i will die without you...small FF.angini...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is my first attempt in writing a FF.hope you will like it if not criticism is welcome.i wont mind at all...😊
so here it goes..

7 yrs ago after so much emotional moments of nearly parting ways anmol/ragini got married a second time…anmol darling daughter has some helpful hands in it to get her parents reunited as she could not bear to see them separate…

After that began a happy journey of angini..same goes for alekhshi .life was of total bliss..

yrs went by and today its their 10th wedding anniversary…a big event in the rajvansh house as both bros and their wives will celebrate their wedding anniversary… all this planned by none other tashi and vasu..

yes tammy who is now nearly 18yrs old and khushi a few months older than her..the family has extended by now as a yr after their marriage ragini gave birth to their pyar ki nishani a baby boy whom they named ARAV rajvansh…yes they wanted to have the AR letter in their baby's name…as for alekhshi they named theirs SHAURYA rajvansh..a perfect family and very happy one..the girls dot on their bros and tammy was still her papa's angel and arav a complete mama's boy..

the girls wanted it to be a grand affair and look after every little matter so as everything gets as they planned..decoration.flowers..lights..menu etc..of course the main priority they wanted their parents to look the best for this special occasion..

8 pm guests started to arrive at the rajvansh house..vasu/inder..the sharma's welcome all the guests …anmol and alekh too were already in the main hall to be with the guests.suddenly his eyes looked up the staircase and he was just lost in the beauty of his ragini..she was looking so gorgeous In the turquoise blue saree gifted by anmol ..the matching accessories with her saree which enhanced the beauty of ragini more.he could not take his eyes off her and its tammy who brought him back to reality ..

The party was going on well ..next came the wish of both girls their parents on the dance floor..a beautiful romantic song playing and this brought both in FB as it the same song they rehearsed for the dance competition yrs back."tumhi dekho nah tumhara houn mein"…dancing both were so lost in each other and did not even know when the song was over.they just heard the clapping and this somehow made them a bit embarrassed..tammy looking at them had tears in her eyes happy ones as she was always in awe of her parents love /devotion for each other..yrs went by but their love for each other was more intense and passionate..

It was time for the surprised gifts of the girls for their parents and vasu helped them in this..yes it was a trip to some exotic island …at first angini esp ragini did not want to leave arav…vasu and tammy after so much of coaxing succeed in making ragini accept to go.still she was all worried about leaving all of them but vasu assured her that she and tashi will take care of arav /shaurya..B ack in their room that night anmol was watching ragini doing the packing as they had to take the flight at 8am..he already sense it that ragini was not that eager to go..he went by her side and take her into his arms and said"ragini sirf dus din ki toh baat hein" aur waise mein apne khoobsurat biwi ke saath akele mein kuch waqt beetanaa chahata houn"so please ragini giving her that cute smile of his..thats ragini's weak point everytime anmol says that "please" she just give in and says "yes" to anmol..

Morning it was all busy in the RH house..ragini on her usual self giving advice to the girls and to take good care of their bros etc..ragini hugging arav and telling him mama will be back soon and to be good with her sis and grandma…anmol too was a bit emotional now to leave tammy/arav..while hugging tammy/arav he got teary eyed…ragini's heart melts everytime she sees the love anmol showers on their children..all were ready to leave for airport but as anmol had to leave some documents at the office he asked alekshi and vasu/kids to go first and him/ragini will join them soon..a few mins later anmol is done with the office work gets in the car for the airport..he took ragini's hand in his looking at her with so much love when suddenly only a deafening sound of a crash and could only hear anmol saying raginiii with such force and it was a complete silence..

to be continued...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Saveeta yaar aap ne to muje ek alag he duniya mai leke gaye. Hayeeeeeeee they will have a baby boy😍. The love between angini is so obvious even to the kids. Angini❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Saveeta wo precap to OMG what will happen to my angini😕 Plz jaldi update dena.....

You are super cool. Very well done, kya mast likka hai aap ne. I really miss angini😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was cute savee..Do continue !! 😳
So, so, so??? Is Anmol injured? The one sequence which I sooooo badly wanted to see in Bidaai?
Maybe I can read it here then !! Hehehehehe 😆

Haan..Par zyaada injure math karna, ok ???? 😆
Btw, Tammy 18 yrs? Haaiii..AnGini phir tho budde ho gaye..😆

Do update sooooooooon. Waiting. 😳 *anxiously* 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks a lot Saveeta .. Wow Tammy grown and Arav!! nice name
But Anmol and Ragini are still young and rocking

Please contin7ue soon


Wow i can imagine what hapens next !!
Ragini's famous dialogue 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks a lot for liking it.😊
will post in a few mins the ending..
lol no angini are still young at heart. much more romantic..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the ending.tried to do somethig different and mostly for my hero anmol..😊

In a few mins all the family were at the hospital except the children as vasu asked sakshi to take them home....both anmol /ragini were in the operation theater..

Few hrs later anmol was brought out of the OPT..he had some bruises here and there and his left arm in plaster after the surgery..he was in a semi conscious state but still asking for ragini..no one had a reply for him as ragini was still under observation and not out of the operation theater..due to the anesthesia effect anmol fell asleep and next morning vasu was by his side..the first thing he asked her how is ragini…vasu not looking directly at him just tells him to not worry as ragini is fine but this is anmol and he already got it something wrong..he immeadiately got out of bed and was already at the door..vasu tried to stop him but no chance anmol was already in the corridor to look after his ragini..he met with alekh..mamaji.inder in the corridor and all of them perplexed how to tell this bad news to him..he went straight to alekh and asked him bayya ragini kahan hein..alekh was dumbfounded and al lin tears wat to say to anmol…anmol asked him again bayya ragini kahan hein…just then the doc arrives and not losing time he tells the doctor I'm anmol rajvansh and my wife ragini how is she?.

On much insistence the doc took anmol accompanied by alekh in his cabin ..a few mins later anmol seems his world crashing down with wat the doc has told him..ragini his ragini was in coma…all went black in front of his eyes and next he was on his hospital bed..waking up anmol was so restless and his brain not working at all and he could only feel his tears on his cheeks…few moments later he just got up and asked for alekh .bayya mujhe ghar janaa hein abhi issi waqt..alekh knew it was useless to make anmol seethe reason so agreed to take him home…arriving home tammy rushed to him and hugged him all in tears….next came arav he too in tears…tammy his daughter always had a soothing effect on him and in full control of his emotion he asked both his children to be brave …its testing time for them and nothing will happen to their mom…

Anmol went to his room close the door the void he could feel in there made him break down emotionally..suddenly he gets back to his senses and went by the window and looks up in the sky..anmol vehemently tells you have taken all my family members and its you who have sent ragini in my life as a ray of hope..but one thing I wont let you take my ragini back from my life and for this if I have to fight with destiny I will do it and I will not let you take her from me..next anmol was on his laptop browsing and his luck he got wat he wanted..he did heard once about a well known hospital in USA where such cases are treated .he emailed the concerned persons and next he was on video conference and all was settled..he is taking ragini to USA for her treatment.he did not want to waste any time for the treatment of ragini..he announced the news to the family .it was a hard decision as he has to leave his children and not knowing how much time he will be out of the country.but anything for his ragini..it was timefor him to leave .he hugged his kids tightly and tells them I promise you both I will bring back your mama home…mummyji take good care of them..alekh reassures him that he will be here for them not to worry ..before entering his car he looked back and says a last bye to his children with a heavy heart got in as he knew he will break down emotionally..

During the whole flight he did not leave ragini's hand at all..arriving there ragini immeadiately was taken into care.the doc told anmol there is a minimum chance of ragini's getting well .little hope is there but cant pronounce on how much time it will take..anmol was ready to wait as much time it will take and money wise he had no problem at all..months went by and ragini health was still the same but anmol was not losing hope at all..every day how much tired he would be ,he wont miss talking to his children.he will reassure them that ragini will be fine …it was a routine for him and everyone there knows him well by now..they will let him sit with ragini and he will talk with her relating to her about the kids.how arav is being mischievious as she is not there etc..he will keep on talking to her..its with great difficulty that the hospital staffs will make him go and have some rest..

Every night hewill take ragini's and kids pic close to his heart and have some light sleep .he had this fear wat if the hospital needs him .that night as he closed his eyes anmol saw ragini on the other side of the lake..she was smiling to him.anmol all happy to see his ragini all fine .he rushed to the otherside of the lake to meet her but as soon as he arrived there to touch her ,her image began to fade and she was gone.he yells for ragini and in a jiffy woke up and same time the bedside phone was ringing..looking at the ID his heart did skip and with shaken hand lifts it and next anmol covering his face with both hands was crying out loud..few mins later he rushed to the hospital ,doctors surrounding ragini not wasting time he barged in the room and wat he saw left him on the spot.he could not move nor say anything..its only when the doctor said mr rajvansh its a miracle your wife is better now..he thanked the doctors and he was at ragini's side both teary eyed ..ragini was advised to more rest and some more observation before leaving to india..

All were happy at the RH as today anmol/ragini are coming back..they were restless and thetime came alekh coming with angini..tammy rushed to anmol hugging him and saying "papa aap aa gaye"he kissed her forehead and looked at his princess so grown up now.she hugged ragini and same goes for arav..both so happy to get their parents back home..it was a happy memorable moment in the family after so many months....

At last in their room alone..anmol could not stop gazing at ragini..she was all tears seeing so much love and devotion for her from anmol.he wiped her tears and embraced her in a tight hug.. I missed you so much..life without you is nothing....i prefer to die first cos I wont be able to bear it if something happens to you."maar jaoungaa ragini aap ke bina"..he just heard ragini saying "toh phir ragini bhi maar jayegee aap ke bina"..he pulled ragini close to him after so many months he could feel her warmth next to him soon he drifted in a peaceful sleep with that thought in his heart that his ragini is safe and sound next to him…

Fate brought them together though late..they were destined for each other and to live an eternal love..angini.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome!👏👏👏👏...I Loved your daily Bidaai analysis, but just didn't have an idea that you're such an Amazing FF writer too Savee!👏👏👏👏...I Loved the FF...😊...Sad it was so short though!😳...i would've Loved to read more..😉...the FF had romance n emotion balanced so well!👍🏼...Loved the devotion with which Anmol n Ragini Love each other..🤗...n with that accident, you scared me too for a while..😕...i was afraid Angini would be separated..😭...but you brought a "miracle" in b/w to get Angini back together again!!😳😳...Thank You for this FF...n please do write more yaar!😃..you're Gr8 at this!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First attempt pe big dhamaka, nice and rocking. Please continue, Saveeta.👏😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Saveeta this is fantastic !!!

Loved it truly this couple amazes me soo much that their intensity is mesmerizing

Wow the whole scene looks so heart wrenching when he sees her in coma and devastated at her state and wanted to make sure she recovers soon and went all out to get his Ragini back !!

Beautiful These scenes can easily be incorporated by the CV's and gives us more angini !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"maar jaoungaa ragini aap ke bina"..he just heard ragini saying "toh phir ragini bhi maar jayegee aap ke bina"..❤️😭

saveeta if this is ur first attempt then please do take this type of attempt frequently👏...my angini got older... & their son ARAV(this is ur master stroke👍🏼)..its too good.
please continue..what will happen next???

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