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Posted: 9 years ago
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me too 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will try and update the next part soon. It has been really busy for me. I think I was really quick updating the first parts and now it has been several days so you guys are getting anxious. I guess I spoiled you. The truth is the first 6 chapters were easier to write. I am kind of at a stand still as to where I want my story to go. Also I want these later chapters to be as good as the earlier ones so I am taking my time.
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Well you guys will be happy to know that I am positing part 7. This is more of a filler chapter, but hopefully you still enjoy it. Also side note: Santoshi looks like she does on the show now post makeover.

Part 7

The next morning Dhairya wakes up and realizes Santoshi is not there. He is a bit disappointed as last night she fell asleep on him and this morning she got up so early. He goes to get ready and then heads downstairs and sees that Santoshi is doing puja for Santoshi Maa. He thinks "Oh, so Santoshi Maa is more important to you than me?" He goes over to her and pretends to be all annoyed. She says "Dhairya, I am sorry I fell asleep last night." "I will finish puja later, come I will serve you breakfast." Dhairya says, "Oh no, don't leave your Santoshi Maa on my behalf." She looks at him confused, and then understands why he is acting upset. She says "Dhairya, you are feeling bad I fell asleep last night right?" "Then this morning too I wasn't there?" He pouts like a small child and says "No!" "Why would I be bothered if you leave me to go do puja for Santoshi Maa?" Santoshi thinking "Oh so he is trying to make me feel bad." "Okay, I too will have a little fun with him." Santoshi says "Actually I was up early because I got a call from Sanket Ji this morning." Dhairya's eyes widen a bit and he seems to get more jealous. Santoshi notices this and goes on saying "You know Isha is one lucky girl to marry a guy like Sanket, he will surely treat her like a princess." "He really is a sweet guy and a good friend." Dhairya not able to listen to Santoshi praising Sanket anymore pulls her close so they are just inches apart. He says "What is so great about Sanket?" Santoshi is about to speak when Dhairya says "Never mind I don't want to know." Santoshi amusingly says "No need to be jealous." Dhairya says in a defensive tone "I am not jealous." "Why would I be jealous? "You just happen to be praising a man that isn't your husband." "Why would I be upset about that?" Santoshi smiles and playfully pulls his collar and says "You know you are very cute when you are all jealous and possessive of me." Dhairya looks at her and realizes she was purposefully doing all this and says "Oh so you were trying to making me jealous?" She feigns innocence as he tries to lean in for a kiss when Santoshi screams "Kaka!" Dhairya startled pulls away and turns around to see no one there and Santoshi running away laughing. He runs after her and yells "Santoshi!"

Later that morning Dhairya thinks to talk to Pratap while Santoshi is visiting her Dadi. He sees him in the living room and in a serious tone says "Bhaiya, I want to talk to you about something important." Pratap seeing Dhairya so serious sits up and says "Dhairya why are you so serious?" "Is something wrong?" Dhairya shakes his head to say no and says "Bhai, I want to talk to you about working at your company." Pratap looks surprised. Dhairya says " I know Bhai that I don't have a lot of experience, but I am willing to work hard." "I want to provide for Santoshi the way a husband should for his wife." Pratap looks happy at the sudden change in Dhairya and is glad he is becoming responsible. Dhairya also goes on to say "Bhai, I also want to transfer some property into Santoshi's name." Madhu who is walking by perks up when she hears this and listens in on their conversation. Dhairya says "I want to transfer some of my property and whatever Ma and Papa have given to me into Santoshi's name." "Do you think you can have your lawyer draw up some papers?" Pratap says "Of course Dhairya." Madhu thinks "This Dhairya, he wants to give his property to this naukrani." "One day he will give her the whole house." "I can't let that happen." "I have to do something and fast."

In his bedroom Dhairya is waiting for Santoshi to return and decides that he wanted to take Santoshi on a romantic date that night, as they had never done anything like that before. He had bought a peach and gold anarkali awhile back for her, and thought to gift it to her to wear for tonight. (Thought I would change it up from the sari) He wrapped it up and wrote a note and left it on the bed for her. He then went to Kaka and told him what he had planned and told him to send Santoshi upstairs when she got home. Kaka comes downstairs and sees Santoshi has come back from visiting her Dadi and tells her that Dhairya wants to see her in their room immediately. Santoshi thinks "What could be so urgent that Dhairya needs me to come upstairs right now." A bit worried, she rushes upstairs to their room. When she goes inside she is confused as no on is there. She calls out to Dhairya but there is no answer. She then sees a gift wrapped box and a note attached with her name on the bed. She goes over to the bed and opens the note and starts reading it.

Santoshi,

"Up until now I had never given you any gift or taken you on any sort of romantic date." "Tonight I want to fulfill both." "I have gotten this anarkali especially for you, and I want to take you on our first date." "Please meet me out in the garden tonight."

Love your husband,

Dhairya

Santoshi smiles as she holds the note to her chest and thinks "I didn't know that Dhairya could be so romantic." She starts to unwrap the gift and opens the box to reveal a beautiful anarkali. "She thinks, wow Dhairya has great taste." She then goes to get ready as she wants to look perfect for her date tonight. Before heading downstairs Santoshi goes to Kaka and Kaki's room. They admire how beautiful she looks and are happy for her and Dhairya. Kaka says "I always knew that you were the right woman for Dhairya." "See how much you have changed him." Santoshi says "Kaka, Dhairya always had a good heart underneath all that anger, he was just misguided." Kaka smiles and says "Well I am glad you were able to guide him on to the right path." Kaki then says "Go!" "Otherwise you will be late." "I know my Dhairya, he is not one to be patient." Santoshi takes there blessings and goes.

Dhairya in the garden is pacing back and forth getting restless waiting for Santoshi to arrive. He thinks to himself "Where is she?" "Why is she not here yet?" "Maybe she doesn't like the outfit I picked out?" Before he can ask himself anymore questions he sees Santoshi arrive and his breath catches in his throat. He is speechless as Santoshi stands there in the peach and gold anarkali he bought her looking breathtakingly beautiful. He stands there staring at her while she walks up to him. As Santoshi is walking towards Dhairya she observes how handsome he is looking in a nice royal blue kurta. She was surprised to see Dhairya wearing something like this as he didn't often wear Indian clothes She also spotted the watch she gave him for his birthday and was happy to see him wearing it. She also noticed the candle lit dinner that was set up and the flowers and music that were playing in the background. She felt overwhelmed and happy that Dhairya did all this just for her that she started crying. Hearing Santoshi cry, Dhairya is immediately broken out of his thoughts and he cups her face and says "Arey baba, what's wrong?" He wipes her tear with his thumb and says "Why are you crying?" Dhairya thinks "This was supposed to be the perfect romantic date and my wife is crying." Santoshi looks at him and says "I'm sorry, I am just so happy." "No one has ever done anything like this for me before." "I am so lucky to have a husband like you." Dhairya breaths a sigh of relief that these are tears of happiness. He looks at Santoshi and says "Santoshi, I am the lucky one to have a wife like you." "How could I be so stupid before?" Santoshi says "I don't know, I used to wonder?" Dhairya looks at her in shock and Santoshi laughs and Dhairya realizes she is joking. Santoshi says "You need to lighten up Dhairya." Dhairya bewildered says "I need to lighten up?" He didn't realize Santoshi had such a sense of humor. Then he realized he didn't know much about Santoshi at all. But that was going to change tonight.

Dhairya led Santoshi to the dinner table and they had a romantic dinner and talked and laughed for hours. Then Dhairya put his hand out and says "Santoshi, will you dance with me?" Santoshi nods yes, and Dhairya leads her to the gazebo. (The song tum hi ho is playing). Dhairya pulls Santoshi close, as he takes in the scent of her hair and feels the touch of her soft skin. He then intertwines his hand in hers as they sway to the music, both lost in each other. Dhairya then kisses Santoshi's neck. At first she shy's awake but then she looks into Dhairya's eyes and then at his lips. She bites the corner of her lip and Dhairya takes this as a cue to lean in for a kiss. He kisses her softly on the lips and then whispers into her ear "I love you Santoshi." Santoshi responds "I love you too."
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear awesome update 👏.Dhairya & Santoshi teases each other.Dhairya is jealous now this is something I always like 😉.Dhairya wants to work hard & provide for Santoshi 👏 Vamp Maabhi 🤢.Dhairya's gift (Anaarkali dress) for Santoshi wow. 😊.Santoshi's sense of humour 😆.Dhairya arranged a romantic date.Sairya's romantic date in the garden 😃.Dil garden garden ho gaya.Kissi wissi aammm hmmm. ⭐️ This is for you dear.Thanks for updating.Waiting for the next part 😃
Edited by SymphonyStar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
WOW!!! Oceanus85 👏 this is awesome 👏 👏
Jealous Dhairya 😆 ...my all time favorite 😳
He wants to join Pratap's company and wants to transfer some property on Santoshi's name 👍🏼 ...that Maabhi 😡
New Anaarkali 😳 ...romantic date in garden 😳
Sairya kiss ☺️
Loved it ❤️
Thank you for the update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the comments as usual.😊 I will try and update the next chapter soon, but won't promise anything. I don't think people know I updated my story. Of course I knew rajni and symphony you would read my story. You guys are this forums top two superstars.⭐️ I can always count on you to comment either on my story or comments I make.👍🏼 I have sometimes posted things on other forums and no one even comments.😕 That is part of the reason I enjoy posting stuff on this forum.
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Originally posted by: oceanus85

Thanks for the comments as usual.😊 I will try and update the next chapter soon, but won't promise anything. I don't think people know I updated my story. Of course I knew rajni and symphony you would read my story. You guys are this forums top two superstars.⭐️ I can always count on you to comment either on my story or comments I make.👍🏼 I have sometimes posted things on other forums and no one even comments.😕 That is part of the reason I enjoy posting stuff on this forum.

Me & Rajjo top 2 superstars 😎 of this forum awww thank you dear for your compliments.Glad to know you enjoy posting stuff on this forum 😃. Luv you muaahhh.
Edited by SymphonyStar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Me & Rajjo top 2 superstars 😎 of this forum awww thank you dear for your compliments.Glad to know you enjoy posting stuff on this forum 😃. Luv you muaahhh.

we are superstars Symar 😎
Thank you for the compliment Oceanus85 🤗
We all are waiting for next part 😃 ... update as per your own convenience dear 😳...no issue 😆
Edited by rajni13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update. i always love possive jealous confuse dhairya very much. mindblowing update dear love it very much.
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Part 8

Hey guys!!! I finally updated my story after a long time. Hopefully it doesn't take me so long to update the next chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it. Feedback is always welcome.

The next morning Dhairya wakes up feeling like he is on cloud nine after his romantic date with Santoshi last night. He was in such a good mood that he wasn't even upset that Santoshi had already woken up and was downstairs preparing breakfast for everyone. He decides to quickly get ready and head downstairs to see what his lovely wife had prepared for him this morning. As he heads downstairs, he is grinning from ear to ear and has an extra bounce in his step and thinks "Nothing can ruin this day." When he gets downstairs he was expecting Santoshi to come and serve him breakfast but instead he sees Santoshi serving some other guy breakfast and smiling at him. Dhairya thinks to himself "Who the hell is he?" Before he could wonder any longer Santoshi calls him over and says "Dhairya, I want you to meet someone." Santoshi says "Dhairya this my childhood friend I was telling you about last night, Kiran." (In my story Vin Rana is playing Kiran. I know awhile back it was either Rajni or you Symphony who said he could play the guy who makes Dhairya jealous? So I decided to go with him as Santoshi's childhood friend. I hope you don't mind?) Dhairya with a dumbstruck face stands there and thinks "Her friend is a guy?" I thought Kiran was a girl." Santoshi taps Dhairya on the shoulder and says "Where did you go just now?" He says "Ah... no where, you were saying." Santoshi says "Kiran is town for a few days and dropped in for a surprise visit." "Kiran this is my husband Dhairya." Kiran puts his hand out to shake Dhairya's and says "Hi, it is nice to finally meet you." Dhairya shakes his hand. Kiran says "I am sorry I could not make it to the wedding, family emergency." "Saani has told me a lot about you though." Dhairya looks confused and says "Saani?" Kiran says "Ya, Santoshi's childhood nickname." He looks at her and smiles and says "Only I call her that though." Santoshi smiles, while Dhairya looks at Kiran apprehensively. He can't help but notice that Kiran is tall, good looking and well built, and by the looks of it got along with "his" wife very well. He sat down and watched as Santoshi interacted with Kiran and served him parathas (apparently they were his favourite) and Dhairya didn't like it one bit. Meanwhile, Madhu noticed how jealous Dhairya was getting and decided that the perfect opportunity had come to finally get Santoshi out of this house for good.

Madhu interrupts everyones chattering and says "So Kiran how long are you in Lucknow for?" Kiran says "Aunty, I am here for a few days for a meeting then I head back to London." "In fact I should be heading back to my hotel now." "I just wanted to see Santoshi while I was in town." Dhairya looked relieved that Kiran was leaving when Madhu says "Beta, why don't you just stay here?" Dhairya looks at Maabhi in shock while Kiran says "No, aunty I don't want to trouble you." Madhu says "It is no trouble beta, you are Santoshi's childhood friend and I am sure she would like to spend time with you." Pratap chimes in and says "Yes, Kiran beta stay here with us, we have plenty of space." Kaka also agrees and says "Haan Kiran stay." "It is Santoshi's birthday day after tomorrow and we are going to have a party, so you must stay." Everyone tries to convince Kiran to stay, while he looks towards Santoshi for approval. He then says "Santoshi do you mind if I stay here?" Dhairya looks at Santoshi and sees that she would be happy if Kiran stays, and not wanting to be the jealous type says "Of course she does not mind." Santoshi looks towards Dhairya shocked that he would invite Kiran to stay with them and then smiles at him for his kind gesture. He looks at her and smiles back sweetly.

Upstairs in their bedroom Santoshi says "Dhairya, I am surprised you let Kiran stay here." Dhairya says "Why are you so shocked baba?" "I know you think I am the overly jealous type but I am fine with your friend staying here." Santoshi was skeptical but put her thoughts aside. She is about to head downstairs when Dhairya grabs her from behind and whispers in her ears "Where do you think you are going?" Santoshi says to see if Kiran needs anything. Dhairya says "Kiran is a big boy, I am sure if he needs something Pushpa can help him." "I mean did you see her all over him during breakfast?" "Yes Kiran sir, sure Kiran sir." Dhairya smiles and laughs and says "I think she might have a crush on him." Santoshi shakes her head and hits Dhairya playfully on the shoulder and says "Well she wouldn't be the first." "All the girls in school had a crush on him." Dhairya's smile immediately fades away and he thinks to himself "I wonder if Santoshi was one of those girls?" Not wanting to think of Santoshi liking any other guy he shakes the thought out of his head and pulls Santoshi close. He goes to kiss her on the lips when he hears someone clear their throat. They break away seeing Kiran standing in the doorway. Kiran says "Sorry, I didn't mean to interrupt, but I couldn't find Pushpa and the tap in my bathroom is not working." Santoshi pulls away embarrassed and says "Don't worry Kiran I will help you." They leave and Dhairya sighs in frustration and says "So much for nothing ruining this day."

It is afternoon and Dhairya decided to come home early from work to spend some quality time with Santoshi. He calls out for Santoshi but gets no response. He thinks that the house is awfully quiet and says "Maybe no one is home." He sees Pushpa and says "Pushpa where is everyone?" She says "Kaka and Kaki are at the mandhir, Madhu madam is resting and Santoshi is outside with Kiran." Dhairya gets jealous and thinks "This Kiran is really starting to become a kabab mein haddi." Dhairya goes outside to see Santoshi planting flowers in the garden while Kiran is swimming in the pool. He thinks to go over to Santoshi and surprise her, but instead stands from a distance and silently watches her as she plants the flowers. He watches as she rubs her nose with her hand and accidentally rubs some dirt on it. He smiles and thinks how cute she looks. He decides to go towards her when he sees her get up to get the hose. Dhairya notices that there is a lot of water on the ground and that Santoshi is not looking and sees her start to slip. He screams "Santoshi!" and starts running towards her. Santoshi anticipates falling into the pool when she feels a pair of strong hands holding her tightly. She opens her eyes to see that Kiran had caught her. Dhairya comes there to see Kiran's hand on Santoshi's waist, while Santoshi had one hand wrapped around Kiran's neck and the other on his chest. (Note: Vin Rana has a six pack and is muscular so you can imagine him all wet in his bathing suit holding Santoshi close.) Dhairya seeing this starts to burn with jealously. Santoshi and Kiran break away and Dhairya comes over and hugs her and and says "Santoshi are you okay?" "You need to be more careful, you could have slipped and fell in the pool." Dhairya then looks at Kiran, and although he was jealous, he said "Thanks for saving my wife." Kiran says "Don't worry Dhairya, I won't let anything happen to Saani, I will always keep her safe." Dhairya thinks "No need to keep my wife safe, I am here." He takes Santoshi inside while Madhu, who had watched the whole scene unfold, smiles and turns off the hose. She thinks my plan is working." "Now I have to start placing doubts in Dhairya's mind against Santoshi."

Later that evening everyone is sitting in the living room after dinner chatting and drinking chai and Madhu says "Kiran, Santoshi told us you are a good singer, you should sing us something." Kiran says "No, no aunty, I am not that good." Santoshi says "Kiran don't lie, you are a great singer." "Please sing us something." Meanwhile Dhairya thinks to himself, "Oh so chocolate boy can sing too." "Next, Santoshi is going to tell me he good at poetry too." On que Santoshi says "Kiran is not only a good singer but he is also very good at poetry too." Dhariya rolls his eyes. Santoshi then says "Please sing us a song." She gives him her best puppy dog face and says "For me?" Kiran caves and says " For you, anything." Dhairya glares at him but Kiran does not notice. Madhu then interjects and says "Kiran sing us something romantic." Kiran starts to sing Soch Na Sake and every so often he would glance at Santoshi which did not go unnoticed by Dhairya. When the song is over everyone claps and praises Kiran, everyone except Dhairya. Santoshi notices this and elbows Dhairya who says "Ow, what was that for?" She says "Didn't Kiran sing beautifully?" She gestures for him to say something. Dhairya non enthusiastically says "Ya, you sang great." Santoshi just gives him a look of disapproval and goes to put the dishes in the kitchen.

It was getting late so everyone said their goodnights and decided to go to bed. When Santoshi came upstairs Dhairya was already sleeping. She too was tired and decided to head to bed when she noticed that the water jug near the bed stand was empty. She thought to her self "I thought I had filled it up earlier." She shrugs and thinks "Oh well I will just go downstairs and fill it up again." When she goes to the kitchen she sees Kiran there, and at the same time both of them say "What are you doing up?" They both point to their empty water jugs and laugh. Meanwhile Dhairya wakes up and sees that Santoshi is not in their bed. He decides to head downstairs to see what is taking her so long. When he gets to the kitchen he sees Santoshi and Kiran in the kitchen talking and laughing. Madhu also comes there and says "Dhairya beta, what's wrong?" Dhairya says "Nothing Maabhi." She sees Kiran and Santoshi laughing and says "Are you feeling jealous that Santoshi and Kiran are talking late at night." Dhairya angrily says "No, I am not jealous." "Why should I be jealous?" "They are just friends." He storms upstairs and Madhu smiles and a flashback is shown of her emptying both water jugs.

Note: I thought I mentioned it at some point but I guess not, but Dhairya has made amends with Madhu for what happened. Since she has been acting really nice to him and Santoshi he assumes she has accepted them.

Edited by oceanus85 - 9 years ago

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