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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Zumi_Vamp

Yo! Pleasant and Scattering Emotions really well.
Sanyukta's daughter?
Did she died or left?
Or Is their RANDHIR'S FAULT??

Curiousity at Next Level.
Waiting
Zumi

Thank yu so much Zumi :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Isabella-

Aww the girl is shoo cute 😳 😳

Okies now what's wrong with Randhir 😲 😲
He knows her name, he took her to the hospital but he was worrying about his relation with her
Now this is interesting very interesting
Update soon Makkhan 😃 😃

Thank yu so much Chudail 😳 I'll update tonite or kal subah 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ishq2051

Okayy...

U told me about this but I didn't knw u'll start it so soon...
The prologue was really intresting...
Y was rd fumbling?When he told her surname as shekhawat??
Mystery +emotion haan...i so love it...
Update sooon..
N ya do i hv to tell u to pm me??
Lots of love...

Btw this proves u seriously love rains too much..

Hehe..yeah!! I love rains very very much😳
Thank u so much Ananya... I'll PM u..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sandhir_rd

hey awesome prologue chandu.

nice concept

love to read d story.

do update soon.

n pm me whenever u update.

Thank yu so much :) I'll PM u for sure :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Oh My Effin' Lord!
What was that? Was that guy Randhir??

Damn! When the prologue itself can make me an emotional mess, I can only wonder what the entire fiction would do to me.
The perfection with which you've depicted the scene, the helplessness and the hopelessness, is commendable.
I'm spellbound to say the least... You've rendered me speechless..
I'm eagerly waiting for the story to start and the mysteries to unveil.
Update soonish!!!

Regards
Keya

Thank you so much Keya :) Will update ASAP:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: namya

Nice prologue

Update soon

Thank yu so much :) Updating...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue sounds intrstn..
amgin updt..lvd ittt
waitn fo nxtt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rocking_Angel

prologue sounds intrstn..
amgin updt..lvd ittt
waitn fo nxtt

Aww..Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~ Baarish ~ A SaNDhir SS ~




PART 1


It was late in the evening and the darkness of the night has invaded the evening light... The sun-light has set out taking all the heat and moon-light has crept in spreading its cold wings with storms and thunder... But still, in a place in Andheri there was a big ball of heat emerging from a play school with a name board 'THE LITTLE WONDERS' hanging upside down and was burnt into ashes... The fire men of the brigade tried to control the flames but it was of no use... Finally they managed to rescue a few kids but many were lying under the debris pile-up cold and dead..! The clouds started to give birth to great thunderstorms...A major cyclone was formed extinguishing the rising fire... The entire crowd vanished due to rains and some were mourning on the death of their kids...



A black car made its way to the entrance and a guy got down from the car running inside, by the time the fire was extinguished... He turned out to be an officer of investigation 'Mr.Randhir Singh Shekawat'... His eyes became red on seeing the debris pile up...Everyone had left due to heavy rains but Randhir was searching for clues... He was working sincerely but his eyes caught a baby girl, still alive, fighting for life...She was unable to speak properly as she was very small... Randhir ran to her and managed to pull her up from the debris... He saw a by book in her hand in which it was written 'Srishti Shekawat' with her photo in it and there was written something... The book was half burnt but the baby girl had managed to save half of the photo by covering and burning her dress... She looked just like 'Sanyukta', his Sanyukta...His eyes welled up...! He asked the crowd about the kid but none claimed the kid to be theirs ...!!



He mentally cursed himself for wasting time... He had tears all over his face and he carried the tiny tot in his arms and rushed to the nearby hospital...She was taken to the ICU and he was waiting in the visitors area fearing about her condition, thinking about the baby girl and Sanyukta...!



She was so cute... She had a mole on her neck just below her ear same like Sanyukta... Her lips, her chin and cheeks everything resembled her... And moreover she had his surname "Shekawat"... He wondered but just drifted away from his thought as there was no chance for it...! He saw the photo the girl was carrying; Only her photo and her name was visible and there was her date of birth written on it... 12th October..??? She even shared his date of birth along with his surname... A lady was having her in her arms but unfortunately her face was disfigured due to the fire... He conjectured her to be the kid's mother but he had no clue how she looked like...! He was fully into these thoughts when the doctor called him...!



"Doctor how is she...? Is she alright...?" He was breathing profoundly


"Yes... U please calm down..!Can I know her name..?"


"Srishti Shekawat...!!!How is she ...??" he panicked



"First aid is done and we need to do a surgery because she has got burns all over her body... Please pay this quoted amount in the reception and before that we need a signature to proceed with the operation...!" saying so the doctor handed him a form



He read "In case of any seriousness or bereavement, the doctors will not be held responsible... I hereby accept the same and agree to ensue with the surgical process..." Randhir was hell scared but her existence is more important for him ,so he pulled a pen from his pocket to fill the form with his signature but he was interrupted by the doctor "What are you for her..? I mean only blood relations have the right to fill this form"



He thought for a while and said "I...I am...I ammm her Father Randhir Singh Shekawat" he was scuffling with words...



"Oh..! I'm Sorry Mr.Shekawat... you have the full right to sign this form and please don't delay in paying the operation fee..!" the doctor replied




He signed the form and heaved a sigh of relief...! Thanks to their common surname! He paid the hospital fee and was anticipating the news of her condition from the doctor...After few hours the doctor arrived "Congrats Mr.Shekawat...The operation went successfully well and U can go and see her but she is unconscious now as we gave her anesthetic..." the doctor said



"Thanks so much Doctor" His happiness knew no bounds and he was feeling as if his own daughter escaped from death... He dashed into the ICU with tears of relief and happiness!




TO BE CONTINUED


Thanks for Reading..! Phew!! Such a long part..Sorry the next part will be delayed bcz of my exams :( Spare me for my vocab' mistakes...Please drop a comment and feel free to critize and Do click the LIKE button if u like it ;) Buddy me for PMs!!

Love

Chandu

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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