||~*FF: Socha Na Tha *~|| RagVir| Chpt 7 Pg 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...........my dearrr ragvir k saathh saathhhh,dhara sanihaa n sanju dii bhiiiii???????????.....wowwwww😍

cant wait for the first chapterrrrrrr😍😍😍.....sanju diiii jaldiii karooo😳😳😳
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Sanjuu intezaaaaaaaaaaar nahi hora haiiiiiiiiiii🤣
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will post the 1st chpt tonight 😊
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Originally posted by: s.sanj90

will post the 1st chpt tonight 😊



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Chapter 1

A person is lying on their stomach on the bed in their room. He is shirtless wearing dark blue superman shorts. The walls of the room are white in colour, with one feature wall, which is right behind the bed, it is black in colour, which had photos of a guy from his college days. The bed is full with stuffed toys, DVDs, video games. The alarm clock goes off at 7 am. Someone pulls out a hand and presses the button to turn the alarm off, and covers the head with the blanket, time passes by, and the person is still sleeping.

Meanwhile somewhere in the chawl, a girl is standing in front of the mandir praying. Few children come to the mandir calling out "Ragini didi..." There stands a girl smiling, she is dusky in colour, with beautiful facial features. Her hair come just about to her waist. She is wearing a beautiful pink salwaar kameez. It's Ragini. The kids come running to her saying 'Ragini didi. Ragini Didi." Ragini smiles and says "tum sabko kitni baar kaha hai, jab main prathna karti hoon toh beech mein nahi bola karte...bhagwaan ji gussa ho jaate hain." One child says "Ragini didi, aapko chacha ji bula rahe hain." Ragini says "Bauji bula rahe hain? Acha main unse mil lungi, pehle sab aake Prasad lo." Ragini serves the Prasad to all the kids.

On the other side, the alram goes off once again, it is 8 am, the phone begins to ring, the guy tries to find the phone, his head is still under the blanket. He finally manages to find the phone, he picks the phone up and puts it on loudspeaker, and he says "Hello." "Ranvir? Tum abhi tak so rahe ho? Uth jao...8 baj gaye hain. Pehle hi din office mein late hona hai kya? UTHO!" Says a guy on the other end. The guy without any delay gets up screaming "KYA? 8 BAJ GAYE?" There he sits with a surprised face. He is fair in colour, with black short straight hair. It's Ranvir. "yeh mera alarm kyun nahi baja?" The man says, "Alarm ko chodo aur jaldi se tayaar ho jao. Tumhare paas aadha ghanta hai. Idiot." The guy hangs the phone. Ranvir says "papa...the name is ranvir." And puts the phone down. He yawns while he stretches out; he looks at the clock and falls back on the bed, his phone rings again. He answers the phone. "RANVIR" yells the person in anger on the other side of the phone. Ranvir quickly gets up saying "P-P-P-Papa?" "TUM PHIR SO RAHE HO! Agar tumhe lagta hai ki main London mein hoon, aur mujhe tumhari harqaton ka kuch pata nahi chalega, toh yeh tumhari galat fehmi hai." says the man. "n-n-n-nahi papa, main toh t-t-t-tayaar ho raha hoon." Replies Ranvir. "Haadha ghanta hai Ranvir...agar tum office time pe nahi gaye toh..." Ranvir says "toh..?" "Toh say bye bye to the nayi gaadi and hello to Auto." Says Ranvir's Father. Ranvir says "What? Papa aap aisa nahi kar sakte." "Try me! Idiot!" replies Ranvir's father and hangs up the phone. Ranvir is annoyed by this, he quickly rushes to the shower, comes out gets dressed while falling here and there. He tries to search for his shirt, and he finds it under his bed sheet. 😆

Ragini enters the room. PC is sitting there on the sofa reading the newspaper. Ragini says "Bauji?" PC looks at Ragini and says "Arrey Ragini beta tu aagayi?" Ragini enters the room and says "Bauji, Prasad." PC takes the Prasad. "Aapne bulaya tha?" PC says "haan, woh tujhe kuch dena tha. Ek minute." PC goes to his room and gets a small box. He goes and gives it to Ragini, Ragini opens it and it's a small sculpture of ganpati ji. Ragini takes the blessings. PC says "Isse huemsha apne saath rakhna, yeh teri raksha karenge." Ragini says "Thank you bauji." She hugs him. Pc says "Cha lab tujhe chalna chahiye, warna tu office ke liye late ho jaayegi." Ragini says "Ji bauji." Ragini takes PC's blessings and quickly gets her bag and is about to go out the door; PC says "arrey Ragini beta sun toh." Ragini turns around and says "Ji bauji?" Pc says "Beta yeh auto ke liye paise leja." Ragini says "Auto? Auto se kyun?" PC says "Arrey itna badi company mein naukri mili hai tujhe, auto se jaayegi toh acha lagega na?" Ragini smiles and says "bauji, main jaisi hoon waisi hi achi hoon. Main humesha ki tarah bus se hi jaungi. Aap yeh paise rakhiye." PC smiles and says "Ishwar kare teri jaisi beti sab ko miley." Ragini smiles and then says "Acha bauji main chalti hoon, shaam ko 5 baje taka a jaungi." PC says "Theek hai beta." Ragini leaves and PC says "APNA DHYAAN RAKHNA!" Ragini says "JI BAUJI!"

Ranvir gets his car keys and leaves. He sits in his black Mercedes Benz and drives off in a hurry. He is listening to the music full on loud. Ragini is waiting at a bus stop. "Excuse me bhaia sahab, aapko pata hai ki andheri ki bus kitne baje aayegi?" asks ragini to a man. The man says "pata nahi kitne baje aayegi...shayad 5-10 minute mein." Ragini get worried and thinks "aaj office mein pehla din hai aur main late nahi hona chahti. Bhagwaan, bus jaldi se aa jaaye."

Ranvir is changing the CD, he is not looking where he is going, a kitten is in the middle of the road, Ragini sees a car coming in full speed and the kitten is in the way, she rushes to save him, Ranvir looks up and sees a girl is in the way. Ragini sees the car coming straight at her; she blocks her ears and screams in fear. He quickly turns the car away, and the car skids it's way and stops. Ranvir sighs in relief and says "Thank god, bach gaya." He looks at his car and says 'Tum theek toh ho na baby?" He checks his car if it's fine, he sees Ragini standing there, he gets out of the car and walks over to ragini in anger. He says "What the hell? Tum andhi ho kya? Itni badi gaadi nazar nahi aayi?" Ragini turns around. Ranvir just looks on at her, he comes back into his senses and says "Agar accident ho jaata toh?" Ragini looks around. "aur meri gaadi ko kuch ho jaata toh?" Ragini isn't listening she is looking for the Kitten "main tumse baat kar raha hoon, yeh idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho? Bhagaan ne aankhein saamne dekhne ke liye di hai...neeche gir gayi hai kya? Ragini looks around and says "yahaan na ek choti..." Ranvir says "Choti nahi..." Ragini continues to look for the kitten, ranvir thinks "Choti?" he looks around and then says "Meri gaadi tumhe choti nazar aati hai? Sadak pe jitni bhi gaadiya chalti hai na, meri gaadi ke saamne kuch nahi hai...jitni ki yahaan ki gaadiya hai na, usse double price ki hai meri gaadi." Ragini looses her cool and says "Tum, tum irresponsible..." Ranvir says "ahahaha...irresponisble. arre irresponsible ki spelling bhi aati hai tume? I-R-R-responsible. Aur waise bhi sadak ke beech mein tum chal rahi thi, main nahi. So that makes you irresponsible, not me." Ragini says "Par road pe ek choti si billi thi." Ranvir says "OoOoOo, wow...billi, puppies, cows dogs. Yeh jo sadke hai na, yeh gaadiyo ke liye hai, tumhare billi's keliye zoo banane ke liye nahi. Idiot" Ragini is still looking for the kitten; Ranvir walks off to his car. He turns around and sees Ragini looking for the kitten, he goes after her. She kneels down and begins to looks in the bushes. Ranvir goes and kneels down and begins to make noises. Ragini is ignoring him. Ranvir then says "Kahaan hai billi? Kahin usse chor toh nahi legaya?" Ragini says "wohi dekh rahi hoon." Both get up ragini is still looking for the kitten. Ranvir says "billi toh kahin dikh nahi rahi." Ragini says "abhi toh yahi thi, pata nahi kahaan gayi." Ranvir says "ab samajh aaya, tumhari billi, khoon, police. Yeh jo tumhara naatak hai na, main sab samajh raha hoon." Ragini says 'Kya?" Ranvir says "Yeh hi ke, main ek cool aur handsome ladka, woh bhi akela ek coooooool si gaadi mein. Aur tum ek akeli ladki aur hogayi tum shuru." Ragini says "Kya shuru?" Ranvir says "tumhara naatak aur kya? Pehle mujhe phasao, aur phir mujhse shaadi rachao, aur kya?" Ragini is surprised and says "What? Tum..." Ranvir says "Bohut good looking hoon I Know. Aur agar tumhe lagta hai ki mere jaisa cool stud, hindi films nahi dekhta, toh yeh tumhari galat fehmi hai, kyun ki main dekhta hoon. Toh yeh jo tumhara naatak hai na, yeh kaam nahi karne waala, So back off." Ragini says "Tum kitne..." Ranvir says "Good looking hoon, pata hai mujhe." Ragini says "Sick ho." Ranvir says "Main sick hoon?" Ragini nods and says "Haan" Ranvir says "Main sick hoon?" he turns and thinks "Main sick hoon?" He then says "Mujhe sick bolti hai." He turns back at Ragini and says "Oh hello kuch acha bolo." Ragini says "Tum jaise bigade huye ka ilaaj kisi doctor ke paas bhi nahi hai." Ranvir says "oh hello, maine tumse maanga bhi nahi hai ilaaj. Main Jaa raha hoon." Ranvir leaves, Ragini let's out a sigh and then says "Billi?" She begins to look for the kitten.

Ragini walks back to the bus stop, she is talking to herself. "Ragini tu bhi na, agar billi nahi hai toh theek hi hogi." She looks at Ranvir and then says "Uss bewakoof ke palle kyun padh rahi hai? Chod! Aaj mere sapno ka pehla din hai. Bauji ki mehnat" she checks the time and then sees if the bus has arrived or not. Ranvir is trying to start his car, but it's unable to start. He gets annoyed, Ragini sees Ranvir and then smiles. Ranvir looks at Ragini, then Ragini looks the other way, Ranvir gives her an angry look. Ragini again looks at Ranvir, Ranvir gets out of the car he tries to open the bonnet of the car, but is unable to. A man standing there laughs at Ranvir, Ranvir kicks the car, the man laughs again. Ranvir goes near the bonnet and lovingly pats the car. He blows a kiss at the car and then says 'Sorry baby, maine tumhe maara." Ragini is giggling. "Baby start ho ja izzat ka kachra mat kar." The man is laughing. Ranvir looks at the man, and the man stops laughing and slowly looks the other way. Ranvir gets up in anger. He tries to open the bonnet again, but it doesn't open. 😆 he looks at Ragini, Ragini looks the other way and is smiling. Ragini walks up to the man and says "Excuse me." The man laughs and says "Boliye." Ragini says "Aapko pata hai ki andheri jaane ki bus kitne baje aayegi?" The man laughingly says "Kya pata? 2 minute lag sakte hai , aur 10 minute bi lag sakte hai." Ragini smiles as she gives him a stern look. "Jo upar waale ne likha hoga, wohi hoga." Ragini says "Ji." The man looks at Ranvir who is trying to get his bonnet to open. The man is laughing. Ranvir is begging his car. 😆 the man looks at ragini and says "pura langoor hai." Raini looks at Ranvir and tries to control her laughter. The man says "Oh hello..." ranvir looks at the man. "Ji Ji aap. Arey bus se chale jaaiye...aapko jahaan jaana hoga pohunch jaoge. Warna iss bail gaadi ke saath latak te reh jaoge." The man laughs. Ranvir walks up to the man and says, "You mean main? Matlab garmi, paseena aur bees ke speed? Woh bhi iss, Ms billi gayab ke saath?" Ragini looks at Ranvir "Not at all." Ranvir is walking around, the man keeps laughing at him. Ranvir leans on his car and sees that Ragini and the man are looking at him, the man stops laughing as soon as he sees Ranvir staring at him. He sits in his car, while looking around and then tries to start his car once again. This time his car starts. Ranvir screams "YES!" and he starts to tease the man by laughing and making funny faces 😆 The man doesn't laugh. Ranvir presses the accelerator, but the car comes to a sudden stop. The man begins to laugh out loud again and teases Ranvir by making the car noises 😆. Ranvir gets embarrassed. He calls a mechanic. After a while the mechanic arrives, he opens the bonnet Ranvir says "YES! Khul gayi gaadi." He looks at the man and says "HA!" he looks back at his car and says, "Imported hai meri gaadi. Hey dude, main jaanta hoon ki tumhari bas ki baat nahi hai, lekin imported hai, tumhari bumbaiya gaadi nahi." The mechanic corrects him by saying "bumbai nahi Mumbai." Ranvir says "Haan Haan wohi. Gaadi thek karo." The man is laughing ranvir looks at him and then says "Main gaadi mein jaane waala hoon." Ragini gets worried and says 'Agar 2 minute mein bus nahi aayi, toh main late ho jaungi. Aaj pehla din hai trends mein, aur main late nahi hona chahti. Please bhagwaan jaldi se ek bus bhej do." The bus comes Ragini gets happy and says "Bus Aagayi." Ranvir sees the bus coming and says "Bus?" he turns around to the mechanic and says "arrye dude kya kar rahe ho? jaldi theek karo na gaadi. Uss Ms billi se pehle jaana hai mujhe. Paise na issi speed ke dunga." The mechanic stops fixing the car. Ranvir says "arrey main toh mazaak kar raha tha. Mera matlab tha agar thoda jaldi karenge toh..." Ragini walks to bord the bus, but the bus doesn't stop and walks away. Ragini says "Arrey roko...bus...bus..." Ranvir teases Ragini by saying "Bus aagayi, bus aagayi...arrey bus toh gayi! Bus gayi!" Ragini gets irritated. Ranvir stops. The mechanic wateches Ranvir. Ranvir says "Tum nahi samjhoge." The mechanic says "Nahin samajh aayega mujhe, Mumbai ki nahi hai na. Yeh lo apne car ki chaabi. Main chala." The mechanic leaves, Ranvir is trying to stop him as he says "Arrey bhai saahab, lekin gaadi?" The mechanic leaves. Ragini is worried about the bus. Ranvir looks at Ragini. He then walks up to the man and says "Excuse me bhai saahab, aap zara meri gaadi ko Dhaka maar denge please." The rejects the offer to help. Ragini asks a man "Excuse me, doosra bus stop kaha hai?" The man replies "Ek kilometre aaage hai." Ragini says "Ab koi chaara bhi nahi hai." She looks at Ranvir, Ranvir looks at Ragini. He then thinks "Yeh Ms Billi gayab toh billi ki bhi madat karti hai, isko pataana padega." He walks up to Ragini and makes a face, Ragini doesn't even look at him, she begins to walk but Ranvir says "Dekhiye dekhiye meri baat suniye." Ragini stops. Ranvir says "Dekho Ms billi gayab, tum bhi pareshaani mein hi aur mai bhi, toh kya hum ek doosre ki madat nahi kar sakte? You know Indian Indian bhai bhai. Anyway chalo ek deal strike kar lete hain yaar. Tum meri madat karo, aur main main...tumha jahaan jaana hai na main tumhe cho dunga." Ragini is thinking. Ranvir says "Haan, tumhe jahaan jaana hoga, main tumhe chod dunga. C'mon yaar, please! Maine toh suna tha ki Indian kitne helpful hote hain." Ragini is still looking the other way. Ranvir says "Please...bus bhi nahi aa rahi, aur auto ka bhi naamo nishaan nahi hai." Ragini says "mujhe aapki madat ki koi zaroorat nahi, main khud chali jaungi." Ragini walks off without hearing Ranvir. Ranvir bites his nail and says "Ab kya karoon?"

Ragini reaches the office, she reaches goes to the conference room where Rohan is welcoming all the new staff. Ragini enters and says 'Sorry sir i am late." Rohan looks on at Ragini. Ranvir too enters and says 'Sorry dude woh main..." rohan is looking on at everyone. Ranvir looks to his left and is surprised to see Ragini. Both say "TUM?" Ragini says "Tu yahaan kya kar rahe ho?" ranvir says "yeh sawaal main tumse bhi pooch sakta hoon." Ragini says 'tumhari wajah se aaj main late hogayi." Ranvir says 'meri wajah se? Meri wajah se yah uss Billi ki wajah se?" everyone is watching them argue. Rohan says "ENOUGH!" both stop arguing ad turn to look at Rohan. "Yeh office hai, aap dono ke baap ka akhada nahi hai. Jhagda karna hai toh aap dono baahar jaake kijiye, par usse pehle aap apna resignation letter mere table par chod dijiye." Ragini says 'i am sorry sir." Rohan looks at Ranvir,Ranvir too apologises. Rohan says "Now will you please take your seats?" they take their seats. Rohan continues with his speech. 'I am sorry ladies and gentlemen, now where was I. Yes Indicipline. Main apne office mein kisi bhi tarah ka indiscipline bardaasht nahi karunga. Sab office mein time se aayenge, tim se jaayenge, agar aapko kisi task ke liye deadline di jaati hai, toh iska matlab deadline. Main apne office mein koi bhi irresponsible behaviour bardaasht nahi karunga. Am i clear?" Ranvir is worried!

Precap: Ranvir is sitting in the car and says "Oh hello, Miss Billi Gayab...apna naam toh batati jao." Ragini leaves without looking back. Ranvir sees that Ragini forgot her bag he goes to look for her.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sanju di
mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, kya opening hai 🤗 🤗 🤗
RagVir were as always verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry cute, billi and langoor ka yahaa bhi saath nahi chhoota LOL

di update the next part soon please..ab toh i really wanna know isme kya hota hai, and BTW when is ur next part for JTYJN coming up??
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sanju ji shree ganesh to bahut hi kamal hua taaliyaaaaaaan
amazingggggggggggggggggggggg sanju yaar i am loving more ragvir
day by day and its only because of you crazziness ab pata nahin kis level pe pahunch gayi
love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yaar
keep posting yaar tu hi ek luata sahara hai ab
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Ranvir ki Kya Dhaaaaaaaaaaaaasuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Entryyyyyyy
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Haaaaaaaaaaaye Tune mujhe as usuall ek baar phirse maaaaaaaaaardaaalaaaaaaaaaa..Kitna Cute,Handsome Hot SEXY lagraha tha woh Shirtlessssssssss Oooo oooo oooooooooooo Main to pooora time bus yun hoke woh part perha😳AWWWWWW bus Ranvir to EXTRA HI hot tha yaaar uski entry ke liye ek Muaahhh and HUG pehle hi leleyy😉😆
Ragini's entryy awwwwwwww i actually Love aise waali Ragini lol i mean her entry was Beautifull..Loved it
Uske baaaadd omgg Sanju i have t say this Ranvir ki LUCKY carrr..Kaaash woh CAR main hotii🤣dont have any other option yaar Ranvir to sach mein apni CAR ko bohat chahta haiii🤣🤣🤣
Wah Wah Wah Madam saare dilogs scenes sub Kuch bohat hii Awesome Tha..1st epi mein hi mujhe bilkul boriat nahi huyifull of RagVir😍😍😍 I Loved it Sanju..and Ragini ka attitude bhi kam nahitha hahah loved MS Billi Gayab and Ranvir ke mun se nika her ek dilog bohat hi CUTE n Funny tha yaaar hahahaha we will get to see a real New Ranvir in ur FF😉hehe Well Done👏👏👏Cant wait for the nextchap😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME.AWESOME.AWESOME.

It was simply gr8.This ff is even better than d jaane tu one.

Thanks a lot and luv you.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved ranveers dad calling him an idiot😆😆 and ranveers talks with his car.
Intrigued by Rohan.
Waiting for ur next chapter.

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