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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
really mindblowing shanti. the scene is so vivid . and so romantic, hope bidaii 2 comes & they steal your ideas. thanks rozy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
@shanti..that was one beautiful romantic take on angini..😊
anmol work out playing squash and ragini admiring her dashing husband..
the surprising bit its ragini in the mood to go for a drive..wat follows after is definitely so catchy..
as you said rain and romance you did gave us a good dose..
well described scenes..the atmosphere.rain..sweet melodious song in BG..dance..romance of angini..just mesmerising...😍
wat's more beautiful is the aura of the love of angini when they are alone and close to each other..you can feel the passion/intensity of their love for each other..
it was lovely..romantic and of course it did captured the interest.keep it up and give us such treat more..👏👏👏..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
OMG OMG OMG Shanti dii it is just unbeleivble...... How romantic dii. Thank you Thank you thank you thank you diiiiiiii. It is such a fascinating OS.I just want to see such a scene fullto angini scene in bidaai 2. It is just the bestesttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt OS. YOu are simply the best.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Shanti dii, How romantic dii You have done a splendid job, I am simply adoring your OS like anything. I went to a dream world of angini. Dii plz plz jaldi ek aur OS likkna - the candlelight dinner walal scene. I just jumping up and down just with the thought...............


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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
@ Shanti.. great part... it was diffrent... and well writen... and i enjoyed a lot.. keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

aww dear awesoem i imagined sab kuch lovely lovely hai re

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Shanti, rain and romance loved it. thanks 👏🤗
Thanks to Sp, we did not get to see Anmol romancing his wife for real but we can at least imagine such things, thanks to awesome FFs writers like you.😍😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Hey all thanks a lot for appreciating that rain and romance scene ..
Indeed we should have gotten such beautiful scenes in bidaaii, but nevertheless can always hope for it with his jodi again 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@shanti05, Amazing truly amazing rain romance scene..
I was closing my eyes and visualizng it once I read the whole scene.I was imagining Anmol playing squash practice and then Ragini coming there and asking him that we could go for a drive..😍
The dance she did with him and then finally the way he lifted her so roamantic.. How do you come with such brilliant romantic ideas !!👏

And the funny part so there is a candle light dinner scene coming next 😉

Really Starplus and DKP should see these scenes and make the level of Anmol and Ragini's romance reach its next level for season two ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have a small scene i hope you like it

A friends Sangeet night is coming up.Its sometime in the evening. Anmol and Ragini are invited and they need to get ready. I thought of a scene where Ragini struggling to wear her payal and Anmol helping her out, Nothing romantic just some cute teasing and blushing and having put each other in the spot.


Ragini will be busy getting ready as usual, Anmol would have already gotten ready he is all ready and looking really handsome wearing brown shervani with a deep neck and beautiful work done on that and a cream color pyjama.

Anmol came down to get some stuff since he had to just drop it off in the office since its on the way to the sangeet ceremony. He goes to the living room and gets the files , and feels his wrist and realizes that his watch is missing, he would have forgotten his watch which he usually wears so he comes to the room to fetch it. It would be placed on the dressing table but in the hurry he would have forgotten. With the watch Ragini's payal was also placed and when Anmol picks up the watch her light payals hook get stuck to the watch. He keeps looking at himself in the mirror and distracted thinking abt something just wears his watch. He then feels a tickle on his wrist and sees that Ragini's payal is stuck
on his watch.. He slowly and carefully removes it..


Ragini rushing in from the bathroom after getting ready and she looks around for her payal
"Yeah mainay Payal; kaha rak dee" she wonders look on the bed..


Anmol who has it in his hand since it was with the watch he was admiring it before Ragini came and is abt to call out to her, But she is busy searching and is worried and murmuring and scolding Guddi since she had asked her to keep it in her room the other day and tells how careless Guddi is😆

Anmol goes towards Ragini and grabs her hand and she turns around as she turns around her long silk hair falls on Anmol's face , he slowly removes it to clear her vision and looks at her.. He keeps gazing at her face she looks beautiful her skin is glowing and the light from the room gives more to her face.
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She looks stunning with the make up and lipstick suiting her saree ( a green / red saree with gold work) and matching jewelery

He then gets back to his senses as she is looking still for her payal ...

Anmol tells her "Ragini relax "and shows her the payal and she smiles back" Yeah aapko Kaha miley ?"
Anmol tells her" Ragini yeah meray watch kay saat tha !"


And he holds her arms and makes her sit on the side stool and she is wondering whats happening she says "par lekin" and he tells her shhhhh!"


He bends down on his knees sits and lifts her foot up and keeps it on his knees and lifts her saree a little to see her bare foot . Her nail polish matches her saree and her toes are beautiful.

Anmol takes out on of the payal and starts to put it for her looking into her eyes which are feeling a little uneasy as his gaze melts her easily, but then she smiles and he also gives a short grin

Then he lifts the other foot up and puts the other payal and put that foot down .

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Ragini gets up and looks at anmol and thanks him with a big smile, and says " Mujhey pata nahi tha meray payal aap kay paas they !" " aglibaar mai aap hi say pooch loongi idhar udar doondnay kay badley !!" and smiles broadly at Anmol and walks out with the chan chan chan noise which feels like music to Anmol's ears.

and she walks out as Anmol comes back to his senses and talks to himself" lekin Manay tho nahi rakha tha apnay paas who tho !!" and he smiles realizing she teased him and went !! and he gives himself a knock and smiles with his prominent dimples !!

So both are basically getting the best opportunity to tease each other 😉


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