SANDHIR OS : WEARING BANGLES ON YOUR NAME (A/N PG 5 PLZ READ )

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Posted: 10 years ago
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After d challenge randhir somehow broke sanyu's engagement with sameer ( guys ab m nt explaining ki kaise khud hi sochlo agr kisi ko idea aaye to zarur btana )

In front of whole college sanyu's father nd randhir r talking ...sanyu is crying like hell n listening them

K : ye kya ho gya meri bachchi ki puri samaj mai izzat hi nhi rahegi ...pr beta tumne sameer ki sachayi samne lakr meri bachi ki zindagi khrb hone se bacha li

R : are uncle ap muje sharminda kr rhe h ye to mera frz tha

( all this while sanyu ws crying like hell ...rd ws lurking at hr n smirking )

K : pr beta us din engagement mai tumne itna tamasha kyu kia

R : uncle us din to mai pie hua tha na islie ..uncle ji mai josh mai ni tha plzz muje maf kr di jie

K : koi baat ni beta hota h ...beta tumse kuch puchna tha

R : ji uncle puchiye na

K : beta kya tum meri beti se sagai kroge ( all were hell shocked nd sanyu's eyes popped out bt somewhere in hr heart she ws happy too) tum to uske college mai b ho aur use jante b ho plzz beta

R : uncle ye aap kya keh re h

K: plzz beta mana mt krna meri bachchi ki zindagi ka sawaal h

R: ( a little lter ) thik hai uncle ( smirking at sanyu )

AT AGGARWAL MANSION

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K : thik se fool lgao meri beti ki sagai h

IN SANYU'S ROOM

sanyu ws crying continuously ..kaustuki was busy consoling her bt all in vain

S : kaustuki sb khatam ab rd mujse bdla lene k lie muje engeneering b nai krne dega ...muje shadi k baad bohot torcher krega

K : sanyu tu plzz shant ho ja

Meanwhile sanyu's mom came

A : sanyu chl jldi sb tera intezaar kr rhe kha kr ki randhir ji

S : ( sanyu sadly ) ji maa

IN THE ENGAGEMENT HALL

rd ws continuously waiting fr sanyu to come and his wait ws finally over as his angle walked down ...sanyu came n stood beside rd avoiding eye - contact with him

K - R : ye lo beta ring sagai ka muh rat nikla jaa rha h

R : nhi uncle mere paas already ring h ( nd took out d ring dat he had bought to propose sanyu nd slipped into her finger )

Sanyu also made rd wear d ring

D ENGAGEMENT WS OVER

SANYU 's ROOM

S : ( crying ) sb khatam kaustuki sidha fite se torcher hell

K : nhi sanyu tu galat soch rhi h

MEANWHILE THERE WS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR ND RANDHIR CAME INSIDE D ROOM

R : kaustuki if u dont mind can u give me nd sanyu some privacy

K : ( looking at sanyu ) yaa sure ( nd she went away )

Sanyu ws continuously crying she ws nt able to look at rd ..she wanted to run away

R : hmmm to soon to be mrs shekhawat itna kyu to rhi h ..i know randhir singh shekhawat se Hrne ka dukh to hota hi h

S : ( still crying ) r rr aann dd hii rr muje pta h ki tum mujse bohot nafrt krte ho aur krni b chahiye bt plz shadi k baad muje itne b dukh mt dena ki mai she hi na pau

R : apni ring nikalkar muje do

S : kya

R : smjh ni aata apni ring nikalkr muje do

Sanyu took out her ring nd gave hr ring to rd her hands were shaking

Rd took d ring n made sanyu stand ...sanyu ws hell scared

Rd bent on his knees nd held d ring in front of sanyu n said

R : sanyu zindagi mai first time kisi se itna pyaar kia tha ..bohot dukh hua jb pta chla ki usne b muje dhoka de dia ..bt sanyu ek choti si glti ki wajh se mai us pyyaar ko khona nhi chahata ...I LOVE U SANYU ..I LUV U

Sanyu ws too shocked to hear dis nd too numb to react

R : plZ sanyu jawaab dedo my kneees r hurting

Sanyu came to her senses

She also knelt down n tightly hugged rd nd strted crying ...between hr sobs only she said I LUV U TOO RD ..I LUV U ..PLZZ MUJE MAAF KRDO ..PLZZ
RD TIGHTENED D HUG

R : bs meri princess kitna rogi ..roti hue tum achi ni lgti

S playfully hit his chest nd again hugged him in a bone crashing hug

After sometime rd broke d hug nd siad

R : waise sanyu tum keh ri thi na ki mai choodiya pehnkr pure college mai ghumo bt dekho ye to ulta hi ho gya ab choodiya tumhe pehn ni padegi wo b meri naam ki hahahah

S also strted laughing nd hugged him nd said I WILL BE HIGHLY OBLIGED ON WEARING BANGLES FOR U

AB KYA THA DONO KHUSHI KHUSHI FITE CHALE GYE

AUTHOR's note : Guys i know u r hell annoyed wid ne after all i wasted ur time ny making u read dis crap bt guys dis is my first ever os ..trust me i ws so scred to even post it ..plz btao ki meri pehli mehnat ka fal mitha h ya khatta ...plzz like nd comment zaurur krna ..i know its very long islie long comments b plzz nd haa criticism is always welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey smily...good work yr
I like your os...
I know how narvous u r...bcoz same time i am also post my first os..nd am also feel narvous ...
But dont narvos..just express your emotinas...
Keep writing nd smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was so cute!
Bangles of my name. Awww!!!
Randhir is so Lovelyy!!
Poor Sanyukta she thought Randhir is taking revenge. And finally Sanyukta's Dad understood the importance of Randhir Singh Shekhawat. :D

And for the first time it was Hell good!!
Keep Writing and Keep Smiling!!
And continue if possible. Write something as to what happend when they reached FITE, Vardhan Sir etc..
So, in the end It was a good and a cute OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zyra

That was so cute!

Bangles of my name. Awww!!!
Randhir is so Lovelyy!!
Poor Sanyukta she thought Randhir is taking revenge. And finally Sanyukta's Dad understood the importance of Randhir Singh Shekhawat. :D

And for the first time it was Hell good!!
Keep Writing and Keep Smiling!!
And continue if possible. Write something as to what happend when they reached FITE, Vardhan Sir etc..
So, in the end It was a good and a cute OS


Thnq so much dear 😛 Yaa i can think of continuing dis bt right now not hvng time 😲 Bt thnks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

Hey smily...good work yr
I like your os...
I know how narvous u r...bcoz same time i am also post my first os..nd am also feel narvous ...
But dont narvos..just express your emotinas...
Keep writing nd smiling


Thnq so much payal ...i know i ws hell nervous ..acha just give me d link of ur first os nd ur other writings too i want to read dem nd thnks a. Lot 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Likerzz plzz share ur reviews too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kri1

It was cute and sweet!


Thnx..thnx a lot 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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reswa
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Pagal!!! I enjoyed reading this, dumbo!! 🤣 Even though we don't know how Sanyukta's father will react on Sanyukta's engagement breaking, but yeah... I enjoyed reading this! This is definitely all what happens in dreams! XD 🤣 Sadly, I am not sure Sanyukta's father would react this way.. Even if Sameer has some dark secrets and somehow they are unveiled, Mr. Agarwal may still go along with the wedding, just to not let anything taint their 'family reputation' (as he says)! 🤔 He just wants Sanyukta married off, bas!!

Heh... Loved reading this OS! :D
Hope to read more from you!

Annie
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS
Beautifully written
Love the concept
Hate the tv show right now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

reswa

*edited*

Pagal!!! I enjoyed reading this, dumbo!! 🤣 Even though we don't know how Sanyukta's father will react on Sanyukta's engagement breaking, but yeah... I enjoyed reading this! This is definitely all what happens in dreams! XD 🤣 Sadly, I am not sure Sanyukta's father would react this way.. Even if Sameer has some dark secrets and somehow they are unveiled, Mr. Agarwal may still go along with the wedding, just to not let anything taint their 'family reputation' (as he says)! 🤔 He just wants Sanyukta married off, bas!!

Heh... Loved reading this OS! :D
Hope to read more from you!

Annie


I think somewhat u r right ...god knows wat d writers have in store for us ...bt i think all is gonna be well soon..nd ya thanks fr such a luvly comment dear😛

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