VidArth DT#7 'Loving You Forever Can't be Wrong' - Page 114

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Ohho.. we have to compose it and then write it again. We can't post the rough draft as it is.

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

It'd be a psychological version of beauty and the beast+ taming of the shrew.

I'd call it twisted or wicked.

It'd have loads of manipulations and Sandhir as side characters. (Sandhir are negotiable. It depends on my mood.)

And angsty closet sadist Parth with a misunderstood Vidushi

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

True that.

You should post it since you wrote most of it,

Black coffee brewing in my brain

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Why not make Yoyo and Jiggy as side characters here? And really important supporting roles along with Randhir?

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

But it was your original idea, that made me just tweak things a little bit and add description. Equal credit here, babe!

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

I like how your brain works.

i can see YOYO as that enchanted candlestick and JIGGY as that clock from the disney version!

It's perfect!

Randhir...Idk...he could be Parth's best friend after all these years.

SANYU could be a minor role...

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

You were far more descriptive than me... Lol I'm not so verbose lately!

I type like crazy on my laptop and so silent sally on my cell!

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

That image of Yoyo and Jiggy is really funny! 😆

Why always go with the best friend's card for RD?

Why not make him a new person entering his life.. or maybe his arch enemy? Nemesis? I would love to see a Grey shaded Randhir. A proper one mind you.

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Bah.. the cell and iPad really restrict sometimes... And because of that I have to keep my word count in check too, while typing my replies, which is so not fair! Hmmph.

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

The best friend is so that I don't have to write Sandhir!

You want grey RD? He's a nice volatile character.

RD could try to warn Vidu of Parth's true nature and be a psuedo antagonist.