||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143

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Saniha

@SaniaKaSidShukl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

Awwwwwwwwwww Sanju subse pehle i m so sorryy i m lateeeeee😭

Uske baaaaaaaad Haaaaaaaye yeh waali epi mein RagVir ki masti thori kam thiii😉😉But still i loveddddddddddd Ranvirr and Ragini OMG OMG my fav line

ma mujhe kissi ki nazar lag sakti hai kya? Itni himmat hai kissi mein?" Kya baat hai Ragi kii😆😆😆i love her attitudeeeeee

And thenn

Ranvir looks at ragini, he gets lost in her beauty. Ragini looks at ranvir staring at her and she gives her attitude look once again, bu ranvir is completely lost in her beauty

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Omgg mujeh RagVir rishta scene ayad aagayaaaaaaaaaa hahaha Waiting for thee next part update it nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

@KinSanj

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

@ simra - i'll just upload it now 😊

2 Aashi: thank u hun 😊

@ Sanhu: hahahah arrey aage ka scene aane de..masti hi masti hai...just wait and watch yaar..you'll love it 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

Very cute Sanju!
I am loving your story...😊

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

@KinSanj

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Chapter 10
"Bhaiya, aap kyun itna chaunk rahe hai? Aapko toh unmein koi interest nahi tha na?" Says ranvir checking out Aalekh's reaction. "uhhhhh... main abhi aaya" says Aalekh. "bhaiya? Aap iss waqt kahaan jaa rahe ho?" asks Ranvir. "Woh ek kaam yaad aagaya, ma se kehna ki khaana na banaaye, meri bhook mar gayi." Says Aalekh. Aalekh leaves, ranvir is calling out to him but aalkeh doesn't listen and he leaves. As soon as Aalekh goes Ranvir yells "YES" and inform vasu to not to cook for aalekh as he had to leave urgently. Vasu is confused, ranvir informs her that he will be back and he leaves. Ranvir sits in one of the cars and follows aalekh. Aalekh is really upset and he remembers his times with saadhna, aalekh quickly stops in a park. He sits on one of the benches. "Yeh kaise ho gaya? Mujhe toh laga ki saadhna bhi mujhe pasand karti hai, lekin...usne aise kaise kisi bhi aie gaire ko haan boldiya 😔 Mere bare mein zara bhi nahi socha'pa woh kyun sochegi? Usse pata hi nahi ki main usse ktina chahta hoon... ab...ab main kya karoon? Maine toh saadhna ko pane se pehle hi kho diya...mere saath hi kyun?" asks aalekh to himself. "Kyunki bhaiya, aapne unhe apni dil ki baat nahi bataayi." Says Ranvir. Aalekh turns around and finds Ranvir stading behind him. Aalekh has tears in his eyes, he turns away. Ranvir sits with aalekh and says "bhaiya, aapki aankhon mein aansoon?" aalekh says "Nahi woh...woh meri aankh mein kuch chala gaya tha." Ranvir says "toh aap abb hi nahi bolenge ki aap saadhna se pyaar karte hain. Bhaiya aap mujhse chupa rahe hai? Aap chahe laakh chupaaye bhaiya, lekin main bhi aapka bhaai hoon, mujhe sab pata hai. Aap saadhna ji se keh kyun nahi dete ki aap unse se pyaar karte hain?" Aalekh wipes his tears and confesses "haan main bohut pyaar karta hoon usse, par yeh koun sa naya villain aagaya meri life mein?" Ranvir laughs. "bhaiya chaliye." Aalekh asks "Kahaan?" "saadhna ji ke ghar, unse aap aaj aur abhi apne pyaar ka izhaar karenge" says Ranvir, as he grabs aalekh's hand and pulls him up. "Lekin ranvir, main?? abhi?? Kal chalte hai na?" Says Aalekh 😆. "haan bhaiya yeh acha idea hai, lekin agar aapko time hi chahiye toh unki shaadi ke baad apna pyaar ka izhaar karna. Theek hai.nahi toh agar aur time chahiye toh jab unke 4-5 bache ho jaaye tab karna" says ranvir sarcastically. "Kya bol raha hai tu?" says Aalekh. "Bakwaas kar raha hoon na, toh chaliye, abhi chaliye." Says Ranvir as he drags aalekh with him to the car, and ranvir drives off.
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Saadhna is wearing a tight thin strap light pink coloured top along with light pink coloured loose pyjamas with white polka dots. Saadhna sits in front of her dressing table and begins to brush her hair.
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Ranvir and Aalekh arrive at the Sharma mansion. "bhaiya jaaiye, aapne dil ka baat saadhna se keh ke aaiye" Says Ranvir. "Lekin ranvir iss waqt sab so rahe honge na, aur main aise kaise jaoon?" says Aalekh. Ranvir says "bhaiya uttariye, gaadi se uttariye abhi." Ranvir and Aalekh come out of the car. Ranvir trespasses the gate and tells Aalekh to trespass aswell. Aalekh climbs the gate and begins to follow ranvir. Ranvir looks around and sees that a widow of the lounge room is open, ranvir suggests him to enter through that window and look for saadhna's room. Ranvir says "bhaiya yeh lijiye phool unhe de dijiyega." Aalekh asks "Yeh phool kaha se laaye tum?" "woh park se tod liye the, ab itni raat gaye ko florist shop toh khuli nahi hogi." Says Ranvir. "Ranvir tum bhi na." says aalekh but ranvir interrupts "mujhe baad mein daant lena, abhi aap jaaiye." Aalekh puts the flowers in his back pocket, and hesitantly enters the window and begins to look for saadhna's room. "Saadhna?" Wispers aalekh. Saadhna is still in front of the dressing table and remembers her times with aalekh and then the rishta. Saadhna smiles shyly. Aalekh sneaks around in the house and he enters saadhna's room. Saadhna looks at aalekh from the mirror and is about to scream. But aalekh covers her mouth. "sshhhhh'.arrey main hoon aalekh." Says aalekh in a low voice. Aalekh slowly moves his hand away from Saadhna's mouth. "Aalekh...tum yahaan kya kr rahe ho? Aur woh bhi iss waqt?" asks Saadhna. "uhhhh...woh mujhe tumse...bbbbaat karni thi." Says aalekh hesitantly. "haan kaho."says Saadhna. "woh..woh maine suna hai ki tumhari sagaai ho rahi hai." Says aalekh trying to avoid looking at saadhna. "Haan. acha ladka hai, bohut hi handsome. Photo dekhoge?" Says Saadhna. "uhhhhhh...main...main kaise..." says Aalekh. "Arrey ruko dekhaati hoon." Replies Saadhna as she goes to her drawer and takes out a photo of a randomn guy and gives aalekh the photo. Aalekh is surprised to see the guy. "Yeh ladka pasand kiya tumne?" asks aalekh sounding shocked. "Haan, hain na handsome." Says Saadhna. "Haan handsome hai, par naak thodi si thedi hai'lekin ladka acha hai...aur height bhi kam lagti hai'match nahi banega...lekin ladka acha hai, aur uski aankhein dekh...bohut badi hain...lekin ladka acha hai...😆" Says Aalekh. "arrey picture mein hi tumne 50 galatiya nikaaldi, aur phir bolte ho ki ladka acha hai? Tumhe pasand nahi na aaya?" asks Saadhna. Aalekh doesn't look in saadhna's eyes.
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"Yeh bhaiya kuch zyada der nahi laga rahe?" Says Ranvir waiting outside for Aalekh 😆. "lagta hai mujhe hi jaake dekhna hoga, pata nahi kisi koney mein khade honge.." Says Ranvir as he enters the house through the window. Ranvir is sneaking in the house as he whispers "Bhaiya...?" Ranvir accidently enters Ragini's room looking for aalekh.
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"Woh...main tumhe yeh bataane aaya tha ki..." Says aalekh. "Ki...?" Says saadhna sounding interested. Aalekh hesitantly bends down on his knee and takes the flowers out from his back pocket and says "saadhna, main...main tumse pyaar karta hoon. I Love You." Saadhna is surprised to hear this. "Main...main tumhe apni life partner banana chahta hoon, kya tum...kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?" saadhna is about to say something until she hears someone scream chor chor. "Ragini?" Says saadhna. Saadhna and Aalekh rush to Ragini's room and sees ragini beating someone who's face is covered with ragini's blanket. "dekh kya rahi hai saadhna, aake maar." Says Ragini. Saadhna joins her and begins to beat the guy 🤣. Aalekh rushes aswell ad begins to hit him aswell 🤣 "Arrey...bachao...main chor nahi hoon...bachao...bhaiyaa" Yells the guy 🤣 Aalekh stops and begins to thinks "bhaiya? Yeh awaaz kuch jaani pehchaani si lag rahi hai..." aalekh says "Saadhna, Ragini zaraa hatna...iska chehra toh dekhe zara." Aalekh lifts the blanket and finds it's Ranvir. 🤣 "RANVIR?" says shocked Aalekh followed by saadhna and then Ragini "haan main...Ranvir...Aapka bhaiiiii" says ranvir in pain 🤣 "tum...tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Tum toh baahar khade the na?" asks Aalekh. "baahar? Waise yeh sawaal main aapse bhi poochna chahti hoon, aap itni raat gaye yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Asks ragini 😆. "Main...main...uhhhh...yeh mujhe laaya" says Aalekh pointing towards Ranvir. "Woh toh main samajh gayi...aise sade ideas issi ke paas aa sakte hain..." ranvir gives a 'what the' look to ragini 😆"...by the way aap dono, iss waqt humare ghar mein kya kar rahe hain? Asks Ragini. "main toh saadhna se milne aaya tha, usse...usse congratulate.... karne aaya tha...uska aaj...rishta...pakka hua na...Isiliye." Says aalekh disappointingly. "oh..." says ragini. "Ragini?" calls out a voice. "Mar gaye...papa!" says shocked Ragini. 'mar gaye..ab kya karein? Asks saadhna. Ragini and Saadhna get worried. "Idea" says ragini. Ragini gets Aalekh and Ranvir to hide in the bathroom quickly. Ranvir yells in pain but in a funny way 😆. PC, Kaushi, vinu and malti enter the room quickly "Kahaan hai chor?" asks PC. "Chor..?" asks Ragini. "arrey abhi toh tum chor chor chura rahi thi." Says Vinu. "nahin toh...main toh....main toh...more more chila rahi thi." Says ragini. 'more? Kya more?" asks confused vinu😆. "arrey woh Tv pe Dil Maange More aa rahi thi..toh main more...more chila...rahi..thi." says ragini 🤣 ranvir in the bathroom says 'bhaiyaa yeh paagal hai." Aalekh hits Ranvir on the head and says "chup kar, sab teri wajah se hua hai." "meri Wajah se? Arrey ek toh aapko yahaan laaya..aur aap mujhe..." says ranvir but aalekh interrupts him "haan teri wajah se hi hua hai...kisne bola tha tujhe yahaan aane ko? Tu bahar nahi aith sakta tha..saadhna mujhe jawaab dene waali hi thi ki awaaz aayi ..chor chor..." ranvir says "bhaiya aap..." alekh interrupts 'chup kar" ranvir looks the other way 🤣
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"Tu dil maange more dekh kar chilaayi? Says Malti 🤣 "uhhhh...haan...acha ab aap jaaiye, mujhe sona hai, kal college jaana hai na." Says Ragini. "Acha theek hai tu so ja, warna kal college ke liye late ho jaayegi. Saadhna beta tub hi jaake soja, kal bohut kaam hai na..." Says kaushi. "ji ma main bhi bas sone jaa rahi hoon." Replies saadhna. Kaushi, Vinu, PC and Malti leave. Ragini sighs in a relief. Saadhna goes to the bathroom and gets ranvir and aalekh to come out. "dil Maang more dekh ke more more chila rahi thi? I mean...yeh kaise excuse tha? Itna ghatiya excuse aaj tak nahi suna maine" says Ranvir. "ehsaan faramosh ek toh tujhe bachaya, upar se yeh tewar, chal cha lab nikal mere ghar se.' Says ragini 😆. "bachaya??? Kuch der pehle mujhe pakkad ke itna dhoya, use tum bachana kehti ho? Arrey use acha toh main uncle aunty ke haath lag jaata, kamse kam maar toh na padti..." says Ranvir and he yells in pain 😆. "Ranvir chalo" says Aalekh. Ranvir is walking in a funny 😆, aalekh supports him. Saadhna goes escorts them. Aalekh makes ranvir sit in the car. Saadhna says "Ranvir apna khayaal rakhna." Ranvir nods. Saadhna looks at aalekh and says "Bye." Aalekh says "mujhe tumhare jawaab ka intezaar rahega." Aalekh leaves and sits in the driver's seat. Saadhna watches Aalekh drive off.

Preview: everyone is busy preparing for Saadhna's engagement.😆

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

heya sanjuuuuuu mai apoorva hun lekha ki cousin ... hum dono ne tumhaara part parha hai .. has has ker paagla gayee hai🤣 ... seriously....

Love ur writing

Love apoorva and Lekha

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Saniha

@SaniaKaSidShukl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

🤣 More More More🤣 Okay okay sahi se batati hun apna haal-e-dill🤣🤣🤣

Ranvir is sneaking in the house as he whispers "Bhaiya...?" Ranvir accidently enters Ragini's room looking for aalekh.Awwwwwwwww OMG i was like ab Ranvir kahin kuch Romantic nahi kerdey but but but🤣 Chor Chor Chor🤣Sanjuu OMG i m lovingg The New RagVir🤣🤣 i so wana see all this yaaaaaaaaaaaaar 🤣🤣🤣 HAhahahah MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH to youu kya scene hai aacha aagey chaletey hainn

Arrey...bachao...main chor nahi hoon...bachao...bhaiyaa" Yells the guy ..i Can so Imagine Ranvir Blanked ke ander🤣🤣 Luckyy Blanket actualllyyyy hhahha omgg My Poor Rannn🤣

Uske baad i loved this dilog of Raginii

aise sade ideas issi ke paas aa sakte hain..." ranvir gives a 'what the' look to ragini ".haahahaha Ragini kya mast attitud emei hai yaar i love her dilogssssssssssssssss😃😃😃 hahah

Thek Then Then the best partt

...more more chila rahi thi." Says ragini. 'more\

Sanju i was liek thiss literalyy more more more🤣Oh WOWWWWWWWWWW maza aagaya sanjuuuuuuuuuuuu🤣🤣

AND then

ehsaan faramosh ek toh tujhe bachaya, upar se yeh tewar, chal cha lab nikal mere

OMG They are so much like our KinRul OMG i want a new Serial with RagVir woh bhi yehistroyyyyyyyyyyyy

Mast Mast Mast Lovbed it Sanjuuuuuuuuuu cant wait for the next part n RagVir dance in Saalekh's engagementt i ca n alreadyy smelll Waha Waha Ramjiii Jodi kya banayai jiji aur jija ko badhaayi ho badhaayi if not thn yeh bh hona chayeh uske baad aur osngss bht saare dnace hone chayeh hain Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😃😃

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

@ saniha hi aap ke comments par ker hum naa jaane kya sonch me par jaate hai... I just love ur comments......

Lekha

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Saniha

@SaniaKaSidShukl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha
@ saniha hi aap ke comments par ker hum naa jaane kya sonch me par jaate hai... I just love ur comments......

Lekha

Aww realllyyyyy heheheheh🤣🤣

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vasundhara

@dharaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Sanju di, first about the 9th Part

It was amazing a BIG jhappi to u for writing such a wonderful part 🤗

I am just Loving RagVir in ur FF di, Ranvir ki shaitaniya with bit of innocence, Ragini ki attitude with her mast adaaye and all the chhed chhad between them, everything is very very very cute di and i really love you for making RagVir like this in ur FF

loved every bit of it di
mwaaah to u

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vasundhara

@dharaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#250

OMG sanju di,

I seriously cant stop laughing after reading this part

This was the BESTEST part so far di, every thing was so happy happy...i just loved it

SaAlekh part was really very sweet, Aalekh's description about the boy was really great LOL

And RagVir part net oh bolti band karwa di, it was more than amazing di, RagVir were super cute in this part, their jhagde are always so adorable

I loved this part

"Arrey...bachao...main chor nahi hoon...bachao...bhaiyaa" Yells the guy Aalekh stops and begins to thinks "bhaiya? Yeh awaaz kuch jaani pehchaani si lag rahi hai..." aalekh says "Saadhna, Ragini zaraa hatna...iska chehra toh dekhe zara." Aalekh lifts the blanket and finds it's Ranvir. "RANVIR?" says shocked Aalekh followed by saadhna and then Ragini "haan main...Ranvir...Aapka bhaiiiii" says ranvir in pain "tum...tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho? Tum toh baahar khade the na?" asks Aalekh. "baahar?

I could so imagine Ranvir in this part, u toh have done Phd in bidaai, u know the characters so well, really hats off to u for this

Waise yeh sawaal main aapse bhi poochna chahti hoon, aap itni raat gaye yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Asks ragini. "Main...main...uhhhh...yeh mujhe laaya" says Aalekh pointing towards Ranvir. "Woh toh main samajh gayi...aise sade ideas issi ke paas aa sakte hain..." ranvir gives a 'what the' look to ragini"

I am simply loving ragini ka attitude in ur FF, the way she keeps on replying to Ranvir in each and every thing is superb di

"dil Maang more dekh ke more more chila rahi thi? I mean...yeh kaise excuse tha? Itna ghatiya excuse aaj tak nahi suna maine" says Ranvir. "ehsaan faramosh ek toh tujhe bachaya, upar se yeh tewar, chal cha lab nikal mere ghar se.' Says ragini. "bachaya??? Kuch der pehle mujhe pakkad ke itna dhoya, use tum bachana kehti ho? Arrey use acha toh main uncle aunty ke haath lag jaata, kamse kam maar toh na padti..." says Ranvir and he yells in pain"

And this part toh was my absolute favourite di, RagVir were super, duper cute in this part, they are so adorable together, wish we got to see KinRul in such a avatar in bidaai as well.

Di, please update the next part soon and di, it looks like RagVir will have a great time together in SaAlekh's shaadi, and i think i m right in this hai na