OS:WHAT IF (do read) - Page 2

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Nice try

Loved vidushi s reaction🤣

Thanks for the pm

thankyou urvi

dont thank me for pm

u like my posts so whenever i update anything ur name is among the people who i want to read my work

so its my pleasure that u like it

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Starting gave me heart attack
Bt ending was perfect

Really it was very cute

Totally different

Loved it

Love u
Keep smiling

it was meant for heart attack ;)

thankyou yaar

keep commenting ;)

Originally posted by: mrdodokk

<font size="2">Wow superb ya👏...</font>

<font size="2">I was like what is going on and why is parth proposing sanyu😕???</font>

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<font size="2">Vidhushi's reaction was my reaction too😆...</font>

<font size="2">Well bottom line loved it...</font>

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<font size="2">Conti soon...</font>

<font size="2">Would really loved to read😃...</font>

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<font size="2">Love</font>

<font size="2">Harshita</font>

thankyou 😳

luv u

Very sweet .. with interesting twist

Very good ek pehle to laga ki ye parth aur sanyu ki love story he but phir mera popat ho gya...it was nice attempt..

Originally posted by: KRISHAJADAV

Very good ek pehle to laga ki ye parth aur sanyu ki love story he but phir mera popat ho gya...it was nice attempt..

he he he

thankyou krishna

awesome lovely os
parth telling story to baby dat was too gud
d last line was so gud
keep writing
sry my like button is not working

Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome lovely os
parth telling story to baby dat was too gud
d last line was so gud
keep writing
sry my like button is not working

haha awesome os dear.
one of d best os I HV ever read.
at first i gt scared but in d end u nailed it.
wonderful amazing os.
keep writing dear.

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

haha awesome os dear.
one of d best os I HV ever read.
at first i gt scared but in d end u nailed it.
wonderful amazing os.
keep writing dear.