~Sandhir ss: 'Naina Ashq na ho' part 3c updated pg18

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys , hi . here i am back with again a damn emo os ... Its all about a army man and his emotions , regarding hus wife , they were newly married and destiny really plays a dirty game with this two souls..
Sometimes life is so unpredictable that , we loses our faith from it , and curse destiny ...
Stay tuned to know what happened with this army man and his newly wedded bride ...
Here it starts ,
Randhir Singh shekhawat was major in Indian army in the age of 25 , he had achieved a lot in this , short span . His life revolves around one thing his " love " ...
He love his country and his duty , nothing else matters to him
He came on leave , for 1 and half a month .
It was a chilling morning of November in Delhi , A lady in her late 50's was making laddos as someone very special is arriving , Yes Major Randhir Singh shekawat was arriving soon , for others , he was a strict army official but for his mother , he was Rannu
Rd arrived and his mother hugged him tight, and they have all maa - bete waali talks
Suddenly Renuka chipped " I had decided your bride " , and she left the room , so can rd think , there is no option to deny as he knew it would be his father's last wish as harsh was suffering from intestine cancer so, he decided and got ready for marriage .
Sanyukta knew that marrying a army guy won't be easy , but as she was Sanyukta and was madly in love with challenges and even she got ready to win over this challenge.
Within the span of a week , this couple was married and now this wedded bliss starts
...
Second day after their marriage ..
Their first conversation
...
Sanyu was searching his mangalsutra as she forgets , where she kept it in night
Rd's POV
As I stepped in my room , it was not less than a disaster
And there she was , Sanyukta , nice name and unique too
She was clad in her baby pink saree and was twisting her nose .
May she is finding something
Suddenly she felt my presence , and she jerked and said
" I didn't do anything major , it was the mistake of that non living thing
But I will find it soon and will report on time at dinning table "
I was totally confused on her statement , next minute was having fits of laughter which results in crying of someone , which was not supposed to be
Rd tried to calm her down but failed , sanyu tried hard to find ms but failed
Suddenly Renuka entered was observed whole scene and says Ki
Sanyu , aap kA ms mere paas h , and she forced rd to make her wear this ,
Randhir took that and made her wear mangalsutra , and when sanyu looked towards with her wet eye lashes
I saw a expectation , a hope ,a tinge of trust and what not which scared me ,
I know that we will meet on these holidays only so how he will ne able to fulfill her expectations .
POV end ...

After a week and with little misunderstandings and a lot of hesitation , they talked ..
Umm Major , will u please drop Me to market "
Sanyu called him major every time but as days went away she called him major more lovingly ..
Rd was a stiff rock infront of her and talked minimum.
But sanyu's liveliness made him smile in her every antique .
Inwardly only ...
Here
Sanyu was a bit disappointed as she was just trying to make him comfortable .
She was already fallen , for him and ...

Even sanyu 's major was already cleaned bold on the very second day of their marriage
But was scared that , he will never be able to complete his work ...
So he decided that , he will not let her cross the line ...
In all this mess
Only one thing happened gud that
Rd got promotion but , as u knew success also brings enemiess
Sameer mittal , rd 's pretended best friend was hell
Jeolous with this move in rd''s career
And as a cherry on the cake
Sameer had a secret crush on sanyu when
He saw her in "thier marriage "
...
Guys i am making it a ts ...
Because this part become a bit long ...
Will update tomorrow for sure ...
I hope u had liked the first part .
Plz avoid mistake ...
Press like button and drop your precious comments

P.s : i know this part was a bit boring but it was
Imp for the base of story ...
But u will definately like second part

Loads of pakwaan 🤣
Sabzi aka doodh
Aka shruti ...:*


index
part -1 : above
part -2:pg 3
promo : pg 6...
...
part 3a:10
part3b:pg12
promo: pg15

~*thread -2*~part 3c
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
Doodh Mata
Kaan pkd k sorry for so late unres
I ws hell busy 😭

But I do see..
That I m d first one to comment
Wooohooo
Woosh woosh
*Does some dance*
*enough*
*ho gya mera drama khatm*

It is really an intriguing TS Doodh..
Sameer as usual ..The Villain here..
I lyk Randhir's stiff nature n Sanyu's chapar chapar 🤣

Will review d rest of d chapters on 19th or 20th
Exams getting over na
I m excited

*Catches pakwaans n eats them*

Loads of masala to you 🤣

Son papdi 🤣 🤣
*Khaa mt jaana mujhe* 🤣
Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome concept.
waiting for d update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshinicool

res kr dun?? 🤣

jaise Teri marzi bulb :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys , updated and sorry 4 being late. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update... 👏
But chhota tha...next time lamba wala...
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme story

Loved it

Rd a major
He's so scared

Sandhir married

Awww sanyu was so cute
When she was finding her mangalsutra

Sanyu has fallen for him
Bt rd behaves strict infrnt of her


Omg sameer the enemy

Wtng for next

N plz no sad ending


Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress

Unreserve
Randhir is so sweet
he cares for her truely dats wy not getting close to her
& Sanyukta's character is way too intresting .. Show's sanyukta is too boring and a cry baby 😆

Anyways
update soon 😊
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum ts
start ws suppperrrb
he isnt getting close to her cuz he is cares for her

Cont sooo sooon dear
loved tha plot
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb as always...👏👏
but
but
but that's cheating yaar aap bole the kal update karoge were's the next part?????😭😭

btw Rd as majore
yaar u know major's kitne hot hote hai i mean strict to hote hi hai
but i love their attitute, their love toward their nation and this makes them perfect,...
btw loved ur os cum ts

next part jaldi😡😡😡
and it's not a request it's an order from little sis to badi wali sis🤣

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