sandhir ff : the one-sided complete lovestory - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes the twist in tale.But that will be revealed in the next part.Hope you liked this and the next will be better I promise.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
hey what a start dear.

it was awesome.

read all part in one go.

lovely piece of writing dear.

if possible do pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NYC beginning
if possible do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
PART-3
Randhir had noticed Sanyukta on the first day of college itself.Not only noticed but he had also fallen for her.She was a fairy in disguise for him.She used to rumage through his dreams day and night.
But he had seen Sanyukta and Parth always together.Never had he got a chance to talk to her and now he understood that Parth and Sanyukta were made for each other.So he didnt like to interrrupt.
He had always liked to be around her,whether in class or cantene.But never wanted to intervene her and Parth's privacy.And so he always used to avoid eye-locks and maintained the distance.Watching Sanyu and Parth playing in the lab.
Randhir's POV
They are perfect together.They would make excellent partners.But kya karun can't stop thinking about her.Uski ek jhalak dekhne toh roj college aata hun.Oh God!Kya Karoon! I want her to be happy but that can't happen with me.So its best I try to forget her.I know thats not possible but try toh kar sakta hun.
Nobody's POV
He left them enjoying themselves.
Parth:Agar tere dreamboy ne hume aise dekh liya toh tera packup toh pakka...
Sanyu:Kuch bhi yaar! We are just friends and as such usne aaj tak mujhe theek se nahi dekha to kya jealous hoga...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
thats it guys...i know its quite slow and boring but i want to make it alittle dramatic so...hope u like it and the twist...there are many more twists to come so stay tuned...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow nice
So rd also loves her
Both r hiding their love

Update soon
Wtng


Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

PART-4

VALENTINES DAY PARTY AT COLLEGE

Everywhere, preparations are going on. As there is valentine's party at college. All are very excited. Sanyukta and Parth are in the arrangement club. So they are having a hectic time setting everything up.

Sanyukta-Today I want to look the best so that sab ki nazareh mujhpe hi ho especially Randhir ki

Parth-Tum kuch bhi pehno Best hi lagogi...sab ko...Don't know about your Dream boy.

Now let's see what happens at the party

Sanyukta was looking gorgeous with her light pink gown and curled up hair. Randhir was looking as usual dashing. Parth was also dressed up ready for fun.

Parth (staring at Sanyukta)-Kaha tha na, you would always look beautiful.

Sanyukta- Thank you kash ye compliment uss se milti...

Everybody started coming and soon the whole auditorium gets filled up. The music is on, soon everybody couple up for dances. Sanyukta sees Randhir.

Sanyukta's POV

Today I will ask him to dance, looks like he never notices me or has never talked to me but I am not going to keep this one sided. It is now or never. I will ask him to dance and maybe he would be friends with me.

Nobody's POV

Sanyukta approaches Randhir. He sees her. She is looking stunning and he cannot move his eyes from her.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

PART-5

She very modestly asks him to dance.

Sanyukta-umm hi...I saw you standing alone...Umm I was thinking if you might like to dance with me?

Randhir is too mesmerized to answer. He is about to say something when he notices that Parth is sitting alone at the table. He again feels that it's improper to separate them. So without saying anything he turns to leave. Suddenly it gets dark and a spotlight falls on Sandhir.

The announcer-You both are selected as the couple of the day and get to dance on your fav song with free passes to a candlelight date at Roses caf.

Sanyukta gets very excited. It's like a dream come true for her. Randhir though he is excited feels sad for Parth and Sanyukta. Then they both dance of Zehnaseeb from Hansee toh phansee( of course Sanyukta's choice)

While dancing, for the first time Randhir looks into Sanyukta's eyes. A very long eye-lock. Randhir feels a lot of love in her eyes but does not understand for whom it is.

After the dance, they have to go on the winning date but Randhir...

Randhir-Look! I don't want to go to any date. Please try and understand. Why don't you and Parth go instead?

Sanyukta-No ways, you are the winner and it's your prize. As such it won't be the same if it's Parth instead of you.

Randhir- I mean I haven't ever gone on a date.You and Parth must be experienced.

Sanyukta- What do you mean, I & Parth must be experienced???We have never gone on a date. As such Parth is just my friend and if I am ever to think of him as my boy-friend I would end up laughing and rolling out of bed.

Edited by sakshi2908 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Guys if you are not liking the ff pl say so nd also pinpoint the flaws i may rectify my mistake. pl i need your support. i really enjoy writing bt due to low response dont feel like... pl aleast like the parts it will hardly take a second...
thankyou to everyone who has liked and commented... i would like more comments either bad or good
P.S. critics are always welcomed. they help us grow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Superb update
Loved it

I hope now rd misunderstanding will get clear
Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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