Diwali ke time post kiya tune yeh?!?!?!?
Suprabha, now. You. Are. Dead!! *charging behind you*
Back to the last part (sadly 😭), I am so ****ing glad you wrote it this way!!! Never expected it to be a prank, but I still did feel it was her way to pull Parth's leg, when I read the first part.. Yeah, yeah, I just forgot to mention it! *smiling goofily* But you're still not forgiven for not PMing! Hmmph!
I was so surprised to read that Parth had barged into the girls' room half naked! 🤣 Ahahahhahaha... *evil laugh* *gutter mind switched on* And to add that you made them tumble on the bed! Twice!! 🤣 Damn it, Suprabha!! You know how to capture our hearts and make us crave for more!! Wonderfully written!!
Hehhehe... What Vidushi said was so to the point! A round of applause for both you and Vids to put it in words make that idiot see what he had actually done to both himself and her in the process of tagging whatever he did to her as a mistake and masking his real feeling with the help of his memories of his first girlfriend. Bah! When love comes your way, don't push it away. Because it is one of the most important emotion you experience, and help others experience. There are so many people who aren't as privileged as you *still talking to Parth* to be loved by someone you love..
Embrace it, caress it, nurture it. It doesn't matter if it'll give you pain, but it's a part and parcel of love. To gain something, you have to lose something..
And that is exactly what he was feeling, when he heard about her engagement. He felt he was going to lose her. He wouldn't be able to get her back no matter what.
I loved how you made Vidushi not give in to his sweet words. And the soft smile in the end made me grin at the screen. "Give him a hard time, girl, before you give in!" She already has given in, after all she loves him, but now, because of his mood swings, she really can't trust him. He has to gain her trust. And he can't just make her fall for him (that is gain her trust) in just one night!
Loved it, Suprabha!!! Am gonna kill you when you come online! XP😆
Annie
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 10 years ago