What We Feel - Sholon Si - GunJeev OS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: honeey95
That was really good i thinkthis is the first gunjeev os iv read and i loved it hope you right more and if you do i WOULD LOVE TO READ THEM !!!!!!! :D

Thanks Honey. 😃

That's because this is the first OS on GunJeev.😆

I will write more as soon as I get an idea.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Hashii
OMG I am NUMB...As Riva said I never knew that someone can describe a dance in this way... Every single word touch my heart...I felt every single word..I could able to imagine every single moment... You are succeeded...

Please write more and more specially about Gunjeev ...as no idea whats Cv are going to do to them ..so at least we can satisfy ourselves reading this...

I have no idea what is OS..But darling this is something I am looking forward..It make me to think more about Gunjeev..

Love you star ..and appreciate your good work..Keep it up baby❤️

Hashii :D.

Thanks.😳

CVs are not living up to what I imagine with Gunjan that's why I wrote this.

And OS is One Shot.😆

Thanks again.❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Momrin
Nice..like it..

Thanks 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: vibz88
Fantastic dear!! Absolutely loved it! You used one of my favourite songs!!! I had a feeling riva s vm would be a part of this OS. Oh but never mind that will be another treat. The dancing was flawlessly described , and so were Rajeev s feelings, hope to see you write more :)

Thanks Vibz.😳

This song is so passionate.😳

I shoullld have righht.😲

Thanks once again.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zenith25
Loved your os...u write beautifully 😊

Thank you😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: gpreeti110
In one word " woww"
you described each move in so detail even we can actually imagine whats going on.. Really enjoyed reading it 👏

Thanks, I am glad you could imagine it.😳

I was trying to imagine the dance movies in my head.😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bidaaifan09
I really enjoyed reading this, hope to read more from you soon on this pair I personally like their coupling regardless of what anyone says they do have chem and it is not over the top hope to read more soon

Thank you.

There are others who like it too, you should check you the GunJeev AT. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Wow!!!! I'm totally impressed!!! 👏 👍🏼

This was fantastic!!! I loved the details mixed with emotions!!!! Very apt song also! 👏

You should definitely write more often! 😃

Thanks Vanny.😃

Will do as soon as I get more ideas.😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: jonelle
OMG Star i freaking love it please continue writhing more OS on them
It's awesome i wish if Gunjeev danced like this yesterday that would have been a treat for us Gunjeev fans 😛

Thanks Jonelle 😃.

Ikr, their dance on Jugni was pretty good too.😃

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