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Chandy

@-PurplePeach-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: coolishparul
when are u updating???
moi waiting

Sorry for being late😭

I hav tight schedule this month.. So many tests

Vl try to update today

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Chandy

@-PurplePeach-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

~Baarish ~ A SanDhir SS ~

Part 3

It was late in night... There was a knock at the room's door..."Yeah come in" Randhir said...
They were none other than Parth and Jiggy who work with him as detectives and members of investigation...
"She sooo cute Randhir. She looks like u and Sanyukta...!"Parth was awe looking at her!
"Umm... It's just an illusion Parth" Randhir covered up the topic
"I asked you to find out her family..? What had happened Parth...?" Randhir asked him
"No Randhir... No clues...!" Parth sighed
"No Parth...How's it possible...?" Randhir was shocked
"Shall we advertise in Newspapers...?" Jiggy said
"No Jiggy..! Pagal hai kya..? The rebels would easily claim the kid to be theirs..."Parth replied
"And yeah..! Randhir...I and Jiggy went to investigate after your call... According to the clues, I think it is Rana who set fire to the school...!" Parth said
"What the hell... But how..?"Randhir asked tensed
"Chuck it off guys..!! Let's see that later...!!! Now let me take a look at the new little member of our gang" Vidushi pierced into the room...
"Vidushi Kumaaarrr..."Randhir gave her a tight hug
"Oye..! I am Vidushi Parth Kashyap..." She hit him playfully
"Offo... Sorry Mrs.Kashyap..!!! How r u here..?" Randhir asked her
"This is my hospital and I'm a doctor here..!! Remember???"She said sarcastically "Parth told me about the kid few minutes ago..! How are u Mr. MCP, long time no see..! Again u'll be moving to San Francisco ...?"
"Umm... I'm fine..! I think so I'll be moving to SF again!! And you dare call me MCP... Sanyukta only has the right to call me that..!" Randhir passed a sad smile
Every one felt sad... Vidushi changed the topic in order to cheer up the mood...
V: She looks so beautiful Randhir..? Why don't you adopt her..?
R: Paglu...What are u talking..?
P: She is right Randhir..!
J: You never agreed to move on but please agree to this Randhir Bhai...
R: But Jiggy...
V: Say yes or no... Then what will you do to her tell me, will u leave her in an orphanage..? I'll not agree
R: Ummm... Okay meri chudail!!!
Every one hugged Randhir and kissed the baby... All were engrossed in chit-chats and suddenly they heard a sweet voice of Srishti... Randhir ran to her...The baby jumped on him and hugged him tightly saying "Mumm...mmy" Everyone were dazed and giggled realizing wat had happened
Vidushi carried her and giggled "He is ur papa..."
"Papa... Papa...Papa..." she went on repeating the same as the word was very easy for her to spell...!
Randhir's eyes shed tears of happiness...Her one hug; it seemed as though he has regained everything he had lost 3 years ago... Parth, Vidushi and Jiggy were very happy to see Randhir like this after ages... Randhir told Vidushi the risk of him being present at the hospital with the baby... The baby was discharged and they moved to their bungalow situated at outskirts of Mumbai where they all live and have lived before their marriage!
At Mumbai, Andheri
Sanyukta stood up and started walking with no senses, with her eyes flushed... She reached her house and was calling for her mother..No response..
"Maa kahan hai"She asked the house servant in her broken voice
"Aaiye ji..."The servant started crying "Srishti ke bare mein sunkar maa beshosh ho gayi...She is upstairs..She is suffering from coma "Servant replied
"Kya...Kya... Maa bhi chali gayi mujhe akele chodkar..."She ran to the room and was crying seeing the state of her mom... It was like a Nightmare. She has seen a lot like these in movies but she never thought her life would become such dramatic! She lit a candle in front of Srishti's photo and was traumatized!
From Here starts the true story of our SaNDhir

Precap: Sandhir's First meet

Sorry guys... First for being late as well as I promised you my present update would be Sandhir special n for the short part.. According to my writing it comes next... Its just an intro of Sandhir's position at present n their friends!Spare me for my mistakes.. Criticism welcomed... Drop ur comments and click the LIKE only if you like it ;)
Thanks for reading Luv Chandu 😳

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Yipeee u updated
I was wtng for it so eagerly

It was so chotu
Bt don't worry will not complaint abut it

Awww the whole gang is there
Vidharth married
They all suggested rd to adopt srishti

Sanyu finally in India
Poor soul her mom in coma

Omg precap super exciting
Sandhir first meet
Cnt wait
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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Zoya

@sandhir_rd

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

omg what a marvelous update chandni.

u r such an awesome writer.

precap is hell interesting

do update soon.

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Sanjana

@Sanj24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

aww chandu di... its superb...
lvd it sooo much yaar...
srishti os soo cute...
sandhir first meet ke liye bahut zyada excited...
update nxt part soon...
aur plz bada wala post karna...

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Anushka

@anudoll

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Aww... Chandu Di, this was a marvelous update
No doubt you are one of my favorite writers
The update was too good
Update the next one soon
Moi waiting

Edited by anudoll - 10 years ago

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sweta

@simaj

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

It's was a nice update... plz let us see Sandhir moments now

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Aaye my fav ff has been updated :D

Itna chota update

Galat baat hai :-/

Haye srishti calling rd papa <3 <3

Sanyu aagayi mumbai :D

Yayy sandhir first meet :D :D

Update soon

Ok -_- or else 🤣

Thankiee for the pm 🤗

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pari1995

@pari1995

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

wow,thats lovely dear

and i m hell excited for sandhir to meet

update soon

thanx for the pm

love

pari

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Khushboo Rajawat

@..khUshbOo..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

d updt was awhesm
loved it

aww srishti is so cutoo
shez colin rd papa

parth & vidhushi r married

realy suprb..

supr dupr excitd 4 prcp..
sandhirz 1st meet

updt soon
waitn!!..

wid love
Khushboo.. ❤️

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