SADDA HAQ TS - ITS A GIRL'S WORLD TOO (updated last part page 7) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolishparul

such a sensitive issue
moi crying
do pm me

Thnx a lot dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Firstly wanna sincerely apologise fir being so late ...thnq fr ur awsm support

Here u go !!

Next day randhir went to shanaya's school ..being such a successful businessman no one dared to stop him ...he entered the principals office

R - excuse me mam

P - ' gazing towards him ' hello mr shekhawat ..it's an honour that you came ' pointing towards the chair ' plz have a seat .be comfortable

R - no thnq mam ..actually i wanted to ask something about my daughter

P - shanaya shekhawat right ?

R - absolutely ...would you plz mind to tell if something happene with her son last monday ..i mean in the sports meet ?

P ( looking down , hesitantly ) s.s.sports meet ..shanaya ( she started sweating )

R - mam are you fine

P - yes yes i am absolutely fine ' faking a smile ' no i don't think anything happened with her

R - mam are you sure ?

P - absolutely mr shekhawat ...if u don't mind i have some work to do ..would you plz mind if we talk some other day

Randhir was feeling very suspicious but he mouthed an ok and left her cabin ...outside the cabin too he kept standing trying to register what happened with him in the past few days

Randhir's Pov

I don't know why I am feeling that something happened and this principal is also behaving weird ..but kya ho skta hai

His trance was broken by a girl who was shaking his hand ..randhir smiled looking at her

R - hello nitika beta how are you ( rd knew her because she often came with shanaya to their house )

N - hello uncle ..i am fine

R - aap itne dino se ghar kyu nai aaye ??

N - (hesitantly ) uncle wo muje apse kuch kehna tha ...

R - haan beta bolo na

N - (a bit frightened ) uncle maine abi apki aur principal mam ki baatein sunli thi
I am srry uncle

R - it's ok beta

N - but uncle muje apse kuch kehna tha

R - haan bolo

N - uncle kya hum school ke peeche garden mai baat kr skte hai ?

R - ya sure beta .,chalo

They made their way towards the garden and sat on a bench

N - uncle its about shanaya

R ( worried ) what ? Kya beta plz jldi batao ...

N - uncle us din sports meet mai ...ll..."/!//(/'sjskskjshsysg)/)(2(/(/66/)...and she narrated the whole incident to randhir (i know i know yr u wanna slap me ki abi bhi nai bataya 😆 )

Randhir's mouth felt open ...he was hell shocked ..beyond expectations ..a lone tear escaped his eyes ...he rushed to the principals office ...and entered the cabin ...and shouted

R - mai apse akhir bar keh rha hu ..bata dijie ki kya hua tha ..wrna muje aaegi chheez pata chal chuki hai ..isse pehle mai police ko bula lu

The principal became hell scared and blurted out all the truth ..randhir banged his fists in anger on the table

R - tum log apne aap ko samaj hte kya ho ...u just wait and watch i won't leavee u guys so easily ..but for now i am taking my daughter home

The principal had no other choice rather than agreeing to what rd said

Randhir left the principals office and reached shanaya's classroom

R - excuse me mam

All the students gazed upon him and the teacher too

R - mam i want to take shanaya shekhawat home ...i have taken permission from the principal

The teacher nodded her head in agreement and signalled shanaya to go out ...shanaya came out and randhir took her to the car ...the whole journey went away in utter silence ..they reached home and randhir opened the gate fr shanaya ..she came out and went inside the mansion where sanyu was waiting fr her..she was shocked to see both her parents at home

P - mom dad ap aaj office nai gaye

S - nai beta kuch important baat krni thi

P - kis se ?

R - aap se

And she gulped down her saliva...both randhir and sanyukta sat on their knees and came closer to her

R - dekho princess baby we know something happened with you on the sports day ..plz baby tell us

Princess started crying and hugged randhir tightly

S - sanyu carresed her head ..plz baby bolo kya hua tha

Shanaya broke the hug and nodded her head in agreement

P - us din sports meet mai

Flashback

Guys P/N means princess as narrator

The sports teacher announced

St - so humare 3 finalists hai priya Goel , himani aggarwal and

Princess joined her hands and prayed to god ...and the sports teacher announced

Shanaya Shekhawat

She jumped in excitement and hugged nitika ..

N - congrats shanaya ...but yr mai to is bar bhi select nai ho payi

S - are to kya hua ...there's always a next time

N - hmm

Nitika walked away with her head hung low whereas shanaya went to complete the formalities and came back

Nitika was walking when one of the other school boys started teasing her

B - are koi baat nai is bar har gyi to ..hum jeet wade

Nitika ignored and started walking but the boy again held her hand ...shanaya saw all this and walked to the scene

S - oye bhaiya ...ap bade ho iska matlab ye nai hai ki ap kisi bhi trha baat kroge ..ladkiyon se baat krni ki ek Tammeez hoti hai ...srry bolo wrna principal mam se KEHKe rusticated krva dungi

B - srry

And they all left but were looking at shanaya with eyes full of anger and revenge ..she too glared back at them

S - tu thikke na ?

N - haan thnq shanaya and they both hugged

Present

P/N - us din maine nitika ko bachaya tha mama ...fir hum dono ne decide kiya ki hum ice cream khane jayenge ...nitika us baat ko bhul gayi thi ..jab hum ice craem khane gaye to nitika ne kaha ki mai wohi ruko wo washroom jaa rhi hai ..mai uska wahin ground mai wait kr rhi thi aur nitika ke fon se music sun rhi thi ..tabhi

Flashback

Shanaya was sitting and listening to music ,,when those boys came again and surrounded her ..shanaya was shocked to see them

B - kyu ab nai kuch kahogi ..bhaiya aise nai ..bhaiya waise nai (imitating her )

S - d.d.dekho kya chahiye apko

The boy tied a black piece of cloth around her eyes and she was screaming ..the made her lay on the ground but shanaya kicked them and opened the blindfold ...their anger grew even more and they pushed her and held her hands and ...she started crying vigorously

PRESENT

shanaya started crying badly ...sanyu also started crying ...she hugged shanaya tightly and caressed her hair ...

S - bolde bachcha unhone tere sath kuch kiya to nai na

Sh - nai mom usse pehle wo kuch krte principal mam aur sports teacher wahan aagye

Flashback

Hearing the noise of footsteps the boys left shanaya and ran away ...she got up and removed the cloth from her mouth ...the principal came to shanaya and shakes her

P - shanaya ..shanaya r u fine

She nodded her head in agreement

Present

R - to fir beta apne hume ye baat kislie nai batayi

P - daddy muje principal mam ne ye kaha tha ki agr maine ye baat kisi ko bhi batayi to koi mera yakeen nai krega islie maine nai btayi ..aur wahan itne sre school ke boys nd girls the ki muje pata hi nai tha ki wo kon h

S - it's ok beta but see ap kitne strong ho .,we are proud of you ...aur age se promise kro ki ap mama papa se kuch nai chupaoge ...kuch bhi nai ...aur kahin bhi akele mat jana

Princess wiped her tears and nodded her head in agreement ...she had her lunch and went off to sleep ...sanyu came to randhir

S - randhir

R - sanyukta ye kya ho gaya

S - kuch nai hua hai randhir ...humari beti bohot strong aur mature hai

R - hmm

The next day randhir took a strict action against the school authorities and the principal had to sign off from her position ...the boys were also found out and held guilty ..they were rusticated and their parents disowned them ..they had ruined their lives ...shanaya came out of her trauma and is now lively and cheerful but at times she feels really devastated about the incident ...but her parents are always ether fr her ..thus she has started feeling better and better

7 months later

Randhir had won a deal and was invited on the stage for giving a thank you speech

He stepped on the stage and the auditorium burst out into claps and hoots

R - hello everyone...today i am here not to thank you all but to share a very strange incident of my life ...a few months back my daughter came back from school totally devastated ...i was shocked ..once the girl who was so cheerful and lively was so depressed ..after a few days i came to know that she had been teased by some boys ..i was shocked ...i even came to know that the principal had threatened my daughter not to share this incident with her parents

The audience was shocked ..randhir continued

I took a strict action against them ...but it really feels strange to know that india being a developing country is facing such situations...instead of telling your daughters not to go out of homes alone teach your sons to treat girls respectfully ...even i have a son and i will surely teach him that ITS A GIRLS WORLD TOO and she has her own rights and dignity ...then only we will be able to change india's tag from.a developing country to a developed country

The hall burst out into claps and all the people stood up from their seats and randhir mouthed a thank you and left really feeling that he had made a step towards change

A/N - guys i really wanted to write something on this issue ..hope you liked it ..thnx fr bearing with me ..love ya all ...plz leave ur reviews

P.s - people who res their comments plz unres them soon
Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
😊
Edited by diya12356 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Loved it!
Such bullying should never be encouraged, instead should be restricted as much as humanly possible!
Even I have been through things like these in my present college, but I have fought back against these people! Girls need to be strong enough to handle themselves in such situations, just like shanaya!
I am really happy that you took up a challenge to create such awareness!
Indian myth proves that the whole female kind is a reflection of Devi Maa. And the same indian people don't feel guilty after harassing, manhandling, bullying females! This really is disgusting!
I have seen people going through this alot, but never taking a step forward to fight back!
I just feel, if this happens to anyone, action should be taken and executed as well, so as to teach such people a lesson! Silence can never be a weapon to fight such things!
I really loved the concept, and I am happy to have you as a writer here!
Proud that you took up the challenge and raised a voice!
Good job, my friend!

Keep writing,
Lots of love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow..! Amazing update...!!
Really proud of you...!
That u took the charge and
Wrote about such a serious and important ant issue...!
I think by writing only you have spread a
Lot of awareness...! Really hats off
Really loved shanaya's character
More power to you..!!!
" I am your fan now "
Keep writing
Stay blessed
Love Janavi
Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
gr8 girl luvd it

u potrayd d situation of evry indian girl really faces today it is really imp to show them v r nt weak bus v r silent n d day wen v break our silence v vil b like an unstoppable storm who will sway n destroy everything


it is imp 4 thm to knw tht if u touch our dignity b ready to die




really proud of u n proud to b a girl
Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Hatts off sanya
You penned it down well girl
It did touch my heart
Thanks for Pm
Do keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Sanyaa, I was waiting for your update..
Amazing update!
You wrote on such a big issue which is so common nowadays and should not be encouraged at all.
Shanaya's role was penned down beautifully!
And Randhir being Randhir took a stand against the wrong!
Would love to read more such stories which have a meaning and it touched my heart.
Thanks for the PM.
And when are you updating other FF's.
And I love you for this story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
its superb awesome lovely fab
lovely lovely lovely lovely
amazing fab superb.
very good. lovely
very well writing.
love it.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
such a important topic. m soo grtful to u for wrtng on this topic. such a beautifully wrttn. sooo amazing. people must admit it that its a girl world too. thnx for pm lots of love

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