New sandhir ff THE RICHMAN'S OBSESSION updated thread-1 LAST PART - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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SPECIAL NOTE

Readers you are not giving me proper feedback i.e., your comments. If it will goes like this then you should have to wait for getting updates, that to small. so,start giving your views it encourages me to write more and more. I am writing this ff even though I have my Auditing and Business law Exams and Seminars.

Actually, writing is my passion or you can stress buster. I practised so much to write nearly 1 year . Then i learnt and started. I had grip in writing subjects and essays but not in stories. So, i decided to give a try on this. keep reading.

Have a wonderful day! bye...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi.
I'm sorry for my late review.
I had a bundle of assigned reading to finish and that's done now.

So, coming to the updates.
I am only going to review on the VidArth parts because those are the ones I enjoy the most. Right Now Parth is being a gentleman and Vidushi is sassing both RD and Parth.
The I'll get a mat so you can sleep on the floor part and parth ka deflated hope made me smirk. Poor Parthu.
Can he have an upper hand on vids? Or atleast his hands on Vids? I'm waitin for Parth to be a little more intense.

Your Sandhir parts were good but I loved the chilli powder lipstick idea the best. Yes it was fairly hot and it's blush inducing to read passionate RD but the image of RDs face when he feels the chilli powder burn is EPIC.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
You are a terrific writer...Please continue the good work you are doing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Hey plz dear.
Continue your ff.
U r really an amazing writer. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
awesome nd hot update
he is so posssive

why stopped end
can't wait
for next

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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Okay so RD doesn't love her but is taking revenge from her 😭
But i must say one thing
The way you pen down your chappys is amazing :D
M srsly in love wod dis work of urs and look forward to it
Please don't stop writing
You're doing a great job bae ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER - 18 NAUGHTY PLANS

Randhir fall down and see the time it's showing 6:00 a.m., he slapped his forehead as it was a dream and cursed himself that why he slept on edge of the bed otherwise he gonna fulfill his wild desires with his (jaaneman) Darling in his dreams. Because, in reality she become Miss. India who is not visible to him though they live under the same roof, oops, in the same room.

Today he is decided to confront her at any cost and will ask questions for her sudden disappearance and neglection to him. these all are side reasons for him actually he want her badly.

He know how he controlled himself this week though he want to do payback for his insult to her but at the same time he want her in his arms forever, ever, if it's not possible till his desires get satisfied which is hardly possible because whenever he kiss her , his hands roam all over her body and want to see them with his naked eyes and suck each cell of her like bee suck the nectar from flower.

Randhir's pov:

She is my flower and only my flower of my garden.I'll always get what I want jaan. I'll only have statute right on you because you are the creation of almighty for me.

Why you are so tempting jaan? that i can't keep my hands away from you in my dreams too. I want that dream to come true except that boy part though it's fine you are congratulating him but why you need to hug him?

He, shake his head for his silly self talks and said "randhir bacchu yeh ladki pagal bana degi tujhe". i know what to do know to bring the rightful owner of my bed and my arms, with naughty smile.

Randhir freshed up and comedown. after half an hour he see vidhushi coming in the house from her work where parth is sipping tea made by maid.

R- (parth tujhe lagta nahiin ab kuch log jaldi tata birla ki shreni mein aane wale hain?) Don't you think parth that very soon some people are going to join the list of Tata and Birlas

P- (woh kaise randhir?) How Randhir?

R- Itna saara kaam karte jo hain and they laugh together. all this is heard by vidhushi becasue she is highly impatient girl she can't keep shut her mouth for a minute

V- why are you laughing like wild animals, animalllss?

R- we are simply laughing but you are showing us live animal planet?

V- whatever? what are you saying just now tata birla and sherni? hah

R- How much time you spent on using your mouth on praising others if you spent half of it in reading SHABDKOSH, oh sorry i mean DICTIONARY that too hindi give you some knowledge.

By the way wildie that's not sherni , it's SHRENI means category. got it! bimbo

V- Are you not getting profit in business?

P- why?

V- He is becoming hindi professor now-a-days.

R- kya kare tumhare jaise log jo desh mein tho hamein hi JAN KALYAN KE BAARE MEIN SOCHNA PADEGA.

Parth interrupted and said, he means public welfare.

V- I know, i know. for your kind information girls are more intelligent than boys.

R&P- yeah, very very intelligent. you both have shown us .

V- whattt?

P- oh keep your cheap thoughts with you . we mean you shown us your intelligence by traping yourselves in your own plan . right randhir.

V- what right randhir. it's wrong randhir.

P- then prove it.

V- done. sanyu and i will face your challenge. ok

P- ok fine.

Both have left the place where randhir is smiling for the success of his plan.

R(thinking in his mind with smiling face)-

Now where you'll go jaan. Today at any cost i'll make you mine forever so you can't think of ever leaving me in your dreams too. Actually you'll not get dreams because i'll not let you sleep as your nights are exclusively mine from today by ravishing each cell and part of your skin.

But I have to do something to kick parth and vidhusi somewhere out of the town so that your so- called BF oops mouthpiece will not become UNWANTED CALLER. I have to make preparations for beautiful night of my life when i loose my sanity to my jaan and take her virginity.(randhir is not cassonava and parth is healthy flirter)

Randhir informed parth and vidhushi at the nick of the moment that competiton is going to held in their farmhouse and said, he'll inform to Sanyukta. but he called her and said competition is in their mansion. He taken vidhushi and parth phone from their room and send them in hurry burry.

AT night, sanyukta come and see the whole mansion in darkness and she called vidhushi, parth but no response come then in her sweet voice she called Randhir. Then light focussed on her face and Randhir come infront of her.

He take steps towards her and said in her ears while biting them softly , today we gonna become one sanyukta. and she shocked completely. Then suddenly...

Edited by bolston - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
I am very happy that you are liking my first ff . you keep commenting i'll give you more interesting parts.
I am asking you again you can send me PM or comment if you don't like mature scenes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Awesome update dear

Loved it
Continue soon
Ruka kyun
Can't wait


p.s : i already read her story awesome ff too
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome job looking forward to what happens next

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