SanDhir SS: Something Something!!! Chap 6 page 8.. Chap 7 coming soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone... let me first introduce myself.. I am Kritika.. I just love Randhir, Sanyukta and Sadda Haq.. I love to read and write... I had read many stories in this forum... And they all are amazing... So many ffs, os, and etc. This is my first attempt to write a ff... I hope you will like it.. Basically I am from Odisha... This story is very much similar to an odia film.. And the film was fab... I hope you all will like it... Keep reading... 😊

SOMETHING SOMETHING!!!

PROLOGUE:

"Randhir... Beta chalein... Bahut late ho gaya hai..."said a lady in her mid 30s
"Coming Mumma... Only 2 minutes..."replied Randhir

"Renuka ji... Don't worry... He is playing with his friends only.. And their exams are also over... So you just chill.."said a lady
"Ya you are right Anita ji... He also have the right to enjoy..."said Renuka

Randhir was playing with his friends.. He was only 10 years old... They were playing football.. The ball came to Randhir... He was about to kick the ball to make a goal but suddenly he saw a girl.. Not a girl but for him a fairy, an angel who stepped down from heaven.. He was seeing her with a smile in his face..

"Randhir... Ball maar... Randhirrr..."Randhir's friends were screaming but Randhir was lost in his angel

Soon the game was over and Randhirs team lose..

But Randhir was only staring at that girl... He felt something beating very loudly in his chest... He kept his hand and was just smiling.. Suddenly he saw that the girl was going from there with her friends.. His face fell.. He was about to ran behind her but someone stopped him by keeping hand on his shoulder.. He turned only to find his Mom standing behind...

"Randhir, where are you going beta...?"asked Renuka

"Mom, today I felt something which I never ever felt..."said Randhir

"What do you feel...?"asked Renuka

"Mom, aaj maine ek ladki ko dekha... Aur uss ladki ko dekh ke pata nahi kyun lekin aisa laga maano usse dekhta hi rahu... Aur uss time aisa laga maano, yahan kuch dhadak raha tha... Bahut zor se..."said Randhir by pointing towards his heart

Renuka smiled a little and continued, "Bhagwan ne har kisi ke liye kisi na ko banaya hai.. Aur jab usse bhi tumse pyaar hota hai toh jitni bheed ho jitna bhi crowd ho tumhe tumhari dil ki dhadkan tez sunayi degi.. Aur usse hi kehte hai SOMETHING SOMETHING..."

Randhir smiled a little, held Renuka's hand and they went from there...

So guys it was the prologue... I hope you all liked it... Plz comment your views and hit the like button too.. And ya guyz, in some parts there will be my narration too which will be shown as 'Kitu:'... Keep and enjoy reading... For p.m. buddy me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OHH HO BACHPAN KA PYAAR N ALL ...
LOVED IT YRR
PROLOGUE IS REALLY NICE YRR
PLZZZ UPDATE SOON
AND SO PM ME
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice proloug

Bachpan k pyaar n all
Seems intrstng


Continue soon
Would love to rear it

Update soon


Pm me for sure

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... dis was so cute.. liked it a lot..
Update soon😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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V cute!!
Pm me when you update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept...would love to read more...Do pm me when u update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice kritika
Do cntinue soon n do pm me
N also give a try to my story LOVING AN ANGEL
Btw m vrinda
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

1. RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT: 25 years old... Rich businessman... Lives in Delhi... Family lives in Dehradun... Only son of his parents... Very sweet, cheerful, loves to be happy and make others happy...

2. SANYUKTA AGGRAWAL: 24 years old... Sweet girl... Lives with her Dad in Dehradun... Loves a boy a lot...

3. RENUKA SANYAL SHEKHAWAT: Randhir's Mom... A businesswoman.. Loves his son and husband a lot...

4. HARSH SHEKHAWAT: Randhir's Dad... A businessman... Loves his wife and son a lot...

5. KISHORE AGGRAWAL: Sanyukta's Dad.. Loves Sanyukta a lot.. Can do anything for her...

Here it was the character sketch... Hope you all liked this too... Plz comment your views and hit the like button too..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice cs
Loved it yr


Really excited for the update
Do update soon


Love u
Keep smiling

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