Sandhir TS SHABD Last Part Pg- 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello peoples,
Many of you know me aur jo nehi jantaa janlo na yr.😆
I'm a Sandhir fan and just started writing.
Itz my first attempts to write a TS.
Hope sabko aacha lage.
Title credit goes to my bestie -Glitz-
Enjoy reading.


Part-1


Randhir was sitting in his bedroom and staring at nothing particular. His eyes were flowing continuously. Only one word was ringing on his ears and breaking his heart into several pieces again and again.

" I'm going Randhir. I can't take it more. Tumhe tumhari dosti mubarakho. Par main tumhe uss Sanyukta k sath share nehi kar sakti. I know, u didn't me anymore and I cant tolerate this. I Hate U Randhir, I HATE U."

Someone knock on his door. Itz Sanyukta, his good friend.

S : Randhir, plzzz open the door. Talk to me Randhir.

All she get is silent from the other side of the door.

S : Mujhe pata hai ki tumhe kisise baat nehi karni hai, but plzzz ekbar darwaza to kholo, plzzz Randhir, for once.

Rd : I don't want to talk to anyone, plzzz leave me alone. ( in cold voice)

S : No, I'm not going anywhere unless u open the damn door. Aaise akele rehne se kuch nehi hoga, talk to me Rd.

Rd : (Open the door slightly) Aab baat karne ke liye kuch raha hi nehi hai Sanyu. So u better leave.

S : Akhir huya kya hai ye to batao Rd, y did u and Sreya broke-up?

Rd : Kya janna chahti ho? Mere break-up ka reason tum khud ho. Coz of u I lost my LOVE. And for this I will never forgive u Sanyu.

S : Mein...meri wajah se...tumhara break-up...kya bol raho hai Rd?

Rd : Yes, itz u for whom Sreya leave me. Akhir kon si GF bardasht karegi ki uska BF apni Friend ko jyada priority de. Tum jab bhi mujhe bulaya, mein en bina socche samjhe chala gaya, aur Sreya ne bhi kabhi koi complain nehi ki. And now as the result I'm alone. I HATE U SANYUKTA, I HATE UR FACE, UR VOICE, AND EVERYTHING. JUST GO AWAY and don't show me ur face ever.

Yes, U heard it right. Randhir and Sreya were in love. They were in relationship when Sanyu, Parth's cousin sister came from Delhi for her job transfer. In very short span of time she became very good friend of everyone, specialy Vidushi and Radnhir. And soon Randhir and Sanyu become Very good friends, which is the reason for their break-up.

Sanyu was very sweet but intelligent girl, who doesn't believe in love and marriage. She was always ready to help everyone in every possible way, which impressed Randhir, though he was very faithful to Sreya. But he didn't restricted himself to make her his friend. And Sanyu also started to rely on Randhir more than Parth as he stays busy in office works and in Vidushi. Their relationship was new so they need more time, so whenever Sanyu needs someone, the first name came to her mind was Randhir. And he also gives her this right. But it'll coz these result, itz was never imagined. And today his behavior and words hurt her most.

S's POV

Meri wajah se Rd aur Sreya k bich sab khatam ho gaya?

Sab meri galati hai, mujhe sochna chahiya tha.

Jab sab kuch soch samajh k karti hun to issme barein mein kyun nehi socha maine?

And now Rd hate me. He even don't want to see my face.

And I deserve it. I should leave this place as soon as possible.

Par Bhai k rehte huye how can I leave?

Mujhe kuch na kuch na karna hi padega.

End of POV

The next day Sanyu tell Parth that she has to leave the next day as she got another transfer and the detail of the place will be received from one of the authority at airport. But she don't want anyone to see her off as these will make her weak and she will inform them once she reach the new place. And the very next day without informing anyone, specially Randhir she leave Mumbai forever.


After two days when Randhir came to the academy, he was shocked to get the piece of information.

Rd : What? Sanyu chali gayi, but kahan?

V : yahin to hum nehi jante, Usne Parth ko ye kaha ki use transfer mili hai but place airport mein hi pata chalaga.

Rd : To tum sab ko pata kaise nehi chala? Gaye the tum log usse see-off karne?

P : Aur jab tak mein ye news sabko bataya, tab tak woh jah chuki thi.

Y : Par paaji next day jab tak Parth hume sab bataya tab tak woh jaa chuki thi.

K : Par kahan, nehi pata.

P : Hum sab pichle do dine se use pagol ki tarah dhund raha hai.

Rd : One minute, uska phone hai na? Call kiya na tum logone?

Sah : Oviously, but result zero. Uska phone hi switched off hai.

J : And we didn't have any idea about her.

V : Uske jane ke baad jab uske room ko search kiya to but ek letter mila.

Rd : Kya tha uss letter mein?

P : Ye raha.

Parth gives him the letter which written by Sanyu before she left the city.

" Dear Bhai,

Forgive me and Forgot me.

From your wired sis

Sanyu "

Rd's mind : No way, ye sach nehi hai? U cant leave us Sanyu just like these.

Rd's heart :But tunne hi to usse kahan tha janne k liye.

Rd.M : Haan, but I didn't mean it. Main to gusse mein tha. I know Sreya was insecure but uss sab mein Sanyu ki koi galati to thi hi nehi. Even she help me in my relationship.

Rd.H : But ye to tujhe bolne se pehle sochna chahiye tha na. Usse kitna bhala bura bola, even U said that U HATE HER. Uske baad woh thodi na rukti. And u know how sensitive she is when it comes to her self-respect.

Rd.M : To mujhe daant nehi sakti thi? Swayal karti ki maine aaisa kaha bhi kaise, but nehi madam ko jaana tha na. To thik hai, even I don't care.

Rd.H : Really? Tujhe sach mein koi farak nehi padta. Good, she deserve it. Akhir tujhse friendship ki koi to prize usse milna hi chahiye.

Rd : Shut up u both. Apas mein ladna band karo aur mujhe confuse karn abhi. Ek tomein itna lonely feel kar raha hun. EK hi sath meri GF aur meri close frnd doni hi chali gayi aur upar tum dono ki bakwas.

Rd.H : Sirf close friend hi thi Sanyu teri?

Rd : Agar firse bolna tumse koi bhi to...to I'll punch u. Plzz let me live in peace, jiski abhi bohot kami hai.

Y : Randhir paaji...Randhir paaji???

He shook him after a long session of calling his name but he was not at all paining any attention.

Rd : ( Irritatingly ) Kya hai?

V : Tum bolo Rd, tumhe kya huya? Kis duniya mein ho tum, Yoyo kabse tumhe bula raha hai, but ur not at all responding. Kya soch rahe the?

Rd : Umm...Mein, kuch hi to nehi...I've some work, I'm going, see u guyz later. Saying this he leaves.

Y : Wired.

J : Aahaan, highly suspicious.

Y : Oyye, stop ur flimy drama. Yahan itne prob hai aur tu hai ki ye sab leke pada hai, leave him na. Dekh Parth paaji kitna jyada upset hai.

V : Guys, Parth se mein baat karti hun, tum log aapne aapne kam finish karlo.

Gangs leaves leaving Parth with Vidushi.


V : Parth, I know u r disturbed but koi na koi way jarur milega. Tumne hi to kahan tha k Sanyu jyada din tumse dur nehi reh pati hai, so woh jaldi wapas aayegi.

P : Hope so Vidushi. But pata nehi, Sanyu ki letter ne mujhe confuse kar rakha hai. Jahan tak mein usse janta hun, bina kisi reason k woh itna bada kadam nehi uthaygi. Tumhe kuch pata hai ki uski sath kuch huya tha kya, I mean kuch bhi jisse woh itna jyada effected huya k aaise dur chali gayi aur contact bhi nehi rakha.

V : Nehi, jahan tak mein janti hun aaisa kuch nehi huya hai. May be uske psat ki wajah se to woh chali nehi gayi?

P : May be, I don't know. I cant think anymore.

V : Relax, jyada soccho mat, sab thik hoga. Do one thing, ghar jao aur rest karo.

P : Ghar bhi ghar jaise nehi lagta Vidushi. I'm ok here.

V : ( Glaring him ) Parth, GO.

P : ( Sighing ) Ok.


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Index

Part - 1 : Pg 1

Part - 2 : Pg 2

Last Part : Pg 4



Plzzz tell me howz it.

waiting for your precious commetns.

See u all soon.😃

Edited by Priyanka.saha - 10 years ago

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shalbi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The build up alis actually very good and now I m waiting for the next part..

but as I have read it, I think U have posted boths ite version simultaneously so you haven't proof read it..
there are some errors in name but by reading it I understood by whom it meant so no offence there..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start to ur TS
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The plot is nice
Have you deliberately mixed the names of d3 and ShQ or by mistake
Anyway Plz continue soon

Love
Agrima
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow nice story
Loved it


Sandhir bffs
Rd loves sum one else
She broke up with him
Rd blaming her

Poor sanyu got so hurt
She left



Now rd missing
Whole Grange and vidharth so worried


Cnt wait to see how rd realises his love and get her back



Yr u wrote this story in taarey version too
So I guess u didn't proof read
D3 and sadda haq names got mixed up



Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: shalbi

The build up alis actually very good and now I m waiting for the next part..

but as I have read it, I think U have posted boths ite version simultaneously so you haven't proof read it..
there are some errors in name but by reading it I understood by whom it meant so no offence there..


Sorry for that...
I overlooked...
I'm really very sorry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm SO SORRY 😭
I didn't cheked it properly...
Sorry for the my negligence...
It wont happen again...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: I.Am.DIVERGENT

The plot is nice
Have you deliberately mixed the names of d3 and ShQ or by mistake
Anyway Plz continue soon

Love
Agrima



I'm Really very SORRY
I Overlooked it
SORRY
StarBull thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Yr u wrote this story in taarey version too
So I guess u didn't proof read
D3 and sadda haq names got mixed up



Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling


I'm really very Sorry
It wont happen nxt time,SORRY
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update priyanka...
loved it..
and yes there were mistakes ,,i thnk you have not prof read ...
but i am not having problem...
so u can edit it asap...for other readers...
update next soon
and thanks for pm..😃

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