Poor Script!!!....Felt sad for Gauri

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sangini is blessed with good star cast, strong concept and ofcourse good editing and direction.But the show lacks script.It's becoming weak day by day.I mean, we understand the concept of the show and what they want us to perceive. But dialogues and the situations portrayed are so bad.
Let's take the case of yesterday's episode.I know Rudr is drunk.On monday's episode we saw Gowri, touching her forehead and recognising that he has put sindoor in her mang.The same was shown yesterday too...I mean, Pihu mentioned what Rudr has done to Gauri, again she did the same(she touched her forehead and was shown surprised seeing sindoor😕)...And again, in fury, Rudr burned her dupatta(At this time, I really felt sad for her😭)....We saw Gauri's concern again for Rudr, when she pushed his hand saying "sambalke"(My girl, he's burning your dupatta, your dignity....Just my POV😭).....We know, she loved Rudr.But I really felt frustrated at the writers when I saw such an action from her.....Somewhere something was missing....(I didn't even liked the way Shankar's mom reacted....I mean, she is a woman....Doesn't she understand what dignity means for a woman.....I'm greatful to the writers that atlast Pihu disagreed on that and went away😳)
I won't agree to Gauri if she forgives him that easily....I do believe in forgiveness.But what Rudr did yesterday was beyond words.He is the one who destroyed her earning.He is the one who always sort solace in her friendship and it was for him, that she had to bear all such insults from RR, mohallewale and even scolding from Pihu😕....She joined in his happiness as well as sorrows.Even when she understood that Rudr will not believe her on what she said about Pihu, she didn't grieved....Infact she admired the love he has for Pihu....And in return, what she got was pain, frustration and insult from him.He insulted her infront of the mohallewale and most importantly her family😕....
I want Rudr to really understand the depth of his wrongdoing.....I want him to understand the worth of Gauri....Gauri should not forgive him that easily unless and until he completely changes and gets a feeling that he wants Gauri in his life....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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given the drastic changes to all of the characters in the show, we'll have to see how they deal with things in the next couple of weeks of episodes. it's too early to say the script is bad - pihu is a confused, selfish woman. she doesn't know what she wants and she's childish. her tantrums are expected but she'll probably wise up after rudra's tamashaa

gauri is justified being stunned. shankar's mom however, is right in feeling how she is - after all, it's her son's wedding and they were embarassed of rudra's behaviour - in the spur of the moment, in their anger, she be ridiculous in some of her sayings

the script isn't bad (yet), hopefully the writers can write powerful scenes, full of logic and consensus because we know the actors can deliver.

binny's doing an excellent job as a newbie! i love her!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sangini lacks proper execution...

Its a brilliant concept of falling in love again... but it could've been told far far far better, without the need to make any chars to look like fools/to be hated...

n somewhr along this lines, sangini falls short, esp in the believability factor... agree that its a show, and there are far worse shows.. but looking at sangini along, with no comparison whatsoever, it's evident.. that there's something missing..

blame it on poor script, or screenplay... the situations shown/actions done/dialogues said... they can be improved greatly.....
n most imptly, characterisations... R love for P, is supposed to be what G falls in love with... but honestly, just being drunk, and sobbing away is not true love... whatever R has done so far... it's just foolishness(yea yea.. blame it on the alcohol if u want, but it's also coupled with a poor mind)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tomuch..sad epi..😭. poor Script....😭
Rudra is tomuch heartless........😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what I felt in y-day episode was.... dialogues for gauri were pretty poor...
whatever Rudra has done to her, she should react profoundly instead of being a meek victim....
Gauri has always been vocal, but y-day her dialogues were really poor.... given the charecter sketch of her she behalved really weak.
I understand that given the situation she was stunned and lost.. but still when rudra was dragging her and making fun of her, then telling her cheap thngs, she shld have reacted!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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IS serial me Rudra hero hai to fir yaisi ghatiya Harkat kaise kar sakta hai ?????????? 😡 Ye kaisi story hai ????????😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i think that yeh super hit drama hai..over the top kinds...i never expected them to deliver a good script cos from the beginning there were loop holes...but now (i know a lot of people will call me silly) i am reaally liking this drama....🤪sab ke sab draam baaz hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well characterization is main problem with serial. Main character of Pihu is really unreal. Audience could not really get why she is behaving like this. I mean before her marriage with Abhay she tells her mother that she knows she loves Rudra but she has started liking Abhay too. And she feels he will be good husband for her.
And Rudra.... Pihu is just married to some another man. But despite of this fact u r happily planning ur friends wedding?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rudra is hesitate and selfish...all he thinks of is himself.
Gauri did so much for him..and in the end he turns on her like he did.
He filled her maang with sindoor....let's see how smart our writers are...
Yes she loves him...was ready to marry someone else as not to be in his way...but the bigger picture is that Pihu is already married...It should turn out where he is the Loser all around....
Pihu will fall in love with her husband as he is her husband.....and he have already accepted the fact that she was once in love with another man...he still marry her although he was humilitated so many times...he accepted her...
Now that Rudra has made it impossible for anyone to marry Gauri as he marry her out of angry...he is doing what he does best....He is an out of control spoilt boy...who needs to grown up and stand on his two feet...and face the world...in this case the consequences of his action.
Gauri...is going to move on with her life..praying to whoever she prays to...finding happiness that one day to come she will get what's is deserving of her...Rudra is to learn the hard way...by the time he realizes how much he have hurt Gauri it will be to late....
He will have to prove himself worth of her love...
Now Rudra..his drinking..will have to stop...his ignorrance and arrogant way he will have to deal with that while trying to get Gauri to forgive him for his lack of understanding and the plain fact that he acted selfish and stupid.....
So let's see what happen from now on...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its not bad script its bad execution

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