SADDA HAQ TS - ITS A GIRL'S WORLD TOO (updated last part page 7)

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Introduction - sandhir are married in this ts ...they have two children shanaya and rihaan ( princess and champ ) those who read my ff already know ..shanaya is 11 years old and rihaan is 10 years old ..they are a happy family ...with randhir being a very famous business tycoon ...shanaya is very joyful and full of life ..in short they are a happy family ..but what you will read further will leave u startled

Note : shanaya and rihaan both are in the same school and sanyu and randhir are the owners of shekhawat automobiles

It was one another day , full of joy , happiness and hopes for the shekhawat family. It was the day of Friday ..sandhir chose to take a break from work and spend sometime together at home šŸ˜† while princess and champ were getting ready for school .

S - princess champ jaldi kro u will get ready for the sports meet ..fast

P - coming mumma .,this champ is not letting me take the comb

C - acha u dumb head

P - oye i am 1 yrolder than you ...speak with some respect with girls

R - are mere pyaare babies ladna band kro ...and all the best ...shanaya baby rock it ...muahhh ( he kissed both of them )

They picked up their lunch boxes and bid audieu to their parents ..sandhir were very happy after all they had everything

R - sanyu aaj chutti hai to šŸ˜†

S - shut up !! And randhir chutti hai iska mtlb ye nai hai ki we'll enjoy files padi hai unko complete kro

R - ok madam aur fir aaj muje apni princess ko mall bhi leke jana hai mere Cutiee babies ne aaj Pizza Hut and game zone mai jane ki demand ki hai

S - hmm sirf babies ki chinta hai ...wife to gayi bhad mai

R - aahan ..wife to first priority hai

S - acha ji ...waise randhir humare bachche bilkul alag hai ...specially princess itni joyful , itni smart and specially a feminist always fighting for women rights šŸ˜† u know she is a very mature girl

R - hmm sanyu and i love all three of you a lot and i never want that cute smile of princess and champ to leave their faces

Randhir and sanyukta spent the day with each other and soon it was time for the kids to return ...and finally the door bell rung ..randhir went and opened it

R - princess champ how was ur sports meet baby ?

C - daddy ( showing his medals ) i won three gold

R - wow that's really great my rockstar ...and princess you

Princess was standing with her head hung low ...tears were about to flow but she controlled them ...just then randhir saw this sight of her

R - it's ok baby agr aap har gaye to kya hua ...atleast apne try to kia na

Princess did not reply anything and went straight into her room ...randhir and sanyu both were shocked by her behaviour ..

S - umm may be tired ho wrna princess kuch na bole aisa ho hi nai skta ...champ baby u change ur clothes and have lunch

Champ nodded in agreement and went to his room ...randhir was still not able to digest the fact that once so lively princess was not uttering a word ...

R - sanyu i think princess is not well

S - nai randhir aisa nai hai bas thak gayi hogi

R - nai i know her very well ...muje uska Khana do

Sanyukta handed over him her plate and he went upstairs to her room but found it locked ...he knocked the door ' princess baby daddy is here open the door ' she replied ' daddy i don't want to have lunch ..i am sleeping '

R - are you sure baby ..u r not hungry ?

P - yes daddy ...i am fine

R - so let daddy come once baby ..why have you locked the door ?

P - nothing daddy actually the ac is on that's why. ...u don't take tension

R - ok baby sleep ...

Randhir came down and handed the plate to sanyu ..champ had had his lunch and went off to take a nap

S- kya hua rd princess ne nai khaya kya ?

R - nahi she was saying that she is sleeping

S - wo thik to hai na

R - hope so sanyu

The afternoon passed and princess still did not come out ..here sandhir were dying out of tension

6:00 pm

S - randhir plz jake princess ko dekho muje bohot tension ho rhi hai

R - haan i am going sanyu waise bhi ab hum mall jaa rhe hai na

Randhir went to princess's room and knocked it

R - princess ( knocked ) princess

P - yes daddy

R - baby get ready we are going to the mall as i promised

P - no daddy u and champ go i don't want to come

R - princess ab mai seriously keh rha hu open the door or else i will break it

Princess hurriedly opened the door and randhir entered her room only to find her books scattered all over her bed

P - dekh liya daddy i was doing maths hw...u don't trust me ?

R - no baby its nothing like that i was just worried

P - daddy ab plz mumma se bhi keh do ki muje dinner room mai hi pakda do ..i will not come down i have a lot of work

R - ok then papa apke sath room mai khaenge ok ?

Princess screamed - apko smjh ni aata kya muje kisi ki zarurat nai hai ...go .just go daddy

Randhir was astonished ...his daughter was behaving weird ...he chose to go away and speak to her later ...

NIGHT (11:00 pm )

Princess had her dinner in her room she did not speak even a word ...champ had slept while sandhir were still awake

R - sanyu kya ho gaya hai princess ko

S - randhir i think she's growing aur growth mai aise frustrations hote hai

R - nai sanyu wo aisi nai thi i will speak to her ...

S - randhir chinta to muje bhi ho rhi hai

R - we will see it tomorrow ..now sleep

They slept and soon the morning crept ..as usual all 4 of them went to their daily routine ..but princess had completely changed ...once the girl who did not keep quite only was so quite that it seemt like she did not even exist sandhir were hell tensed with the condition if their daughter but calmed themselves by claiming it to be 1 of the signs of growth or hormonal changes

7 DAYS LATER

Princess's condition was getting worse day by day ..she hardly used to interact with anyone ...she used to spend her day in her room ...although sandhir had tried aa lot to know why she was acting like that but she always gave one or the another excuse

It was one another sunday ...the whole family including princess was watching news ...princess wasn't even speaking a word she had her eyes glued to the tv

NEWS REPORTER : jaisa ki ap sb jante hai ki ladkiyo ke sath ched chad ki kha re badhti hi jaa rhi hai ...aur haal hi mai ek 14 saal ki bachchi ke sath kuch 16 saal ke ladko ne badtimeezi krne ki koshish ki ...

Randhir changed the channel as he did not wanted to show his kids such kind of news ...princess started breathing heavily she started shaking her head ,,years started coming out of her house ...she threw the pillow on her lap and went running towards her room and latched it .,randhir ran behind her bit failed to enter her room ..he kept on shouting ' PRINCESS PRINCESS '

S - randhir ...kholo darwaza ..princess

Champ started crying ...sanyu went to him and hugged him

S - no baby kya hua ...wo princess ko shahyad fever ho ga chalo wipe off your tears ...

Champ wiped off his tears and sanyu made him sleep ..here randhir was on a bout to cry ..his daughter his life was in a such a worse condition and he could not do anything ...sanyu came to rd

S - randhir ( randhir hugged sanyu tightly )

R - sanyu ye kya ho gaya princess ko ...meri bachchi ( they both started crying )

S- rd hum pakka us se baat krenge

Randhir broke the hug and wiped his tears ...nai sanyu bohot hua ab muje samjh mai aa rha hai princess ko kya hua hai ..mai ab apni beti ko suffer nai krne dunga ...tumne notice kiya jb wo girl ke sath harassment wali news aa rhi thi tb she became uneasy

S - haan

R - sanyukta iska matlab kahin

S - randhir iska matlab kahin ( sanyu broke down on her knees and started crying bitterly ) meri meri randhir princess

R - nai sanyukta mai kuch ni hone dunga ...mai kal hi school jaa rha hu ...shh

S - randhir meri princess ...PRINCESS ...

Precap - revelation of a very bitter truth


A/N - guys i don't want to say anything ..just want to say i literally cried while writing this so wrote just this much ...i will try to end it soon ..those who want the next part plz buddy me ...and plz respect a girl and her dignity ..sorry if i hurted anyone but this story was very much needed ...plz read it as a whole i want to spread a very imp message ,,, thnq

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its really really superb awesome fab lovely lovely
lovely amazing fab superb.
you describe everything so nicely
is part na tho muja emotional kardiya.😭
feeling very very bad for princess
i agree with you.
awesome storyline...šŸ‘
loveit. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome concept dear... pls update next part asap...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really good initiative sanya. I really agree to it, these incidents are going on increasing day by day, that too in India. It is so disgusting that boys are given first preference over girls, just because they are boys! Girls Ki dignity ko much Hua toh people don't care. They blame it on girls. Balki boys are the one who do disgusting things with girls, and still girls are blamed, no matter what! This is really shameful. The orthodox thinking society is to be blamed for this!
People need to change their thinking process, so as to make India a developed country. But here people are being bias on the basis of gender.
I am really happy that you initiated this awareness, and I hope people start gaining some etiquettes to treat a woman.

Continue soon, can't wait for the next part!
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very gud concept i liked it updt nxt prt asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its an interesting topic, and I liked the update, so yes I will definitely reply...It was really good, I'm sure Shanaya was teased by a guy..
Anyways..
Love
Prishi
P.S Update Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yr it was amzng
The message u want to convey through is very imp

Great job hatts off šŸ‘

I luved it to the core

The girl who was so joyfull was totally changed due to a incident

I m eager to know the truth

Update soon wtng

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my gosh. this is so intense! thanks for the pm! do pm me again when you update! thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey smily..
Update is amazing yr..
Nd girls also need best ..like other
Pricess le sath jo hua its hurting mw
But this we show everyone
That girls r more active..
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum concept sanya luvd the way u described their parental care
I can guess shanaya was so uneasy cuz of the harrasment she has faced but how its the question
Its horrible that even child is not safe from such types of harrasment
N its more horrible that many a times its due to some people who we know
Many a times it is seen that when a girl raises her voice against it she is the whom people consider at fault maybe its cuz of her dress or her frank attitude
Well here ma question is even a five year old girl also faces such harrasment she doesnt know how to dress up then whats her fault in it
I feel sorry to say that in India theres not a single lady who has not faced harrasments like eve teasing atleast once in her life
Many girls become so much scared that when they walk on roads n
anyone somehow passes close to them they get scared it leaves
such n impact on them
U hv raised so intense topic its awsum keep it up
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
AB MERI LECTURE CLASS KHATM U CAN NOW SIGH IN RELIEF
N MOI CHALI DOC K PAAS CHECKUP KARAANE I THINK I M NOT WELL MOI ITNI SERIOUS KAB SE HO GAYI YAAR
I BADLY NEED A DOC

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