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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes


One more thing...Parth is his real self only with Vidushi...yelling, mocking and taunting (A real saint doesn't have an ounce of spite in him and if parth really was a true saint, he'd sit Vidu down and sweetly lecture her into oblivion) But no! Instead it's wicked words and manhandling...a true saint would be appalled at treating a girl this way
He has hurt her physically and emotionally and he has no guilty consciousness (? is it even the right word?) for hurting her.
He doesn't seem to tell her to stop doing things for him...stealing and stuff... again , a really genuine nice do gooder would have sweetly pointed out !
He, by doing nothing that is effective encourages her and probably uses her.
He probably thinks she should worship him because he's not like her.
Well, about kissing her?
He never apologizes!
He just calls it a mistake.
He doesn't assure her it won't happen again.
The second time he kissed her, he marked her neck. He knew it was her.
Marking someone and knowing she won't cover it up?
Very territorial.
He thinks he owns her.
His statement that Arpita never argued with him disturbed me on different levels.
The primary one being that he expects Vidu to shut her mouth and obey him like a good girl.
It also made me wonder did he fake goody two shoes style so much that Arpita never thought he was wrong?
There's more to him than meets the eye


Guilty 'Conscience' you mean.
He doesn't want her to worship him, but follow Sanyukta. He wants her to be like Sanyukta.. maybe because he doesn't want to be attracted to her anymore, and feel things that she makes him feel, every single she shows her face and stares at him with those insolent eyes that shine visibly with her admiration and care.

Hahahaha... That arguing line made me smile widely at the screen, because here is Vidushi, so different, so bitchy, and insolent, and messy that she makes sure to defy him on all levels and challenge him in her own way, by loving him and caring for him more and more.
He said that Arpita didn't argue with him, because she was a good girl, a perfect opposite to his bad boy image (like you mentioned). BUT... here, is Vids, stripping him off his charade, pissing him off to no extent with her attitude, her disobedience and taunts for others and her ideologies, that somehow reminds him of his old self, and pisses him off further, maybe, because he is attracted to her, to someone who is NOT a Good Girl, like Arpita.
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Posted: 10 years ago

And maybe subconsciously, he likes the challenge to tame her, but he still doesn't want anything to do with her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
There's a reason I always want to read a dark Vidarth fic.
Parth is not a saint.
'Taming Vidushi' he might want that and it would expose his true self.
Maybe he can't stand the power and desperation of her love
Maybe he wants to break her illusions of a happy ending because he didn't get his
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

There's a reason I always want to read a dark Vidarth fic.

Parth is not a saint.
'Taming Vidushi' he might want that and it would expose his true self.
Maybe he can't stand the power and desperation of her love
Maybe he wants to break her illusions of a happy ending because he didn't get his


Now you are bloody making me fall in love with your Beautiful Brain. Again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


Now you are bloody making me fall in love with your Beautiful Brain. Again.


I will waste my november by doing this,
Taking Parth and Vidushi as I picture them and writing a less kinky more psychological version...Parth being a monster and Vidushi's past...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes


I will waste my november by doing this,
Taking Parth and Vidushi as I picture them and writing a less kinky more psychological version...Parth being a monster and Vidushi's past...


Hey should we post that OS we wrote yesterday?
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's probably what I'd do...
Steal what I feel about these characters and throw them into an alternate world
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


Hey should we post that OS we wrote yesterday?

It's in our twitter...I have no idea how we are going to do that!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

It's in our twitter...I have no idea how we are going to do that!


Ohho.. we have to compose it and then write it again. We can't post the rough draft as it is.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It'd be a psychological version of beauty and the beast+ taming of the shrew.
I'd call it twisted or wicked.
It'd have loads of manipulations and Sandhir as side characters. (Sandhir are negotiable. It depends on my mood.)
And angsty closet sadist Parth with a misunderstood Vidushi

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