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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

very sweet & cute update 😳
all the scenes written beautifuly ❤️
my favorite lines '' She had to control the blushing so she mentally noted to get books on "How to stop blushing". Hopefully, someone had written a book on that!'' ...
me too hope & there should be a book 😳 😆
the way ragini dodge mr ranvir 😆
ragini good going 👍🏼 poor ranvir 😆
good too see sadhna back 😃
great job deeps ⭐️ 👏 keep it up friend 👍🏼
i think i should search new words to praise your writing skill ...you are excellent ⭐️ 👏
thanks alot deepa ❤️

Edited by -SaHir- - 14 years ago

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krithika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

Wonderfulupdate Deepa,👏I was totally blushing reading your update.☺️Continue the next update soon.⭐️

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Naheeda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Very Good

Can't Wait for the next part

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Naheeda

@Naheeda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: sihame
🤣🤣🤣 The first part was Fabulousss i wished he would have made her more crazy by entering the bathroom 🤣 But whatever this is Fantabulouss jst loved it and i love Ranvir"s and Ragini's caracter U should work with our Dear RS on Bidaai 2

Yeah Deepa you should

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Priyaanj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

Wow deepa very very very nice part...Ragvir scenes were Chooo nice...😊

i liked ragini and sadhana's talks too...very well scripted 👏...

i agree with sihame...u should work with RS to give us such cute scenes... 😃

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Monica

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

okkk Deepuu hu r u dear ? longg time .

okk 1st of all a bigg bigg APOLOGY frm my side for my so late comment on ur FF . I m extremly extremly Sooryy jaan tht I got soo soo late but wht 2 do I was veryy veryy buzyyy wid my collg n exams n all stuff n Still is but 2dy becozz next 2 days r holidays So decided 2 comment on ur FF . I hope u will forgive me for my crazyy mistake .

okk now abt ur FF . OMGG Dear I m SPEECHLESS , u r such a gd writter n a god gifted writter seriouslyy I loveddd loveddd each n every chap . n my gdness ranvir is a Sweetheart yaar . hu mych Ragini is throwing tantrums but dis guy hav guts 2 bear all tht just becozz he loves ragini soo much . awww 2 sweet n ragini 2 is in almost lovee wid ranvir .

aww ragvir r so cuteee dear . n their convo is just 2 sweet , funny at d same time . loveddd it . Plzzz continue soon . n once again my hearty apology for my delay . lovvv u