RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 17

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Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Awesome update..

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Chapter 18:

Kabir and Rachna, both couldn't sleep all night. Rachna got some tears in eyes remembering all memories, all the time she had spend with Kabir. A smile curved on her face and at last she was able to sleep.

...Morning...

As Kabir was awake all night, he only slept for 2 hours and woke up at 6 am

Rachna's alarm rang

Rachna: kya hai.. 6 am pe kyun alarm rakha mein ne... Oh No mein tou bhool hee gayee aaj meri flight hai! 😲

She gets up hurriedly from the bed and rushes to get ready and goes downstairs

Sugandha: Rachna beta tumhara samaan ready hai na?
Rachna: ji aunty
Sugandha: acha chalo breakfast karlo.. Kabir jaldi aao neeche
Kabir: haan maa aaya
Sugandha: arrey tujhay kya huaa?
Kabir: kya? 😕
Sugandha: saari raat theek se soye nahi kya?
Kabir: haan maa woh bas aise hee neend nahi aa rahi thi

Pihu and Mohan came

Mohan: Kabir tu Pihu aur Rachna ko airport drop kardena
Kabir: bhabhi 😲 matlab bhabhi aap bhi jaa rahi hain 😕 kyun?
Pihu: aise hee maa ne bulaya hai 😃 aa jungee jaldi
Kabir: oh no ab tou sab kuch kitna boring hojayega aap bhi ja rahi hain aur Rachna bhi mein yahan akela...
Pihu: ohoo Kabir ji zyada udaas hone ki zaroorat nahi hai kya pata buhat jald aap bhi aa jayen 😉 hai na maan
Sugandha: hmmm 😛 bilkul
Rachna: matlab? 😕
Pihu: matlab kuch nahi tu jaa apna samaan leke aa
Rachna: haan dee

Rachna goes upstairs

Kabir: woh mein bhi help kar deta hun Rachna ki 😃

He also goes up-stairs

Rachna enters her room. As she was finalizing the things and taking her bag she saw Kabir's pic on the side table
Rachna: Kabir 😭 buhat tang kiya tumne mujhe, ab mein jaa rahi hun humesha ke liye.. ab araam se sona 😭 (smiling with tears) aur dekhoo apna khayal rakhna warna bemaar hojaaoge, baarish mein mat bheegna ok

Kabir over hears all her words standing at the door, he also got tears

Kabir started singing...

Mujh se judaa hokar tumhein door jaana hai 😭😊 mujh se juda hokar tumhein door jana hai
Rachna turned and saw him 😭

Pal bhar ki judai phir laut ke aana hai (wiped her tears)
Saathiya sang rahega tera pyaar (Rachna hugs him)
Saathiya rang layega intezaar

Rachna broke the hug and took her bag

Tumse juda hokar mujhay door jaana hai, pal bhar ki judaai phir laut aana hai (Kabir hugged her from back)

Saathiya sung rahe ga tera pyaar
Saathiya rang layega intezaar


(Ok guys zyada emotional hogya 😆)


...At Airport...

Some announcement was going on..

Pihu: Rachna tu yahan ruk mein aatee hun washroom se hokar
Kabir Hold Rachna's hand
Kabir: Rachna apna khayal rakhna aur haan puhanchtay hee mujhay call karna ok 😛
Rachna: Kabir mein tumhein buhat miss karungee 😭
Kabir: mein bhi 😭 chalo ab rona band karo 😛 dekhna buhat jald mein tumhein lene aaunga humesha humesha ke liye 😉😛 smile now
Rachna: tum sach keh rahe ho na 😛
Kabir: koi shak hai 😉
Rachna: No 😛

Pihu came
Pihu: hogya tum log ka romantic scene 😃 Rachna ab chalein 😛
Rachna: haan dee 😛
Pihu: Kabir apna khayal rakhna aur maa ko tang mat karna, samjhe tum! aur agar tumne...
Kabir: haan bhabi samajh gya ab agar flight miss hogayi phir bhi aap mujhe blame dogee hai na
Pihu: oh haan 😆 chalo bye take care!

Kabir hugged Rachna
Kabir:bye 😊
Rachna: bye (with a fade smile)

***********

At Banaras airport...

Dayal: beta bas abhi tumhara wait khatam hojayega Rachna aur Pihu puhanchne waale hain ghar pe 😛
Gunjan and Chaya: wowww Rahul jab Rachna ko pata chalega ke uska special surprise kya hai woh tou khushi se pagal hojayegi
Rahul: lekin puhanche gi kab yeh
Shail: ohooo puhanchne waali hai
Dholu: Kabse yahi keh rahi ho aap..

As the bell rang...
Shail: lagta hai aagayeen 😛

She opens the door with a big smile

Rachna:maaa (hugs her tightly)
She also hugs her

Pihu: maaa mein aap ko buhat miss karti hun
Shail: acha chalo ab andar

As Rachna entered she saw Dayal. She hugged him then daadi and the Chahis and Chachas, then Gunjan and Chaya rushed over her. And than came dholu...

Rachna: Dholu!!! (she picks him up) Mene aapko bohut bohut miss kiya!
Dholu: Mene bhi...!!

Pihu also meets everyone..

Dholu: Pihu dii!!!
Pihu: Dholu! Kese ho aap?
Dholu: Ek dam theek! :D

Chaya: ehem.. Rachna woh dekh kon hai
She turned to look, it was Rahul
Rachna: Rahul!!!! 😛
Rahul: Dr. Rachna aap tou humein bhool hee gayee hai na
Rachna: nahi meine tou sab se zyada tumhein hi miss kiya 😆
Rahul: acha jee lekin ab nahi karogi 😉
Rachna: matlab? 😕
Rahul: matlab ab hum ek saath hongay na humesha ke liye tou phir tum kaisay miss kar saktee ho mujhay 😛
Rachna: haan wo tou hai hospital mein tum saath hee tou hota ho 😆
Chaya: ohooo tum tou bilkul tubelight ban gayee hoo
Pihu: ohoo ab humein rest karne do tum log plzzz 😃
Gunjan: dee ab koi rest nahi hoga ab sirf celebration hogi!
Pihu: kis baat ki? 😕
Gunjan: Rachna aur Rahul ki shaadi ki 🥳 yayyy Chaya: 🥳
Dayal Shail all look happy
Rahul:😳
Rachna and Pihu shocked looking at each other
Rachna: lekin aisay kaise? 😲😭 (crying in heart)
Shail: aise kaise.. ek na ek din tumhein shaadi karni hee hai na!
Rachna: lekin maa...
Shail: mujhay kuch nahi sun na jaake tayaar ho Rahul ke parents raaste mein hain
Pihu: 😲 kya maa lekin sunoo
Shail: meine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi sunna jaao tum log
Chaya,Gunjan: chal chal Rachna 😃 jaldi


Rachna's room

Chaya: Rachna tu yeh waala dress pehan, ye lee
Gunjan: nahi yaar yeh acha nahi hai yeh wala!
Rachna lost in thoughts as Pihu enters..
Pihu: Rachna
Rachna: dee plzzz kuch karoo 😭
Chaya: ohoo dee abhi se Rachna ki shaadi nahi ho rahi aap log abhi se emotional scene kyun bana rahe ho 😆
Pihu: tu ro mat. sab theek hojayegaa mein kuch kartee hun
Rachna: dee agar uske parents aa gaye aur unhone wahin mangni karlee tou 😲
Pihu: Rachna tu mujhe aur daraa rahi hai, ohoo aisa kuch nahi hoga
Gunjan: arrey tou pareshani kya hai jhat mangni pat biya Mrs. Rahul 😉
Rachna (she lost her temper) :shut up Gunjan! 😡 jo mann mein aata hai woh bolte ho kisi ki koi fikar hee nahi kisii ki feelings ki..😡
Gunjan: Rachna kya hua? tum khush nahi kya? 😲
Rachna: mere khush hone ya na hone se kya farak padta hai, har kisi ko apni padi hai 😡😭 (she threw the clothes and went to a corner. Her eyes welled up with tears😭)
Pihu: Rachna control


As her cell rang..

Rachna:hello
Kabir: puhanch gayi tum? mujhe bataya bhi nahi meine kaha tha na call karna 😃
Rachna: woh sorry bhool gayee thi 😭
Kabir: Oh no yeh kya puhanchtay hee mujhay bhool gayee, lekin mein tou nahi bhoola! 😆
Rachna: mein...mein... tumse baad mein baat kartee hun 😭

and cuts the call
Kabir: 😕 issay kya hua lagta hai mood off hai abhi tak 😆 pagal ladki


*******
At Garg's Hall

Dayal: humari taraf se tou rishta pakka samjhein
Shail: haan iss se acha kya hai jab bachay ek doosray ko jaante hain
Rahul's mom: haan Shail jee ap bas Rachna ko bulaye, hum tou aaj hee baat pakki kar lete hain

Rachna came downstairs with a fade smile wearing dark pink saree 😛 she was looking damn gorgeous

Rahul's Mom: Aapki beti buhat khoobsurat hai..
Rahul's dad: haan tou Dayal jee hum rishta pakka smajhein?
Pihu: 😲 (Oh God ab mein kya karun?)
Rachna's heart beat raising faster and faster (😲😭 she looking restlessly towards Pihu)
Rahul: 😳
Rahul's mom:hum tou angoothee bhi laaye hain
Rachna: 😲😭 (she wanna cry loudly)
Rahul's mom: Rachna beta haath aagay karo

***********



Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an emotional update 😭 loved it my heart beating faster 😳 update soon 😳
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Omg such an emotional update. I hopw that she won't marry Rahul.update soon thanks for the pm.pm me if there is an other update
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Oh no...just like I guessed, Shail is getting Rachna married. 😡😭
Hope everything works out and Kabir comes to the rescue...maybe he will come to the Garg's house to surprise Rachna when he realizes that Rachna is upset.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! so so emotional...
Loved it..
Thnx 4 d pm...

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awesome.. LOved it.. Thanks for pm..

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