@rehana.. i will repeat it just loving the flow of the story...👍🏼
its really captures the interest ..
anmol mesmerised by the scene in alekh's room ..ragini feeding him with her own hands like a kid and the realisation of anmol why he fell in love with ragini..
another reason for him to love ragini more is when he saw her feeding khushi..so well described scene and the thoughts of anmol about ragini really touched the heart..how much love he would like to shower on her ...
the kitchen scene scary and made me smile too..scary as alekh could have got hurt badly with the sharp knife but his saviour was there anmol.. i was smiling the way you described both guys facial expression on ragini's strict order not to touch a knife...love the concern of ragini when he got hurt...unconciously it seems her heart is opening for anmol...
the transition to the 2 yrs and how this relationship is developing gradually into a more concrete one..the concern of ragini foranmol..her smile..not being able to meet his intense gaze ...her shyness etc prove something too is happenning to her with anmol around...
end anmol wishful thinking that this "concern" end up into love for him from ragini...
beautifully written and again thank you for such treat as its this we have missing all along in angini's story..
please do continue and keep the great job...👏👏👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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