my first os- injecting love

shivangi

@daringdarlo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Daddysdoll
Dat was really sweet os yaar.. amm..to be honest i toh myself is an amateur toh wat can i suggest u... bas keep writing and smiling dear ;-)

Thanks dear.. But u r not an amateur..
U have an awesome ff to ur credit.

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey dear,this os was lovely ...
i really liked it ...

Do write more yaar
& dont forget to me pm
Samjhi??? 🤣

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cutierandy

@cutierandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey it was just amazing , it was too adorable and plz do open up , according to me everyone out here has a lot of art and talent in them and plz don't hesitate from posting ur work here...u will get motivated only...be it criticism or appreciation all will be for ur betterment only as we all are friends na so plz do wriite more...😊

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yukta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am shocked is that your first os I loved it yaar and you are posting now this not fair want more works from you
I love to read stories specially on sandhir I am happy new readers are comming I am also new in writing so sorry I cant suggest anything perfectly but I loved it soo much its realistic for me as its not that typical proposal its just straight out that to in clinic loll I enjoyed it thanks for pm shivangi
Love yukta 😊

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ILuvParsh

@ILuvParsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey its ur first attempt nd wat took u soo long to post it ??
It was awesome.
I myself is not a writer so cant really advice u but i m an ardent reader..
So keep posting ... I knw i m sounding greedy but once u start penning down ur thoughts u'll become better after each attempt.
Do send me pms
Akriti

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