//Return Me My Breaths// *Part 3* 27/5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Sorry for not commenting for long...my exams were going on...
By the these are really heart piercing...
It actually made me sulk...
Amazing fantastic n fabulous...
Update sooon n either scrap or pm me ...pleaseee
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ikshu

awesome

update soon


Thanks..!!
Updating today😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRISHAJADAV

awesome part...very good story..update soon..😊👍🏼


Thanks a lot..!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishq2051

Sorry for not commenting for long...my exams were going on...

By the these are really heart piercing...
It actually made me sulk...
Amazing fantastic n fabulous...
Update sooon n either scrap or pm me ...pleaseee


I'll scrap you..!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part- 3

He was lying there almost dead.
His red orbs nullified... His emotions untraceable...
His trachea parched.. His withered condition unbearable..
He lived.. He died..
No more could he have cried.

The Burning fireball rose up the dispersed horizon which didn't seem as beautiful array anymore but a gloomy piece of weeping nature.

With the Sun, rose a tired soul who would have drove the cycle of her stochastic life backwards had it been possible.
Sanyukta couldn't sleep all night; her mere existence died a thousand deaths. She was no more herself but a flesh and blood combo.
Her condition as miserable as the one's whom she trusted once, who was once HER Randhir.
The tiny world of the two soul mates shattered so miserably within such a short span of time..
Who'd have thought that.!!
"Randhir, tumne aisa kyun kia Randhir? Kyun kia??", her voice choked while she continued to shed tears incessantly.
"I loved you Randhir. I loved you sooo much.", she couldn't break down further.
"You killed me Randhir. YOU KILLED THE SANYUKTA INSIDE ME. Kaash ye sab na hua hota Randhir... Kaashh...", she cried cuddling her knees in some dark corner of her room with all those vases, lampshades lying broken on the floor."
But unfortunately, "AE KAASH KE BAAD JO DUNIYA HOTI HAI, KUCH JUDA HI HOTI HAI"..
Wish it existed in real...

"I love you Randhir.. I still do...", her voice faded as she trembled and laid there with a thud unconscious.
"I love you", she whispered before losing herself into the oblivion.

"I love you Sanyukta..", he spoke sternly.
"I won't let you go away from my life so easily. You'll have to come back for me, for that Randhir whom you loved unconditionally.. I'LL COME TO TAKE MY LIFE BACK.. You'll have to RETURN ME MY BREATHS.. I'll do all it takes me to get you back..", his eyes dilated ogling fire...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story
Loved it

Read it in one go

Wht hppnd to sandhir
Why sanyu hates rd


Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling

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