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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Seebz

I just hope All these ideas get into creatives mind through telepathy....so Our wish can come true.

hahha i hope so too yaar....srsly it's high time we got some scenes of them even though they r dream seq but who cares as long as we get some ;)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yeah, I hope there is a situation where Ragini's thought comes out. I don't mind if it is not romantic as long as they are about her realtionship with Annmol.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hum Tum – Part 2

Well many ppl here wanted to know what happens their strange yet beautiful night 😳 so here it goes 😉 some scenes will be similar 😛

Anmol's P.O.V

We walked to the car, Ragini hadn't uttered a single word. Oh god was she angry on me? I really hope she doesn't misunderstand me. She without saying any word sat in the front seat of the car waiting for me to drive. I quietly looked at her, and then tried to start the car. Strange this time it started in one go. Ragini looks at me surprised, while I was even more surprised than her seeing that the car is fine all of a sudden. "kamala hai raat itna try karne ke baad car start nahi ho rahi thi, ab achanak se hogayi." I looked at Ragini who was looking at me, which kind of made me nervous, I hope she isn't thinking that I did this on purpose. "gaadi theek hogayi." I said. Ragini just looked on at me, making me even more nervous than I already was. I immediately looked to the front and drove off. We had almost travelled half way yet Ragini didn't uttered a word. I put the music on just so that this silence wouldn't make situations more awkward, but i guess it didn't work as the song "do dil mil rahe hai" made Ragini feel more uncomfortable. I turned the music off. "Ragini I am sorry." I said. Ragini looked at me and asked "sorry? Sorry kis baat ke liye?" I got a bit confused as i thought she was angry on me. "ummm woh kal raat..." Ragini immediately looks the other way and says "it's okay." Really? It was okay? So she wasn't angry about me sleeping so close to her, she wasn't angry the fact that i lifted her in my arms and placed her on the charpoy? Was that a hint? No no it's just me, i am sure she must've felt bad. "aapne mujhe maaf kardiya?" i asked just to make sure she forgave me. She looked at me and slightly smiled with a nod. I smiled as well and looked to the front but my eyes naturally went towards her glowing face. Gosh she looked so fresh, and no sign of uncomfortableness on her face. she was calm, enjoying the breeze on her face. my focus was completely on her face, and i didn't realise that a car was heading our way. Just a second before I looked to the front seeing the car approach out way, I immediately moved the car to the side. Ragini lost control of her balance and leaned on me. I gave a moment to myself to settle down and then looked at Ragini, who was leaning on me. I could feel her warm breath on my chest. Her hands holding my shirt tight. I wanted to put my arm around her to assure her she was safe, but was hesitant. She immediately moved back when she realised that the car had come to a complete stop "Ragini aap theek hai?" I asked. Ragini nodded yes. "I am sorry woh main dekha nahi ki saamne gaadi aa rahi hai..." I said. She looked at me and assured me that it was okay and that she was fine. "chalein?" i asked. Ragini smiled and said "ji." I put the car in the 1st gear and drove off speeding the car as it went. "thodi der mein hum ghar pohunch jaayenge." I said. "bacho ke bhi ghar pohunchne ka waqt hogaya hai." Said Ragini in a tensed tone. I smiled and says "relax Ragini, hum unke aane se pehle ghar pohunch jaayenge." Ragini smiled. She looked simply gorgeous when she smiled. It felt as if my entire happiness lies in it. I can live my entire life just seeing that smile of hers. For once she was there with me, alone and no place for any awkwardness. Our silence spoke a thousand words, but when will we speak? When will Ragini see the love I hide within myself for her. When will she feel the same for me? Maybe she does but is hiding it away within. I await for the day when we two will be together.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sana so true ..wo subha kabhi to ayegi...wo subha kabhi to aayegi..when finally she will open doors of her heart and soul for him.
how true u wrote so well.......indeed he keeps asking for forgivenss and i just think how tense his mind must be na all the time.....ke ragini shouldn't misunderstand his intentions
bang on u chose perfect description to the missing peices in the scene other day
will wait for some more scenes from u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanju well done 👏.. Good to know He is asking the same question as we are..."When?" and Ragini has the answer only to this question. I would say, 'Anmol, Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.' You have joined the pieces very well. If they showed something like this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
i cldnt find any better way to end this so ended with alot of when's hehe. Hope i got anmols feelings as right as i did b4 =P
Thnx 4 appreciating it guys. Got me 2 write more nd more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: SanKi4eva

i cldnt find any better way to end this so ended with alot of when's hehe. Hope i got anmols feelings as right as i did b4 =P
Thnx 4 appreciating it guys. Got me 2 write more nd more.

Sorry to trouble u sanju!.. but Yeh dil maange more😉 If you have time, Please update the next part soon😊 and yes you did the justice to bring out his feelings..I hope they show his thoughts quite often
Edited by Seebz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

It Is really fantastic & your approach telling it as Anmol's POV is really new atleast for me & while reading it was not like we are imaging but it felt like we are reading what Anmol is really feeling now

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Wow that was beautiful Sanju !!👏
I hope she opens the doors to her heart and sees how deep Anmol loves her !!

She is quite vulnerable but she still is hesitant !!!

Angini will be magical !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanjuuuuuuuuuuu marvelloussssss yaar.

I really felt so nice to read this part that She looked simply gorgeous when she smiled. It felt as if my entire happiness lies in it. I can live my entire life just seeing that smile of hers. For once she was there with me, alone and no place for any awkwardness" The love anmol has for ragini itself shows from these lines. So beautifully expressed.

Fantasticccccccc.

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