeev being rachana gone away from her and rabir friendship and care towards each other And the lol moment of rabir 😆 U showed it all very gracefully and in Avery mesmerizing way 😊Thanks a lot for such a lovely update Reading it all over again and again

Originally posted by: saravathi

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Thanks dear for commenting, I feel more spl now

n reading again n again ur comments too..lol😉