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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Wow!! Do post soon na Sanju! Don't keep us waiting..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry guys
i know i pormised that i'd update this but things are just going really weird these days...sorry
i promise i will update the day i get my lappy...which will be most probably tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~You Me Aur Hum~

Part 5

Anmol was now in the kitchen, he was dressed as a chef with a white apron and a chef cap. He didn't know from where to begin, he knew nothing about cooking. He has never cooked in his entire life; it had always been the chef. Anmol noticed TaShi and Aalekh sitting there waiting for him to start cooking. He didn't know where to start; Ragini peeked through the door to see what anmol was doing. He was struggling to open up the flour packet, he used more than the strength that was actually required to open it up, leading the entire flour on his clothes and face. TaShi, Aalekh and Ragini couldn't help but to laugh. Anmol wiped the flour off his face.

"Kya papa, aapko toh theek se packet bhi nahi kholna aata, cooking kaise karoge?" says the laughing tammy.

"Partner aapke toh saare face pe aata laga hua hai."says Khushi.

Ragini was enjoying seeing anmol struggling to cook. Anmol tried the best he could, but he remained unsuccessful in doing anything. From opening a packet, cutting the vegetables and then cooking. He was now tired, the kitchen was a disaster, he was a disaster. Ragini finally had some pity on him and decided to help him in cooking.

Anmol was sitting on the floor, leaning on the cupboards, trying to hide himself away from all that disaster he's created. Tashi and aalekh had also left a while back as anmol promised them that he'll call them when the breakfast is ready.

Anmol sees Ragini standing near him smiling.

"Aap hass rahi hai? Hassiye hassiye aur hassiye, aap hi ki wajah se hua hai yeh sab." says anmol.

Ragini didn't utter one word, she just couldn't help herself but to laugh at the situation and the way he was looking at her that moment. Anmol was surprised to see Ragini continuously laugh rather than helping him out. He wipes off all the flour off his face with his black kurta he was still wearing from last night.

"arrey ab aap yunhi hasti rahengi yah meri madat mein karengi?" asks anmol.

"Oh! Sorry, main aapki help karti hoon. Aap aisa kijiye aap aata ghoondiye, main sabzi kaat ti hoon thik hai. Waise aata ghoond toh lenge na?" asks the not so sure Ragini.

"Uhhhb..haan paani hi daalna hai na usmein?"

"Ji."

"haan main karloonga."

Anmol was now trying to knead the dough while Ragini cuts the vegetable. Anmol is thinking of how much water he should put in, but ended up pouring the entire jug into that bowl of flour. Ragini turned to look at anmol and found that he poured the entire jug into the flour and was now trying kneading it.

"arrey arrey yeh kya kar rahe hai? Yeh toh...aapne saara paani daal diya kya?"

"uhhh...haan!" says anmol acting all innocent."

"Arrey thoda thoda karke daalte hai...pura nahi...dekhiye kya kar diya aapne! Hatiye main sikhati hoon aapko."

Ragini moves anmol to the side, and adds more flour to the bowl and begins kneading it. Anmol slowly waraps his hands around her and begins kneading the dough with her. Ragini didn't mind at first, but when she realized anmol was just trying to get close to her and not concentrating, she pushes him aside and asks him to just look.

"arrey par main seekhunga kaise?"

"Aapko seekhna hai na? toh pehle dekhiye ki kaise karte hai, baad mein aap kar lijiyega."

Ragini blinks with a smile. Anmol sits on the bench top gazing at Ragini. While moving a strand of her hair that kept falling on her forehead from the slight breeze through the window in front her Ragini ended up applying some of the flour on her face. She didn't notice, but anmol who was gazing at her for the last 5 minutes had seen it. He head to clean it off, eyes still on Ragini. He didn't realise that his hand too had been the flour before and he hadn't wiped it off, so instead of cleaning it, he spread it even more. Ragini realised that now she had flour on her forehead, she couldn't help but to look at anmol. He was totally lost in her innocence; a smile appeared on her face leaving anmol with a smile aswell.

Ragini tells him to focus on work. The preparations were complete; ragini had completed everything, from puri to sabzi. Anmol was frying the puri when few drops of HOT oil fell on his hand while putting in the next puri to fry. He was burnt on his hand, Ragini showing her concern ran to anmol to check if his hand was okay. He was beginning to get boils.

"Offo, aap dekh ke nahi kar sakte the? Haath jala liya na ab. Ek sec."

Ragini ran to the freezer and got some ice cubes out and rubbed it on his hand.

"isse jalan thodi kam ho jaayegi."

Anmol wasn't thinking about pain at all, he was just so lost in Ragini who was really concerned for him. He couldn't help but just to smile. He still wasn't able to believe if it was really happening. It can't be, he wanted someone to pinch him to tell him that it is real and he isn't dreaming. He needed to touch her once to make himself believe that it was real; he slowly reached his hand out and stroked her cheek very gently. Ragini felt a bit ticklish, yet she allowed him to stroke her cheek.

"mamma'.Maasi Maa'Ragini." Call out aalekh and TaShi.

Anmol immediately backs his hand away, hearing the kids call out. Ragini says "bache itna kyun chil raha hai?"

"Mamma...bohut bhook lagi hai...papa aapne khaane mein kya banaya?" asks tammy

Anmol knew he didn't do the cooking; in fact he had made it worse for Ragini. The kitchen was a disaster and Ragini had to clean it all by herself, despite of having an injury on her foot from yesterday.

"offo tammy ke papa yeh kitchen mein kya hua hai? Sab dirty hogaya." Says aalekh

"Jija ji, aap aur tammy ke papa bacho ko baahar lekar jaaiye, main zara yeh kitchen saaf karloon."

Anmol felt bad, so he decided to stay back and help Ragini. How could he leave her alone? He just couldn't especially when her foot wasn't okay. At each step he helped ragini clean, whether it was flour from the floor or the jars he broke while taking out for the cupboard.

"aap jaake naha lijiye, dekhiye toh kya haalat hogayi aapki...pure kapdo pe atta laga hua hai...jaaiye jaake fresh ho jaaiye main tab tak khaana laga deti hoon." Says ragini

Anmol laughs seeing Ragini as she wasn't looking any better than him.

"arrey aap bhi toh...aapke bhi sab kapde gande ho gaye hain." Says anmol with a smile

Ragini looks at herself and realizes that she herself is very dirty.

"uhh haan...pehle aap fresh ho jaaiye, phir main ho jaungi."

Anmol was about to leave, when he notices something on Ragini's cheek. He asks her to hold on there for a second while he removes it. Anmol slowly gets closer and closer and surprises Ragini by stealing a kiss. She was surprised; anmol quickly ran to have a shower. He was happy, and so was Ragini.

to be continued...
Edited by SanKi4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

awesome chapter...really enjoy reading it..😊

such cute moments of angini..gosh anmol is a real disaster in the kitchen..😆
ragini to the rescue. and anmol being naughty at times..😊
miss this kind of scenes in the serial but happy got to visualise such scenes of angini by reading your FF...a real treat ...😊
very well written..keep it up..👍🏼👏..
will wait for next part..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
awesome part sanju loved it cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Sanju You are toooooooooooooooooo good Yaar & i loved every bit of it but my favourite was the last scene (kiss wala) it was soooooooooooooooooooo good👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
very nice, please continue soon. rozy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Sanju!
This is awesome yaar!
they cooked together and Anmol just was Anmol I guess!
Beautifully written and yes! yaar Loved it so much!
I am glad this is happening atleast in ff..update sooon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
thnkoo all 🤗
m glad i've lived up to the mark and it was worth the wait hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
part 5
sorry sanjana for reading ur FF after a long time.& now I understand what I missed😭
u r just too good👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
fav,fantastic,mindblowing ,out of this world,supeb.amazing EVERYTHING😆
I can so imagine this naughty ANMOL☺️ & his cooking😉😆
& u girls r so fantastic..that whenever I read anyone's FF I feel sad that bidaai is ending & we will not be able to see any of such scenes.....😭😭 DAMN😡
now I have no other option but to read ur last 2-3 part of FF as I remember I did read ur first part of it.😊
will comment about each & every part.😳
& will never miss any update...........😛

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