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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sareen family..

Anmol..Dadi..Mahak…

Veena..Adi..Ria..Rahul..Varsha..

Sharma family.

Kailash…Ragini…Rupali..

Ahuja family..

Sameer..kavita …Raksha..

Chapter four..

Sharma house..

Ragini and rupali in their room..di promise me you will be careful crossing the road..pitaji and I wont bear it if something happens to you.we love you so much you know that..rupali..yes ragini I'm sorry I was in a hurry thinking its late..i promise you ,I will be careful and I love you both too..waise ragini that man with sunglasses In the shop isn't he the business tycoon anmol sareen..you remember we read about him in the newspaper..its surprising, he came in our flower shop..these rich guys don't even look at such small place..everything should be posh for them..he did not buy anything right...humein kya lets sleep as tomorrow we have to meet mrs roy..i'm praying everything goes well tomorrow.ragini…yes goodnight di..

Ragini coming back on what happened In the flower shop..in her thoughts,rupali di guess was right he was anmol sareen.the billionaire..his attitude and rudeness did hurt her ..how he said ,I don't see anything of my likes here..ragini felt insulted at that moment..our shop is small but we deliver the goods.. I'm dusky color but that did not give him the right to say such things "not in my likes"..,I know what kind of girl he loves beautiful face and chic..he was In the news one and a half yr ago...i hope I don't meet him again.only money and beautiful life not any feeling for us simple people..a tear escaped her eyes..

Sareen residence.

The party over it was completely calm but a storm in anmol's mind and heart..he was restless not able to sleep..throwing the blanket with force and it went directly on the floor..he got out of bed..pacing his room damn wat's happening to me..talking to himself concentrate on something else anmol…he took the remote switch on the big plasma screen in his room and put on a DVD to watch..sitting on the couch, he tried to watch the movie and keeping the volume low..a full 10 minutes, he watched the movie and next he was back to a flower shop …hearing only her name ragini..it was like music to his ears..he even says her name softly ragini….wat the why I'm saying her name..with anger, he switched off the DVD and tv screen.threw the remote away saying i'm going crazy.one look at her this is complete nonsense..keep cool and don't be weak..by the way I wont meet her again so relax ..

Suddenly he hears a voice..kya hua anmol.whom are you trying to fool?..anmol..who are you?..smiling I'm your subconscious…I know your heart beat made a skip seeing her …she is beautiful right and you cant forget her face..may be its called love at first sight…anmol..you are wrong completely..with sarcasm this does not exist and I'm not in love with her..she means nothing to me and I wont meet her again..his subconscious..its more like convincing yourself anmol but deep in your heart and mind she has already taken a place..anmol..thats rubbish and I'm not letting anyone have a place in my heart not even her..subconscious of anmol..well we will see anmol who wins at the end..your heart full of love for her or your bitter past..anmol..a bit frustrated go away and looking around there was no one in the room only him.gosh I'm really getting mad and its her fault… taking a deep breath ,he lay down on the couch and with great difficulty he slept there till morning..

Next morning..

As usual mahak and his dadi came in his room but got a shock as anmol was not in bed..mahak..badee dadi chacha has left without meeting us..his dadi looking at the mess , blanket down on the floor when her eyes fell on anmol sleeping on the couch..mahak..badee dadi..shh don't talk loudly let your chacha sleep..mahak in a low voice but why chacha sleeping there ..anmol's dadi picked up the blanket and put it back on the bed..while mahak has gone close to the couch as if in wonder looking at anmol sleeping on the couch..anmol sensed a presence and opened his eyes and met mahak gaze …he smiled at her..good morning baby..mahak..badee dadi chaha is awake..chacha why you did not sleep in bed and your blanket was down on the floor.did you fight with someone?..dadi laughing mahak who will your chacha fight with he is alone here In his room..anmol..if I could tell you dadi, I was fighting with my own conscious or subconscious whatever it is..anmol no my angel I was watching movie so slept here..dadi..coming close to him kissing him on his forehead,you must have slept late with the party downstairs..go on bed and get some more sleep..anmol..no dadi its quite late ,I have a meeting in a few hours..i will get my shower and get ready..dadi..theek hein I will get your breakfast ready..come mahak its time you go to school..mahak hugging anmol..bye chacha ..anmol..bye baby I love you..alone again in his room,get a grip anmol only thing that interest you is your work..to himself yes my work and keeping this in mind he went to take his shower..

Sharma house..

Ragini all smile pitaji give us your blessing as today we are going to meet mrs roy ..if we get this contract for a big wedding to make all their bouquets and flower decorations it will be a good opportunity for us to get more recognized..as you know di and I will always give our best..kailash..yes I know my daughters has the best qualities in them ,so devoted and hard worker..my blessing to you both..mahan..mera ashirwaad bhi..they greeted him and says thank you ..rupali..chalein ragini...kailash.. my daughters are so sweet and goodhearted …today they are so happy..may be getting to do flower decorations for a big wedding..i just pray their dreams don't shatter..

Anmol company..

Anmol got busy with his meeting and it was nearly 1pm..back in his office he called sameer..wat's up?.want a break..sameer..wow anmol wants a break from work..anmol..dont pull my legs I'm in no mood...same place in a few minutes ..sameer..fine I was going to call you anyways ,I have so much to talk with you..meet you there at the restaurant..

Few minutes later seated at their usual place..anmol what you had to say to me so much...sameer really anmol I had such a restless night could not sleep well..anmol taking out his sunglasses his eyes a bit red ...sameer..wait don't tell me you too did not slept well last night..anmol…how you know this..your eyes and you look so tired..remember there was a party lots of noise so could not sleep well..sameer..anmol you tell this to mahak and I'm not a 5 years old kid..anmol sighing you know what you should have been in the police force or investigation not businessman..sameer laughing watching anmol's expression..the waiter brought their drinks..anmol thanks we will order later..sameer we have all the time long discussion going on...the waiter smiled leaving them to continue their convo…

At the entrance ragini..di this is the same restaurant mrs roy told us right..rupali..haan my god this is so luxurious..someone coming to meet them..excuse me what you both doing here looking at their simple outfits..both in salwar-kameez..ragini..jee we have a rendez-vous with mrs roy ..she told us to meet her here..calling a waiter..lead these two girls to the reserved table of mrs roy..both feeling awkward as they are not used to such atmosphere..rupali.that manager what he thought we are here to steal ..how he looked at us?..ragini..di rahene do ..this is rich people place so they will have doubts on simple people like us..rupali..wat's the time?..ragini.. she must be coming as she told us by 1.30pm she will here.. its nearly1.30pm..di do you have the papers..taking out the papers from her bag ,both engrossed in their convo about how they will get a big profit and may be other contract like this if mrs roy is satisfied with their work…

Anmol looking for the waiter to get their order when his eyes fell on ragini..sameer looking in the same direction as anmol got same shock seeing rupali..both sisters were in a happy mood smiling as for them it was a big day today..time as if has stopped for anmol and sameer as they were completely mesmerized by their sweet innocent smiling faces..they were a few feet away from the ones who has given them sleepless night..

Anmol state of mind at that moment looking at ragini smiling face..

Is chehere nein mujhe raat baar tarpaya hein.

Ajnabee ho mere liye phir kyun tumhein dekh kar

mere dil ki dhadkan barne lagta hein..

ek beete pal bahut zakhm diye hein iss dil ko

phir kyun tumhein dekh kar mere iss zakhmi dil ko sukoon milta hein..

Your face has made me very restless last night..

You are a stranger to me but why looking at you my heart beat grows faster..

My heart still bleeds from the hurt of that past

But why looking at you I feel peace in my injured heart..

Sameer state of mind looking at rupali..

Tumhein phir ek baar dekhne ki chahat thi

Aaj phir lagta hein mere taqdeer mujh pe meherbaan hein..

Tumhein dekh kar phir woh haseen dhadkan mehsoos ho raha hein..

I had a wish to see you once again..

Seems my luck is with me.

Looking at you I'm feeling that beautiful emotions again in my heart..

Anmol one look at ragini is completely disturbed and don't want to be weak..

Sameer same as anmol..a new feeling for him on seeing rupali..

A coincidence or destiny they met the ones who gave them sleepless night..

Will ragini-rupali get the wedding contract for flowers?..

Will continue in next chapter..

Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
update Saveeta.👏👏👏

Loved the sisters sweet talk before sleep.😃❤️👍🏼So Rupali and Ragini know about Anmol Sareen😊.But her perception about Anmol is wrong😔,and sad Ragini too misunderstood him 😔and even had tears.😭soon they'll understand Anmol.😊

My most favorite scene of this update,❤️
The party over it was completely calm but a storm in anmol's mind and heart..he was restless not able to sleep.😆.throwing the blanket with force and it went directly on the floor.😆.he got out of bed..pacing his room damn wat's happening to me.😊.talking to himself concentrate on something else anmol…he took the remote switch on the big plasma screen in his room and put on a DVD to watch..sitting on the couch, he tried to watch the movie and keeping the volume low..a full 10 minutes, he watched the movie and next he was back to a flower shop 😉…hearing only her name ragini.😍.it was like music to his ears😍..he even says her name softly ragini…❤️😍.wat the why I'm saying her name..with anger, he switched off the DVD and tv screen.threw the remote away saying i'm going crazy.😆one look at her this is complete nonsense..keep cool and don't be weak..by the way I wont meet her again so relax ..😆
I just loved it so much.👏👏👏Just visualizing angry Anmol was like a visual treat for me.😍😍So sweet he even said her name Ragini .❤️❤️❤️

And the conversations between Anmol and his subconscious mind was so well written Saveeta👏👏👏, and those words were completely TRUE.👍🏼deep in your heart and mind she has already taken a place..❤️But so sad as Anmol could not forget his bitter past and sad to see his present state.😭

Mahak & Dadi scene was so lovely😃,this kid wondering why her chacha sleeping in the couch😆.Just loved this one,❤️😃anmol sensed a presence and opened his eyes and met mahak gaze …he smiled at her😃..good morning baby..mahak..badee dadi chaha is awake..chacha why you did not sleep in bed and your blanket was down on the floordid you fight with someone?.😆.dadi laughing mahak who will your chacha fight with he is alone here In his room..anmol..if I could tell you dadi, I was fighting with my own conscious or subconscious whatever it is😆😆😆.So wonderful Saveeta.👏👏👏

R & R taking blessings from their father and Mahan uncle for their successful business future👍🏼 ,so wonderful.👏

WOW Atlast Anmol wanted a break from work😉,all Ragini's effect.😆And loved how Sameer caught Anmol red eye(red handed).😆And this one,anmol taking out his sunglasses his eyes a bit red ...sameer..wait don't tell me you too did not slept well last night..😃anmol…how you know this..your eyes and you look so tired..remember there was a party lots of noise so could not sleep well.😛.sameer..anmol you tell this to mahak and I'm not a 5 years old kid😆..anmol sighing you know what you should have been in the police force or investigation not businessman.😆.sameer laughing watching anmol's expression. 😃 was so good and funny👏😆.You write so well Saveeta,I am so happy.👏👏😃

And wow what a coincidence R & R at the same restaurant for their flower business contract😃 all taqdeer ka khel😃.And these girls how awkward they felt to be here in such a big restaurant so sad.😔

And here it is ,our heroes eyes fell on their sweethearts 😍and both were mesmerized by their sweet innocent smiling faces.😍😍😍

WOW Saveeta I was AWE reading these lines,😍😍😍

Is chehere nein mujhe raat baar tarpaya hein.
Ajnabee ho mere liye phir kyun tumhein dekh kar
mere dil ki dhadkan barne lagta hein..
ek beete pal bahut zakhm diye hein iss dil ko
phir kyun tumhein dekh kar mere iss zakhmi dil ko sukoon milta hein..
Your face has made me very restless last night..
You are a stranger to me but why looking at you my heart beat grows faster..
My heart still bleeds from the hurt of that past
But why looking at you I feel peace in my injured heart..
Sameer state of mind looking at rupali..
Tumhein phir ek baar dekhne ki chahat thi
Aaj phir lagta hein mere taqdeer mujh pe meherbaan hein..
Tumhein dekh kar phir woh haseen dhadkan mehsoos ho raha hein..
I had a wish to see you once again..
Seems my luck is with me.
Looking at you I'm feeling that beautiful emotions again in my heart..

WOW Saveeta,your Shayari was so good 👏and you are as expert in this too 👏and thank you for the english translation.🤗I am very very proud of you my friend.🤗🤗🤗

The story is moving so fast ,i just









Edited by krithikas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
wow... it's wonderful part...😊 👍🏼 Anmol met's Ragini...😍
i love the bond between two sister's rupali and ragini...

sameer's heart has skip..😉. rupali has done some jadoo for sameer...😉

Mahak called not only anmol but also sameer... soo sweet... just like tammy...


shanthi dii this pic is too cool... 😊
awww... angini's first meet... i was visualizing it...😍

ragini..can I help you with a smile on her face?.hearing the voice anmol turned around removing his sunglasses yes I need and could not utter a word..their eyes met..he was in awe over her simplicity and beauty..in his thoughts really beautiful..if innocence had a face it will be your face.. a feeling he thought long dead came back as his heart made a skip..it was complete silence and anmol could only hear his heart beat..gazing at her with an expression on his face like I have never seen such natural beauty before..it was very disturbing for him these emotions. wat's happening to me?..it was a mixed emotions

it's beautiful...
ohh... poor anmol.. his is having a pain full past...😔
i am sure.. ragini's jadoo will work out...😉
keep going...👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
saveeta, really nice update, cant wait to see what happns next,as usual you have me spell bound, thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@krithika...great detailed take on the update..👍🏼
lol seems you have been laughing reading anmol bedroom scene..fighting with his subconscious.i was same once i pen it down i was laughing visualising anmol at that moment..😆
as for mahak she was as if in wonderland her chacha sleeping on couch..😆too cute this child..😊
next sameer caught anmol redhanded as you said once he took out his sunglasses..these two they dont miss anything about each other..just watch anmol pulling sameer legs in next update..you will have a good laugh..😊
as for ragini-rupali they know anmol as he is always in news being the business tycoon. .ragini a bit hurt by anmol's reaction and a misunderstanding ..lets see later wat happens..
glad you have loved these scenes... it made you have a smile and a good laugh also.a little lighthearted scenes to show anmol's dilemma..😊
thanks for loving the shayari..tried to write as per their present situation both mesmerised by two strangers with innocent beautiful faces..poor guys both had sleepless night because of these two sisters who are unaware of all this... one happy to have seen rupali again and anmol in awe too but his past not letting him accept his feelings yet.
thanks for these lovely comments krithika..its so good to read that the effort is appreciated..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW... nice part... so for the 2nd time anmol seeing ragini...😊
Rupali and Ragini talking abt Anmol... you have write that part beautiful...😊
i like this part very much..😉
he took the remote switch on the big plasma screen in his room and put on a DVD to watch..sitting on the couch, he tried to watch the movie and keeping the volume low..a full 10 minutes, he watched the movie and next he was back to a flower shop …hearing only her name ragini..it was like music to his ears..he even says her name softly ragini….wat the why I'm saying her name..with anger, he switched off the DVD and tv screen.threw the remote away saying i'm going crazy.one look at her this is complete nonsense..keep cool and don't be weak..by the way I wont meet her again so relax ..
i was just visualizing...😍

awww... mahak is a sweet girl..❤️
mahak..badee dadi chaha is awake..chacha why you did not sleep in bed and your blanket was down on the floor.did you fight with someone?.lol...😆

Tyhank you for the english translation of Shayari it was beautiful.. 👏 🤗
continue it soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@zee..thank you so much for comments..🤗
glad you have loved both parts and visualising the scenes esp anmol angry mood..😊
it would have been a treat watching apu doing this scene throwing the remote or pacing his room..😳
guess he has not yet talked to her properly she is haunting his mind..😆..
lets see if anmol accept this pyaar ka ehsaas or not..
will unfold his past in next updates..
do keep reading..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice part .. Saveeta you are amazing !!!
You have a knack to keep the audiences stuck to their seats with your story

Loved Anmol's anger and throwing the remote his heart his mind are toggling a lot !! 👏👏

On the other side Ragini seems to be a little annoyed by the attitude of this billionaire, who the hell is he.. why does he show off his style so much and did'nt like anything in our store which has so much of love..

Sameer is cute he and Anmol both had sleepless night just to land up seeing these two women Rupali and Ragini who came face to face at the restaurant !!

So nice Saveeta.. You have made us love this new story even more 👏👏👏👏

Please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it !! 👏👏👏
I loved the subconscious mind of ANmol pricking him !! 😃.. This man is totally getting annoyed with his heart and his mind giving way to a beautiful lady whom he saw in the flowershop...

Ragini on teh otherhand think who is this man when Rupali tells him that he is Anmol Sareen, but Ragini still annoyed that he came to their shop and so much arrogance that he never liked anything in heir shop when people always find something to get a smile back on their faces when they enter RR shop...

The Lunch On was a good scene, where Sameer was already so lost in thinking abt Rupali whole night that he did'nt get hs share of sleep, while Anmol was even better that he throw his bed and slept on teh couch watching a DVD and then fell asleep on teh couch..

To both their surprises they saw the two woemn who disturbed their sleep 🤣

Great Yaar I enjoyed the whole part..

Now Anmol's past will be interesting I always enjoy when Apu's past digs in his character its creeps some annoyance in him !!😆😆😆

Here is ANmol who has slept for 7 years on teh couch so it was'nt difficult to get his picture...


And Ragini's smile bothering him 😍

Great dear continue soon 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu..thank you so much for comment..😊
i'm glad you loving pyaar ka ehsaas and esp anmol angry mood.😊
anmol angry with himself to only think of a sweet innocent face in a flower shop and whereas ragini angry with mr anmol sareen the bussiness tycoon..😊
they met again in the restaurant..anmol saying i wont meet her again and ragini i hope i dont meet him..😆
sameer another case he so wished to meet rupali..here he was face to face with her..😊
wat will happen in the restaurant with these four ..will update in next chapter..
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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