My Seventh Sandhir OS- LETS MAKE A PROMISE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Helloo all !!
m here to pakaofy all wid my another OS 😆
SORRY HA !!🤣
btw i typed it tuesday ko i guess..n posting it today😳
Hope u all like it ..its somewhere wat i really want to happen at d end of this Track!!😃
Enjoy!!


Sandhir OS- Lets Make A Promise

Its been a long time since sandhir were trying to hide their respective problems from each other . Sandhir were going through d most difficult phases of their lives. On one side Randhir was stuck wid Ragini ..as he had promised Karan to take care of her ..n on d other side Sanyukta was busy wid her mother's tumor treatment . Both wanted to share all their pain..all their sorrows but den ..it was not approved by their destiny . About one month ago ..the secrets cudnt be hidden anymore . Randhir got to know abt sanyukta's problem when he heard her talking to doctor discussing abt her mother . N on d same day ..Yoyo told Sanyukta abt who is Ragini n why randhir is helping her n also abt karan's death. Both confronted each other abt d same ..n supported each other throughout this tough time !! But there was an awkwardness n hesitation between them . They didn't exchanged any words ...just used to help each other !! sanyukta used to cheer up ragini n help her ...n here randhir used to go wid sanyukta n her mom for check ups n treatment n help her in other ways as well . But actually in this one month they didn't speak their heart out !! they didn't share anything ...they were all silent .

Now After one month ..After going through such a crucial n difficult time finally Sandhir's problems were sorted !! Ragini's brothers accepted her n took her wid them happily ..while on d other hand Sanyukta's mother's health was improving n she will be perfectly fine in a week or two.

Sandhir cudnt believe dat finally ..that painful time is over . But doesn't it happens ..dat when u get out of some really terrible ..All ur frustration bursts out as tears n anger... N same happened wid Sanyukta !!

Sanyukta was in lab ..working on machine . actually not working but just letting out all her frustration.

Just den Randhir entered . sanyukta's hands stopped working ...feeling d presence of him ..she turned to see him ..n yes !! He was as well in d same state as she was.. eyes all red bcoz of excessive crying N heart just wanted to speak out all d frustration . There was complete silence bw them ..but both just wanted to fight wid each other..share their sorrow..share all dat critical time they have been through !!

They started taking baby steps towards each other ..heads down !!

Randhir just said one word .."sanyukta" n she didn't let him complete..she sealed her lips wid his ..holding him tightly ...n in response he did d same .. he too tightened his grip on her ..pushed her more into him ...n indulged into a passionate kiss. That kiss was just not a kiss but actually it was sandhir's all frustration dat they were letting out ! All pain ...!!They wanted to tell each other how much they Love each other ..how much they missed each other...n how much they needed each other.

They were feeling each other...loving each other...living each other !! Just wanted dat moment to freeze there . They were together after a long time ...n this time was killing them !!

Finally..after a vry long..emotional ..n passionate kiss both left each other .

S - ek baar nahi bata sakte the

R - who sanyukta..

s- chup ..ekdum chup !! samajhte kya ho ..sab kuch akele handle karloge !!

R - are meri baat to suno

S - tum chup raho .. agar tumhein kuch ho jata toh !! kitni baar pucha maine ..but u were just quite !!

R - sanyukta ..ek baar suno toh sahi

S - nahi ..u just shut up !! Kitni darr gayi thi main ..n isi wajah se I didn't told u abt my mom as well !! pata hai how difficultly I handled myself !!

R - I know but..

S - tumhein itni buri halat mein dekhke I was so heartbroken !! main tumhein aur pareshan nahi karna chati thi !! n upar se ye sab ho gaya ..karan...n tumne ek baar Mujhe nahi bataya !!

R - haan but who...

S - wat do u think of urself !! I know ki kitna hurt kiya tumne khudko ...but nahi Mujhe ek baar nahi bata sakte the !

N she started crying badly ... hitting him hard on his chest n shoulders !! Randhir just cudnt see her like that more for even a second ...he had to stop her .He just holded her tightly from her shoulders to bring her back in her senses.

R - enough ..sanyukta !! bas..now let me speak !! ab main bolunga n tum sunogi !! U know ki maine tumhein kyun nahi bataya tha ..dat was bcoz of who log bohot zyada dangerous the !! who Mujhe dekh chuke the n agar tumhein mere saath dekhte toh dey cud hve harmed u !! n ab mujh mein tumhein khone ki takat nahi hai ..after loosing all my closed one now u r d only reason m in dis world . !!

Sanyukta kept her palm on his lips ..but he was not in mood to stop .!!

R - nahi sanyukta ..let me speak !! U know ab ek tumhi ho jo meri life mein sabse important ho !! I cant live widout u !! n m really sorry ki jab tumhein meri zaroorat thi...I was not there for u !! Tumhari mom ki health itni kharab thi ..n I was not even there to help u ..m sorry !! I know I don't even deserve to ask u for forgiveness but plz ...maaf kardo Mujhe !!

N he just broke down infront of her ! tears started rolling down his cheeks badly ...he sat on d floor while sanyukta too sat down . she took his face in her palms !

S - I m sorry randhir..maine kuch zyada hi bol diya !! N it was not ur fault ..tumhein toh pata bhi nahi tha meri mom ke bare mein !! n u were stuck wid ragini .. tumne jaan ke thodi na kiya !! n idhar mein maa ke saath busy thi ...actually it is neither ur fault nor mine ..

R - its just dat our situation was worst ...very worst !! yes ..n ab finally everything is sorted !! pata hai I was dying to be wid u ..to share everything

S - achha toh main toh jaise bohot maze mein thi . I missed my sadu a lot !!

She started to cheer up him n the situation ..n it worked .

R - maine bhi apni farzi ko bohot miss kiya ...tumse fight na karun toh din pura nahi hota !!

S - yeps ...same here !! toh chalo kasar puri kar lete hain..

N she started hitting him on his shoulders ..while he just smiled n holded her hands. Both were just so delighted to feel d pleasure of fighting wid each other . They were fighting after a very long time ..Sandhir smiled brightly n joined their foreheads .

R - but sanyukta LETS MAKE A PROMISE dat from nxt time agar aisa kuch bhi hota hai ya agar hum kisi bhi problem mein honge toh..

S - toh sabse pehle ..we ll tell each other n hum saath mein uska solution nikalenge !!

R - yes !! now whatever may happen ...we'll be facing all d problems together .

S - No misunderstanding bw us ...we'll just share all d sorrows n happiness wid each other.

R - coz we r soul partners

S - yes ..coz we r two hearts but one soul !!

Sandhir- coz We ARE SANDHIR !!

N wid this both indulged into a bone crushing wala hug .

Yes...after that horrible phase of their lives ...both were finally together !! Their Happiness ...togetherness n love cud clearly be seen ..N now they will Face every problem not as Randhir n Sanyukta..but as Sandhir .


So guys hope u all liked it ..do leave ur precious reviews !!

coz they encourage me to write more 😳

Lots of Love ..kisses ☺️

Hugs 🤗

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scarlet1210 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
unres
awesome os sweety👏
nd the bst part is sandhir r together at the end😳
loved it
keep writing dear:))
Edited by scarlet1210 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res to be unres soon...😃
...edited...
First thankyou for this awesome piece of work, really enjoyed reading 😃
The best part Sandhir are together in the end and fav part...i don't have to right anything its so obvious what could that be 😆
Liked yourwriting way of conveying to readers...so simple yet bindas. 👏
Edited by Supermagical - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsumm os yr
i hope it happens in real
loved tje convo bw sandhir
keep writin more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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meri cheeku🤗
awesome update dear👏
keep rocking😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shivi 🤗
Such an awesome os yaara
Tu kitta mast likhti hai
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful os yr
I so wish aesa hi ho


Cnt see sandhir like this
Separate fighting alone


I want them to be together fighting against the world

They r each other world

Sanyi ne bolna chalo ki toh chup hi nhi hui

At last together




Yr shivu why don't u make ur own writing index
U have written so many os
U r writing ff's too



Make ur writing index


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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soo cute os...
keep writing more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagl

Res #UnresAfterSHQ ...XD

Late hogayi unres krne mai
Sholly 😳
Haye shivu kitni jaldi sab thik hogaya
I so want this to happen in the show😃😳
Beautiful os 😳
Keep writing meri jaan😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shivu 🤗
Mast OS👏👏👏

I loved that line that they wud face their problems being SANDHIR and not as individuals😃

U are a fab writer!!!
I'm addicted to ur writing😆😆

Keep writing


Lots of love and good wishes,
Asmu😳



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