how alu should repent & redeem whn sadi is cleared

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seriously, my heart still cries when i see the Dec 31, 09 and jan 1st 2010 episodes of bidaai, when alekh cruelly told sadi to leave the house. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ i mean even when someone breaks up with someone else, they try to do it as gently as possible, trying to do it with minimum, very minimum pain. at least, that's what a nice person does, someone with a heart... but with alekh, that was NOT the case at all!!! As he was breaking up with sadi during those episodes, i couldn't believe it was the same alekh who would go crazy if he saw even one tear in sadi's eyes, the same alekh who would stand up for sadi if anyone dared to scold her or insult her... i couldn't believe it was that same alekh, i couldn't believe how much he had changed... he was so stern when he told sadi to leave, as if she was some kind of burden to him all these years... he just said, "i don't know anything sadi; all i know is, you have to leave this house for the happiness of my family and for the peace within my mother's heart. so just leave sadi, leave!!!" how CRUEL!!!! and for this reason and many other reasons, and because of soooooooooooooooo many pains he has given her, i want alekh's guilt to be of great, GREAT measure when he does reunite with sadi. i expect that episode to be nothing short of DHAMAKA. actually i imagine it to be some thing like this (so i guess you could say this is my FANFICTION). SEE IT IN MY NEXT POST
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FANFICTION BEGINS HERE:

they're showing that alekh and mallika (malekh) are just about to get engaged...while in contrast, they then show a scene where sadi is all sad, her face almost appearing to be motionless as she starts to take her mangalsutra off. then malekh is shown again, and they get their ring-boxes ready. The scene now goes back to sadi: she is now at the shower and her sindoor is being shown to be dripped off her mang by the water. now it switches back to malekh and alekh is reluctant to put the ring on malli. he pauses for a moment, but DOES in the end try to put it on her, and JUST when he is ABOUT to, when he is literally just half an inch away from her finger, RAGVIR come and says:

Ragini: NAHIN jijaji!!!!!!!!!
Ranvir: bhaiya NAHINNNN!!!!!!!

everyone turns around, including malekh, both shocked and puzzled...and their engagement is HALTED.

ragini: nahin jijaji, aisa maat kijiye...aaj ab apki zindagi ki sabse BADI galati karne jaa rahi hein...
ranvir: please bhaiya, aisa maat kijiye
alekh: (very confused) tum dono kya keh rahi ho...? mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aah raha...???
ragi: jijaji, aap jante hein, sadi ne divorce papers pein kyun sign kiya...?
alekh: (now both irritated and angry) mujhe kuch sunna nahin hein...mein kuch janna bhi nahin chahta...
ragi: lekin aaj aap ko sunna hi hoga jijaji, aaj apko janna bhi hoga...

just then vasu tries to interrupt her

vasu: tum yeh kya kar rahi hon ragi...? stop this nonsense right now!!!! stop this BAKWAAS!!!!
ragi: nahin mummyji!!! (vasu SHOCKED) yeh bakwass nahin hein

then ragi with a very determined look, turns to alekh and continues...

ragi: jijaji, aap jante hein sadi divorce papers par kyun sign kiya tha...? kyunki mummyji ne usse kaha tha sign karne ke liye, kyunki mummyji ne usse maboori kiya tha!!!!!!

EVERYONE IS SHOCKED!!!!!!!!

alekh: KYA????!!!!!!!!!!
ragi: haan jijaji HAAN!!!!!! mummyji ne yeh sab karwaya tha, aap ko aur sadi ko alag karne ke liye!!!! uss raat jab sadi ne competition par hissa le rahi thi, usse toh yeh pata bhi nahin tha ki main bhi uss competition mein hissa leh rahi thi. magar aap jante hein sadi ne kyun uss competition mein hissa leh rahi thi...? kyun ki meri maa, MERI maa brain clot ki bimari se jaan aur maut ki ladayi kar rahi thi aur sadi ko competition jitna tha so that woh us 5 lakh prize ke sath mere maa ki operation karwa sakhthe...!!!

they zoom in on alekh's face and he is SHOCKEDDDDD!!!!!!!

ragi: (she is now crying) aur jab usse yeh pata chahla ki main bhi is competition mein hissa leh rahi hoon, toh phir woh meri khushi ke liye, INTENTIONALLY har gayi (ragi breaks down crying) WOH HAR GAYI!!!!!!!

alekh is still shocked and then the scene where sadi fell down on purpose to lose, is shown flashing back from alekh's memory. Ragi continues

ragi: yeh baat sirf mummyji ko pata tha ki meri maa bimari hein, ki usse brain clot thi. Yeh baat to even mujhe bhi nahin pata tha. is liye, mummyji, is tragic baat ki najayaaz fayda liya, aur yeh jante hue ki sadi meri maa ki operation ke liye kuch bhi kar sakhti, wohh ek ghiloni deal samne rakhkhi thi sadi ke samne. Mummyji sadi ko yeh kahan ki agar sadi app ko divorce karne ke liye haan kehe de, sirf aur sirf tab hi mummyji sadi ko 5 lakh rupees dete, meri maa ki operation ke liye. Mummyji ki toh yeh bhi nahin parwa tha ki meri maa, uski khud rishtedar ki brain clot thi!!!! Usse sirf apni maksaat ko pauch ni thi, which was to alag karne app ko aur sadi ko, kisi bhi kimat par!!! Aur meri bholi bhali behen, appni pyar ki parwa na karte hue, khud ki khushi ko parwa na karte hue, wohh uss papers par sign ki, takey meri maa theek ho jaye!!!! Sadi toh kabhi, KABHI apni bare mein nahin socha, hamesha dusro ki khushi ke liye sab kuch kurbani ki!!! Hamesha dusro ne, MAIN NE usse galat samjhi, aur dukh deti rahi, daat te rahi, lekin phir bhi wohh hamesha chup rahi (ragi now crying hysterically). nafraat hoti he mujhe apne app par, NAFRAAT!!!!!

Alekh SHOCKED, turns to face his mother.

Alekh: maa, yeh saab kya hai? Joh ragi ke rahi he, kya yeh sach hein? Kya aap hi neyin sadi ko majburi ki thi divorce papers sign karne ke liye???!!!! JAWAB DI JIYE MAMMA, JAWAB DI JIYE!!!!! Please, aap aise chup kyun hein???!!!!

Ranvir: JAWAB DI JIYE MOM, JAWAB DI JIYE!!!!! Alekh bhaiya ko sach bataiye ki aap ne keya ghiloni khel kheli!!!! BATAIYE usse mom!!!!!!

Ragi: BATAIYE mummji!!!!!

Vasu under pressure, bursts out spilling EVERYTHING!!!

Vasu: (screaming) HAAN, HAAN, HAAN!!!!! HAAN. Yeh sach he, joh bhi ragi ne aaj kaha!!!! Mein ne hi sadi ko divorce papers par sign karne ke liye majboori ki thi, takey wohh aur tum alag ho jao!!! Mein nahin chahti thi ki tum dono ek saath raho, aur mein AAJ bhi yeh nahin chahti hoon!!!! Alekh (she then turns to alekh, softening her voice), beta, meri baat mano, mein yeh sab tumhare bhale ke liye hi kiya beta. Sadi tumhari layek nahin, wohh toh kabhi tumhare layek nahin thi!!! Aur hum saab yeh kaise bhul sakte hein ki uske liye hi ranbir ko jail hui thi, ke uske hi waja se ragi ne aap ni bachcha ko kho di thi, hum yeh saab kaise bhul sakte???

Ragi: NAHIN mummyji, yeh jhoot hein!!! Sadi ke waja se mein ne aapni bachcha koh nahin khoyi thi. wohh toh sirf aur sirf meri laparwa ke baja se hua tha!!!!

Ranbir: aur rahi baat mere jail jane ki mom, wohh bhi sadi bhabhi ke waja se nahin hui thi. babhi toh kabhi yeh chahti hi nahin thi ki mein jail jayoon.bhabhi toh sirf sachchai ki saath diye thi, GITA pe kasam khakar. Maine jail gaya tha sirf MERI bewakoofi ke liye, sadi bhabhi ke liye nahin. aur kya aap yeh jante hein, the fact that maine jail se sirf do mehna, DO MEHNA ki baad aayi thi, kyunki bhabhi, aur sirf bhabhi ke waja se???!!! kya aap yeh jante hein mom?

Vasu is now SHOCKED!!!

Ranvir: haan mom haan, sadi bhabhi ki hi waja se mein aaj jail se bahar hoon!!! Kyunki ek bhabhi hi thi jo us gunda ke liye, jis gunda ne uski rape karne ki koshshish ki, uss gunda ke liye wohh din raat dua mangti rahi ke wohh coma se bahar aajaye, taki us gunda sach bataye, aur mere jail se chootkari mil jaye. Aur jab us gunda ki hosh aya, tab wohh sirf aur SIRF bhabhi hi thi joh uske paas jayi, aur usko sach kehe ne ki liye beg kiya, jisne uski rape karne ki koshshish ki, uss admi ki paas jakar bhabhi BHEEG mani, taki, wohh judge ko sach bataye, aur mujhe jail se choot kari mile!!!! Haan mom haan, yehi saach hein!!!! Bhabhi toh itni hi self-less hein ki wohh yeh baat bhi kisi ko nahin bataya, wohh itni hi self-less hein mom!!!! Aur aap hein ki joh usse is ghar se throw out kar di!!!! App hi he ki joh uski sab khushi chinne ki koshish ki!!!!! CHI mom, CHI, mujhe toh sharam aati he appko mom bula ne mein!!!!!

ALL is shocked hearing ranbir's revelation about sadi, INCLUDING vasu and alekh. Alekh then, without uttering another word, walks out, LEAVING from the rajvansh house and gets on his car.

While alekh is driving his car, he cries profusely, and has many flashbacks that occurred between him and sadi. Of all those moments, he remembers the times when he just gave sadi pain and PAIN, and sadi never saying anything to him, and responding him with love only'

Flashback #1: when he almost choked sadi to death during their nuptial, the very first night they were together as husband and wife!!!!

Flashback #2: sadi always responding to him with love by hugging him, taking care of him, and doing everything he ever needed or wanted.

Flashback #3: sadi taking a bullet for alekh when he, shlok, and sadi were on the streets, and goons tried to bother sadi.

Flashback #4: sadi being the one to reveal all about chotima's truth, and protecting alekh from her evil ways, and brining him to his current condition...

Flashback #5: sadi always encouraging alekh to do his best, and telling him that nothing is impossible for him to do as long as he always gives his best.

Flashback #6: after alekh's recovery, alekh yelling at sadi all the time, never having a moment for sadi, and him always focusing on his work

Flashback #7: sadi getting a present for him, after she toiled all day at the mall, spending 4 HOURS to get it.

Flashback #8: alekh responding by throwing away the present, and yelling at sadi

Flashback #9: sadi constantly telling alekh that she feels someone was spying on them. and alekh responding by calling it nonsense, and yelling at sadi for accidentally dropping juice on his office-papers out of fear that someone might be spying on them.

Flashback #10: sadi is proven right, and some goon WAS in fact spying over them, and he then tried to rape sad!!!

Flashback #11: sadi telling alekh that she doesn't care what the whole world thinks of her, EXCEPT alekh. Asking him if he too wanted her to leave, clearly showing in her face that she is pleading with him to let her stay, to not separate her from him.

Flashback #12: alekh CRUELLY telling sadi to leave anyways for the sake of his family, and for the peace within his mother's heart.

Flashback #13: alekh and sadi separating, and sadi stepping away from his room

Flashback #14: alekh yelling at sadi on the phone to leave ranbir alone after he was freed from jail

Flashback #15: ranbir telling alekh that sadi is the ONLY reason he was free

Flashback #16: sadi saving alekh's life at the dance competition and telling him that his life doesn't only matter to him, but it matters to her as well.

Flashback #17: alekh yelling at sadi about the divorce papers, and demanding to know from her if it's a "yes" or "no" only!!!

Flashback #18: sadi saying yes, but pleading with him to just stay for two minutes, so she could explain herself. But alekh rudely turns away from her anyways, and angrily leaves from there

Flashback #19: ragi telling him why sadi really signed those papers, that how his mother compelled her to do it!!!

All flashbacks end.

alekh now FINALLY reaches the sharma house, where sadi is inside. He then goes inside the house himself, and sees sadi sitting in the dark, motionless, but clearly full of pain in her eyes, near a window, looking out.

sadi then feels something suddenly, and turns to see, in her SHOCK, that alekh is standing right in front of her!!! She then begins to come out, and walk towards alekh. Alekh too walks towards sadi. When they finally reach in front of one another, alekh notices sadi wearing white clothing, WITHOUT a mangalsutra over her neck, WITHOUT sindoor on her maang. So he then proceeds to take a knife that was nearby and cuts a small part of his finger. he then uses his blood to cover sadi's maang as a symbol of sindoor unifying their relationship. They BOTH then burst out crying, and embrace each other tightly. Sadi placing her head on alekh's chest, holding him tightly with her arms, and alekh putting his head down on her neck, delicately touching her back, and holding her tightly as well.

Sadi: (crying) alekhji, app itni der laga di aane mein.

Alekh: (also crying) sadi, main janti hoon main iski kehne ke bhi layek nahin hoon, but please, please PLEASE sadi, mujhe maaf kardo!!!! Mein tumhare bin nahin reh sakta, tum hi mere sab kuch ho, tum hi mere sari zindagi ho, meri haar saas, meri SAB KUCH!!!! Mujhe maaf kardo, mujhe maaf kardo...

Sadi then manages to have a little smile upon her face, admist all her crying, listening to his words.

But then alekh's and sadi's moment is interrupted when they hear a man's voice, who speaks very LOUDLY, and salekh break apart. it turns out, the man is MAMAJI!!!

Mamaji: (saying LOUDLY) NAHIN!!!!!

And the episode ends.

Sorry for any grammatical error. My hindi is not so good. I mean I understand it perfectly, but have trouble speaking/writing it in english. Hope you all enjoyed


Edited by pricey28 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^when they'll actually show the episode of salekh re-union i really hope they'll show at least 80% of all the flashbacks i mentioned. i want all those flashbacks to be there so the contrast of how much pain alekh has given sadi, yet sadi always responding him with nothing but love, is shown... i want this so sadi's immeasurable sacrfice is once again re-iterated...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ it's fantastic. Laajawaab pricey!!! RS should hire you as the CT lead... ab woh jo bhi hai, usse aap chutti kardogi...

If you are Ct lead at least we know you know our pains...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pricey28

^^when they'll actually show the episode of salekh re-union i really hope they'll show at least 80% of all the flashbacks i mentioned. i want all those flashbacks to be there so the contrast of how much pain alekh has given sadi, yet sadi always responding him with nothing but love, is shown... i want this so sadi's immeasurable sacrfice is once again re-iterated...



Apply to the creative team 4 a job plzzzzzzzzzzz.... u'll b perfect 4 us!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's great .. but honestly in the last scene .. Sadi refuses Alekh telling jis rishtey mein pyar aur bharosa na ho, us rishte mein mein aur ulajhna nahi chahti hun .. kya pata kal phir aap kisi waje se mujhe galat samajhke chod denge .... nahi Alekhji abhi mein dubara se is rishte mein nahi bandna chahti hun .... aapne kabhi bhi mera bharosa kiya hi nahi .... kya karu mein is rishte ka ....
Ranvir and Ragini enters the room ... both supports Sadi ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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When Alekh does find out the truth - I want there to be aflashback of him telling her that he was mad when he married her, I feel that was just so wrong of him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome write-up pricey !!!!

but Alek should not just walk away from the Rajvansh house after he knows the whole truth, he needs to say something to his mom. If he doesnot want to be rude atleast he shd say that he will from now on find it difficult to talk to her because he longer can trust what she says. She has hidden facts from him and lied which as a mom she is not supposed to. A son always looks up to his mom, but today, he feels that he cannot look up to her anymore.

And am also waiting for Inderjit's reaction. He has always been a mute spectator, but this time, he shd also say something strong against Vasu. Infact who the hell is she to tell ppl to get out of the house, she is also a bahu in the house like Sadhana. Inder shd tell her that if she doesnt stop all these games, he will have to ask her to leave the house. I would love that dialogue.
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thank you all so so so soooooooooooooooooooooooo MUCHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! honestly, i didn't expect to get the kind of reaction i got, but i'm very glad and humble that i got it. ๐Ÿ˜Š once again, thank you all so much for reading my FF and for all your kind comments.
i too wish i could be hired so i could write for bidaai. i know all YOUR pains and of course, I AM hurting inside too, so i'd definitely keep all of us in mind while writing. but unfortunately, as we all know, that's NEVER gonna happen, especially since i live in USA and i have never been to india in my life. also, my hindi is not that great...

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