FF(Angini) Last Part of 7 yrs gap, 16Jan on pg 15

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Wow Rehana U kill me with this !!

I was in full grins you totally bring the gap so well of these years we yearned for !!

The expressions made me smile and imagine the scene !!

beautiful !! and very well described ..
I liked this pace and flow of their connection here !!👏

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anizor

@anizor

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

awsome rehana, now we know where alekh got the habbit of calling anmol tammy ke pappa, really enjoyed it,please continue soon.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

rehana amazing part loved anmol he is sooooooooooooooo cute cont soon

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Awesome update Rehana!👏👏👏👏 Loved reading it😊...Anmol looks Cute being mesmerized by Ragini's beauty - on the inside & the outside, her simplicity, he Love for her family & her concern for the one's close to her heart!😳👏😊 Love the way Anmol is falling in Love with Ragini n can't think about anything but her😳😳...Love the intensity with which he looks at her!😍...the bit about Ragini being hesitant n scared to meet Anmol's intense gaze has been well described👍🏼...glad Anmol managed to get her to laugh😳...Alekh was his cute n innocent self😊😉...Ragini playing mother to Alekh sounded really sweet!🤗 Do update soon😳...really wanna know what happens next!!😃

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Hayeeeeeeee Rehna aap to mahan ho ji, aap ne aapki bete ke pechele zindagi ke bare mai itna masttttttttttt description diya hai mai to totally fida hu jaanu 👏. Yaar i can just imagine apu's lovely smile and his innocent looks. Haila mai to gaye kaam se😳😳😳😳

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

it was very beautiful rehana really enjoyed it and loved how u connected all the dots

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

@rehana.. i will repeat it just loving the flow of the story...👍🏼

its really captures the interest ..

anmol mesmerised by the scene in alekh's room ..ragini feeding him with her own hands like a kid and the realisation of anmol why he fell in love with ragini..

another reason for him to love ragini more is when he saw her feeding khushi..so well described scene and the thoughts of anmol about ragini really touched the heart..how much love he would like to shower on her ...

the kitchen scene scary and made me smile too..scary as alekh could have got hurt badly with the sharp knife but his saviour was there anmol.. i was smiling the way you described both guys facial expression on ragini's strict order not to touch a knife...love the concern of ragini when he got hurt...unconciously it seems her heart is opening for anmol...

the transition to the 2 yrs and how this relationship is developing gradually into a more concrete one..the concern of ragini foranmol..her smile..not being able to meet his intense gaze ...her shyness etc prove something too is happenning to her with anmol around...

end anmol wishful thinking that this "concern" end up into love for him from ragini...

beautifully written and again thank you for such treat as its this we have missing all along in angini's story..

please do continue and keep the great job...👏👏👏

Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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Rehana Kazi

@Rehana86

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Sorry guys, I had to change the three years leap into two years because my next update requires it 😳 ..... so leap was only two years in part 6, NOT three years....hope i made sense 🤔