FF: Pyar to hoga Salekh and Ragvir Pt 18 pg 26 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
First chap was rly cute. But chhotu tha. Rly liked the RagLekh part. Update the next part soon n make it a bit long. :-D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Sure .. It will be longer .. I was scared that If some one didn't liked long parts thats why
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Yaar reading such beautiful FF's are always a pleasure. And we would actually love to read longer parts.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
awww..it was so short...
please update soon...it was very cute 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Ok .. I will uplode Part 2 very soon .. Hope u will like it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
gr8 chpater awsome be cont soon
Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Goood Yaarrr....Luvvdd the Ragini-Alekh part very muchhh!!!...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Pyar to hoga part 2
Market:
Ragini goes inside to the market.
Sadhna is saying to the man to put her things away and she will be back in 5 minutes. Sadhna and Ragini is standing next to each other in the tie shop. Sadhna and Ragini put there hand on same tie.
Sharmas office:
Ranvir is prepairing for the meeting.
Alekh comes to sharmas office and goes inside.
Ranvir and Alekh shakes hands and the meeting starts.
Market:
Ragini: Excuse me , mene pehle liya ta
Sadhna: Excuse me , mene pehle hat lagaya tha
Ragini: Oh , so u want argument ? ok ,
Sadhna: No i dont want that , but mene pehle liya tha
Ragini: No you didn't
Sadhna: Yes I did
Ragini: No you did not
Sadhna: Yes
Ragini: Look , whats your name?
Sadhna: Sadhna
Ragini: Look Sadhna , this tie is for my brother
Sadhna: What's your name?
Ragini: Ragini
Sadhna: Ragini this is also for my brother
Ragini: Really?
Sailer: Madam , madam i have one more same tie
Sadhna: Get it
Sailer: Abhi laya
Ragini and Sadhna look at each other and feel guilty.
Ragini: i'm sorry I didn't mean anything bad
Sadhna: No ... I'm also sorry , I shouldn't behave like that
Ragini: No not that way
Sadhna: hah?
Ragini: Ek cup coffee?
Sadhna : =) ok
Sailer: here madam
Sadhna: thanks
Ragini : lets go?
Sadhna: ok ;)
Sharmas Office:
Ranvir and Alekh makes the deal.
Ranver: Thank u mr Ranjvansh
Alekh : No please call me Alekh mr Sharma
Ranvir: Ok , but you have to call me then Ranvir
Alekh : haha ok ..
Ranvir: Are u busy now?
Alekh: No
Ranvir: Shall we take a coffe , it is near
Alekh: Ya fine
Coffee House:
Ragini and Sadhna goes and sit down.
Alekh and Ranvir park there car and goes inside
Sadhna: Ragini I just go and fresh up
Ragini: I also come with u
Both of them goes to washroom and Ranvir and Alekh comes inside..
Both take a seat.
Ragini and Sadhna comes out and they see there brother:
Sadhna&Ragini: bhai aap yaha?
Both looks at each other and goes to there table
Ranvir and Alekh are shoked to see theire sisters.
Ragini and Sadhna goes to theire brother.
Alekh: Come Ragini , Ranvir u don't mind?
Ranvir: No why would I mind?
Alekh: Ranvir this is my sister Ragini , Ragini this is Ranvir buisnesspartner..
Ranvir: friend also , nice to meet u .. Sadhna come.
This is my sweet sister Sadhna , Sadhna this is Alekh..
Sadhna: Your buisnesspartner?
Alekh: Ya.. nice to meet u
All of them sit down and the waiter comes
W: What would u like to order ?
Ranvir: 1 cola and she will have 1 orange juice
Ragini: same as them..
W: ok mam
Ranvir: So sadhna how did u girls meet? Or are u old friends?
Sadhna: Nehi bhai wo actually ...
Ragini : Main batati ho.. We where at a tie shop and then we became friends ..
Alekh: Ohh! that's nice ..
Ranvirs mobile rings and it is kaka:
Kaka: Ranvir baba , nani ji a rehi hai , aap look jaldi ghar aa jao
Ranvir: Ji Kaka , hum look aa rehe hai..* and hangs the phone*
Sadhna: Bhai kiska phone tha?
Ranvir: Kaka ka , nani aa rehi hai
Sadhna: What? aaj?
Ranvir: ya ,, excuse us gues . We have to go .. But see u another time?
Alekh : We should also go ,, time ka patha bhi nehi chala * stairing at Sadhna*
Ragini: Sadhna kal milte hai?
Sadhna: Come to my house tomorrow?
Ranvir: *whisper to Sadhna* tell about that party?
Sadhna: Ya , Ragini we are having a party tomorrow , please come with your family
Ragini: I think Bhai aur me hi a sakhte hai .. Mom and Dad is in London
Sadhna: Ok , but see u .. Bye Ragini , bye Alekh
Alekh ; Bye , Ragini chale
Ragini ; Chalo
Alekh's car:
Alekh : Sadhna don't talk that much
Ragini : Bhai , she talk but she don't talk with people she don't know that much ..
Alekh : Ya I also thougt so.
Ragini: What? Bhai u and thougt , u really thougt about a girl?
Alekh: Ragini , stop
Ragini: Ok ..
Ranvir's car:
Ranvir: Sadhna , what did u buy?
Sadhna: Some clothes for this party and a tie for u .. Ragini is so sweet
Ranvir: Ya .. but she talk little to much na?
Sadhna: Bhai .. she is perfect .. I don't either talk less?
Ranvir: That's why I said that .. ::)
Sadhna: haha funny.. But she is very nice..
Ranvir: Oh shit!
Sadhna: Kya hua?
Ranvir: I forgot my file in Alekh's car.
Sadhna: I can call Ragini
Ranvir : ya call her..
MObile:
Ragini: hello
Sadhna: Hello Ragini..
Ragini: Are sadhna , kya hua?
Sadhna: Wo mere bhai ki file tumhare bhai ke car me hai
Ragini: oohh!
Sadhna: Kya hua ?
Ragini: Bhai to ghar pe nehi hai .. But I can tell him that Ranvir's file is in his car ... I take it with me tomorrow ok?
Sadhna: Thanks.. Don't forget to tell.
Ranvirs car:
Ranvir: What happend?
Sadhna: She will come with the file tomorrow.
Ranvir: Thank god..
Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Luvvvd teh intro b/w two sistersss...Very Very Very Goooddd!! The foursome meeting was also nice..
Plzz DOo Try to write scenes with the foursome 2gther
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Thanks for liking it .. It will come with them all 4 .. and some cute scenes

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