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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Res😆
Unres
Lo ji unres kar diya😛
Hmmm update was kya bolu*thinking*
Baby ek kaam kar mera b story tu likhna start kar de
Superb update
Randhir thinking about Sanyukta and vice versa.
Eli knew about randhir hm chalo kisiko toh pata h.
Poor randhir koi nhi h uska dard batane k liye😭
Book read karega ki nhi*curious*
But will they meet also?
Update soonish😉
Thanks for PM and bugging me to unres😆
Edited by Pearl_TR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Awesome update nidhi
Sholly for late reply
What happened between them
Ab bht curiosity ho RI h
They both love each still phir Kia
Ab he going there
Update asap
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Pearl_TR

Res😆

Unres
Lo ji unres kar diya😛
Hmmm update was kya bolu*thinking*
Baby ek kaam kar mera b story tu likhna start kar de
Superb update
Randhir thinking about Sanyukta and vice versa.
Eli knew about randhir hm chalo kisiko toh pata h.
Poor randhir koi nhi h uska dard batane k liye😭
Book read karega ki nhi*curious*
But will they meet also?
Update soonish😉
Thanks for PM and bugging me to unres😆


heheh😆

aapka high level mera low level hain

book read ka toh pata nahi😉

tysm😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

kab tak res??😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: anum_6

Awesome update nidhi
Sholly for late reply
What happened between them
Ab bht curiosity ho RI h
They both love each still phir Kia
Ab he going there
Update asap
Thanx for PM


wait and watch didu..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
CHAPTER:3


After Eli left Sanyukta moved towards her window to feel the fresh hair which will smooth her nerves...she knew she still love him but yet stayed far away..!! why? asked her heart...for his betterment!! Replied her brain...really is that so? Retorded her heart...you have to be at my side...said her brain..!! I am at my side!! Her heart said...no you are not! Replied her brain...!! Stop..!! sanyukta said shutting her inner conscience...sanyu...better you write something or these thoughts will make you wild...she said to herself and moved towards her study room..where all her writings there...her favourite place...she sat on the chair took out a pen and paper but couldn't write anything as her eyes caught something...the photo frame...

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RANDHIR'S POV

She entered the sets with the roses in her hand which were given by her "boy fans"...today is valentine day...the day of love...the day of red...the day of roses...she was happy with the roses she was carrying after all she is a star...itna toh bata hain...but I wish in that bunch of roses mine was also there...but I don't have the guts to do it...THE SUPERSTAR RANDHIR SINGH SHEKAWAT on whom each and every girl has or have...have is an better option...crush on me...but I don't have the guts to give a rose to my co-star ..tu toh sirf acting ke liye bana hain...pyaar karta hain ladki se par bol nahi pa raha hain..toh phir pyaar hi kyun kiya..?? I questioned to myself...WHAT THE HELL are u thinking...just go and give the rose my sub conscience told me...but how can I..?? I feel so shy in front of her my heart replied and I sheepishly smiled...when the fighting was going in my mind...I felt someone tapping on my shoulder...

~END OF POV~

Kaha kho gaye..??

Kuch nahi reh...kuch soch raha tha...!!vese itne saare roses kya baat hain..??!!!

Aur nahi toh kya THE SANYUKTA AGGARWAL ko sab roses denge na...she said with a proud smile...

The shot is ready please change your clothes guys...the director shouted..!!

Yes sir both said in unison..!!

The shoot was over...it was the time to pack up...

"sanyu,I want to talk with you.."

Hmm...say na...

Yaha nahi vanity van...come...he dragged her till the vanity van..

SANYUKTA'S POV

He dragged me into the vanity van...his touch is awakening many desires in me...sanyu control...he wants to talk with you...we sat down on his bed he started off...sanyu I want to tell u something...how cutely he pronounce my names..( blush ) oh god sanyu...control your hormones...say na randhir...I brought him back from his revive...

Sanyu I love a girl...my body straightened...the blood from my face drained...I was shocked...I couldn't reply to him..."I love a girl" these words were ringing on my ear...my heart crunched on that...he broke my revive shaking me...

U there sanyu..?? his voice brought me back into the reality

Ya ya...I composed myself in front of him...I didn't wanted to cry in front of him...with much hesitation I asked him...

Who is the pretty girl...??

You will not slap me after hearing it...aur nahi dosti todegi...he replied with nervousness in his voice...

I felt relieved after hearing "mujhse dosti nahi todegi" I smiled on the sentence...

Kahan kho jati hain...his voice awakened me from my thoughts...

Haan baba nahi todungi..abhi bata dena kitna suspense...??

~No one's POV

Nahi pehle promise kar mujhe...he forwarded hi hand for the promise...

Promise she put her hand on his...

Batayega...!!

Who ladki na bohout cute hain...thodi pagal hain par mere liye bani hain...uske saamne meine kuch bhi bol sakta hun...aapna dil ki baatein bata sakti hun...she is my pari, my doll, now my evrything... sanyukta's heart was flinching on each word he was saying...she was trying to compose herself...but she couldn't...her love loves someone else...this was not she wanted...

Uska naam jana hain..??

Haan bata na..

Uska naam..sanyukta hain...he closed his eyes not wanting to see her...her head snapped up as she heared her name from his mouth..!!! she was on cloud nine after hearing it...the one whom she loves her...tears formed in her eyes...she was happy...on the other side he was afraid..he was afraid he will get a slap or she will walk out of the van but she deliberatly hugged him...he was surprised...he was not expecting this from her...by not getting any response from him...

Sanyukta said...hug me back na...she softly said into his ears...

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Tears rolled down her eyes...remembering their old memories only brought tears to her...she caressed the photo and said...you know sandhir...thank you thank you so much for filling my life with these beautiful memories although it was for short period of time...but for me it was the best part of my life...I hope you have moved on in your life...I miss you sandhir...I love you...she brought the frame near her heart and cried her heart out till she goes in a deep slumber...

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Sanyu...your book released and it has got an awesome review form the readers...eli hugged sanyu with excitement in her voice..!!

But I am angry at you...sanyu said and jerked her away...

But why?

You didn't came to meet me from two days...she said with a puppy face...

Awww...eli said and pulled her cheeks...sorry...

Koi nahi..sanyukta smiled and hugged her back...

Sanyu ek buri khabar hain..eli said while she broke the hug..

Mujhe India jana hoga ek week ke liye...

Thike hain...kab ja rahi hain? Sanyu asked her with a sad face

Kal subhe...eli said...she was sad seeing her bestie's face

Thike hain...I will come with you till airport...she said and hugged her

Great...eli said

_______

Aur kitna time lagega?...randhir asked his assistant as they were in the plane which had left foe Los Angels

Kal subhe tak pounch jayega sir...his assistant replied

Okay then...he shifted and looked outside through the window

Sir will you read any book? The air hostess asked him

Can you show me the books?

Yaa...here you go...she said as she saw him the trolley

One book caught his eyes...can you give me that? Randhir said as he pointed out towards the book!!

Sure sir...here it is! The air hostess handed the book to him..

Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
res😛
unress😃
wow superb update yaar😃
sanyu missing randhir😭😭
randhir so cutely proposed sanyu😳
sandhir kab milenge ??😒
jaldi milaao unko😛
update soon😳
love u🤗
Edited by scarlet1210 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Awesome update Nidz
beautifully written
flashback was amazing
sare updates amazing hai yaar
padne me bahot maza aaya
sanyukta aur ranveer ke emotions
bahot aache se dikhaye
har chapter me
waiting to read more
sorry yaar us din unres karna bhul gayi aur phir papers milne ki tension
agle chapter jaldi update kar dena
aur ha jab bhi time milega comment marungi

Edited by ...Shrisha... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Superb update Nidz
loved it

Sanyu's fight between heart and mind
Sandhir are missing each other

the flashback scene is awesome
valentine day and Sanyu had so many roses given by her fans
Randhir too wanted to giver her a rose

at last Randhir gained some confidence and confessed his love
when Randhir said he likes a girl, Sanyu's heart sank
but when she learn that girl is non otherthan her she is on cloud nine

will Sandhir meet at airport

love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update nidhi😃
sandhir are missing and yearning for each other😳
fabulously written👏👏
waiting for sandhir's meet...will it be at airport only??
and thanks alot for pm
keep wrting

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