Let me {A Vidarth OS} - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Moony87

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Do I need to say more?..

Originally posted by: Moony87

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Do I need to say more?..

Lol...this is perfect and you need no words so thank u😊

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Hahahahah.. the second I quoted you, only one aasu waala and 5 clapping waala emoticons could be seen! 🤣

And now I see only 3.. 🤣

Originally posted by: --aimy--

"...even though he couldn't feel he could for sure sense Vidushi soothing him"
"...said Parth in a straight and bitter tone by keeping a rock on his heart and trying his damn hard not to break down in front of her and beg her not to leave him alone"
"...he would die before becoming selfish and ask her to stay"

^^This made me 😭
I'm not a cry baby,okay. But this makes me wanna cry. It was just so brilliant. Mind-blowing. And I really loved it. 👏👏

thanks alot aimy ...I m glad I can make a tough nut like u crack so I m glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: Moony87

LOL it took me 3 times to get that formation.. 😆.. Stupid IF... Edit karo post to sab udd jaata hai .. Choo IF.. 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

🤣 🤣 Tsala Spamming karat hum!! 🤣

Originally posted by: Moony87

Heheh jahana Vidarth ki baat hogi hum pahunch jaayenge.. Mehfil jamaane.. 🤣

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Oh my effin' Lord! What was this...!!!!!

I'm so glad that I cam across this wonderful OS of yours, else I would have missed a marvelous piece of work.

But damn! This OS of yours has left me with swollen eyes and tears flowing with an intensity matching that of Niagara falls.

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I wish I could have at least one quote or phrase to describe the magnificence of your work, but I'm afraid I have none. The radiance left me spell-bound...

The angst, the remorse and the utter feeling of dread felt by the two lovers was beautifully penned down. The way you have described their mutual selfless love is praise-worthy.

Precise miniature details that you've added made this OS more appealing and enthralling.

I adore you for the kiss at the end...a perfect way to set them free of their inner turmoil and a certainly perfect way to enhance my guttery thoughts.😆

I thoroughly enjoyed and loved every bit of this OS and I am waiting for your next write-up.

Do write pretty soonish!

Regards

Keya

hey keya...this is shreya...I m so glad u liked my work ...thanks for such along review ...u flatter me too much yaar with your kind words ...if you liked this I m sure u would like my other work on this forum 😊

Hey that was awesome
It feels good to read such a well written piece of work...
Am hoping to read more from you
Prishi