~Sandhir ss: 'Naina Ashq na ho' part 3c updated pg18 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
O teri :o
Aap likhte ho
Apni sexy ko bataya bhi nai :(
Chalo now lemme read ..xD
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Read :D
I am so fast 😎
Amazing di
I mean the concept is amazing 👏
So rd is an army officer
And newly married
He wants to settle down his marriage
But sanyu feels this marriage won't work ;-(
She felt disgusting with his touch ;-(
But he loves her <3
Haww he left for leh ;-(
Ye pakistan wale humesha ;-(
And that sameer -_-
Yahan bhi -_-
And that call :o
God I'm damn excited
Update soon di <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Po po awsome update... po po i loved it... po po keep writing :;D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Wow d emotions u pnnd dwn were beautiful
Plz update soon
N ha pm or scrp me
Nxt time long cmmnt
Pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Read the 3 chaps in a go...
and i thank god that i thought of opening ur pm and reading this... otherwise i would have missed a fine piece of writing
truely a different concept

bechari Sanyu... feel bad for her
Randhir chala gaya...
ek baar haath a jaye yeh Sameer mere... phir khair nahi iski
it was just awsome
aur plz kal update kr dena

Love❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Good and emotional 👏

nice job doll 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
guys wanna ask something ?? I should convert it to a SS kya ...tell me jldi ..????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
guys ...
thanks 4 appreciating my work , and this part is for my cutie pie ,
shivi ...
u r too cute re 😊
...
happy reading guys..




Part 3 {B}
Randhir was in a great confusion and worry! He knew that he has to lose his love either it would be his love for country or his first lady love ...
Suddenly he rushed to his camp, and try to decides for whom he should go ...

Sanyu open her eyes and find that she was in somebody'else house ...
She was on couch , her hands were tied with handcuffs ...
Suddenly ..
Sameer appeared with a deadly smirk on his face ...
Sanyukta was confused and scared ...
Here ...
Randhir decided to stay for his country ...
And he called sameer so that he can look for
Sanyu ...
Rd dialed his mobile no ...
But it was switched off
Then he made a call on landline ...
...and...
" Tring tring "

...
Sanyu was moving here and there so that she can get rid of this cold metal obstacle ...
...
In All this chaos landline's receiver get down and randhir get biggest shock of his life. . ...
Sanyu was crying , screaming ...
Rd heard her screams .and his innocent face changed his expressions. .
Still rd was confused he gave the news to him...
Rd take permission from his officials as India was on a verge of winning this war ...
...
Sameer sat beside sanyu and looked at her lustfully ,
He touched sanyu on his neck , on the same place where rd has given lovebites ...
...
Sameer says" oh ! Sanyu baby u r so beautiful ! ...
But this ugly marks don't suit u.
...
Haina ".
Sameer asked sanyu to move his kurti ,so that he can enjoy. ...
But sanyu refused and cut sameer on his right hand ,
Sammeer hissed in pain .
...
Randhir boarded his flight for Mumbai ...
And tears was continuously making modern art on his face.
...
Sanyu gathered her full energy and try to run. ...
And she passed ,
She was about to exit his house but sameer hold her hair brutally and kissed her with his all might , and left her choking. ...
Sanyukta agarwal " yeh tumne accha nhi kiya ".
Randhir reached at sameer house ,but suddenly he got a call that he has to came back asap as Mr vardhan is died (he has taken rd position) ... ...
Rd was trapped now , he has save either his country or his first love , which was in the hands of sameer
He picked some acid and was going to throw on her , as she refused for make out with devil ,
She was preparing for the worst and suddenly that happened ...bang !!!! :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Aww di love u !! Dis is d most cute dedication😃
n d update was awesome !! Shocking as well.as thrilling😃
that jerk sameer😡
ohh rd trapped but i know he will save his love!!
update soony😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Abh kya karega Randhir??? 😕
phas gaya bechara...
yaha bhi maar diya Vd sir ko😭

cliff hanger!!! 'bang!'😲
Rd aaya ki nahi
update soon... eagerly waiting😃

Love❤️
Edited by Anu_Parsh - 10 years ago

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